ISHRA TS: Chahoon main ya na (updated Pg 8)

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

lovely end...

thanks for the pm buddy

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bluebell11

@bluebell11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Umm... i just had to point this out..

a hen's party and a bachelorette party are the same thing..as in they're both meant for women!

So ashok's party would be a bachelor party!!

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Soo nice n soo lovely..plss write more..dont stop it here..atleast one more update...plsss

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: bluebell11
Umm... i just had to point this out..
a hen's party and a bachelorette party are the same thing..as in they're both meant for women!
So ashok's party would be a bachelor party!!

Thanks for pointing out the error !!! Just corrected it .. Must have slipped out of my head totally and was not proof read

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: avni_19
Cute update! Emotional tooo... loved it! Loved ishra's romantic kiss!

Do write moreee!

Thank you soo much .. I just love the way you comment on all of my updates !!! They mean a lot to me ... Sure will write more and you too after your exams !!

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
lovely end...
thanks for the pm buddy

Thanks and your most welcome .. No formalities ...

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
Soo nice n soo lovely..plss write more..dont stop it here..atleast one more update...plsss

Awww, thanks for loving my update so much .. It was meant to be a two shot .. I was almost going to make it three parts today and include Ishra scenes but then felt like I was exceeding the limit so deleted nearly 500 words ...