ISHRA TS: Chahoon main ya na (updated Pg 8)

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This is a two shot. This is based on the current track rather the Shagun's hen party track.Do let me know how you all feel about this. Whether I should write the second part or not. I do not know whether it is worth spamming your inboxes, but still Spamming them. Thank you


TS: Chahoon main ya na

Ishitha
was getting ready in the white and pink saree and all of a sudden
started feeling conscious after she felt him staring at her. She really
could not get ready and started making silly mistakes in her dressing.
The more he inched towards her more she failed. At one point of time he
was standing right behind her with his chin kind of resting on her
shoulders and admiring her reflection on the mirror. She started to feel
shy and her cheeks started burn and looked extra red with all the make
up on her face.

Ishitha: R...R.. Raman, Why are you
staring at me ? Am I looking fine ? It is a huge social gathering and
all high profile women will be gathered

Raman: Hmmm and he smiled looking at her, making her more nervous

She
started looking at herself carefully in the mirror, adjusting her make
up and setting her saree which was making her look gorgeous as well as
modest. She would have felt good had he taunted her looks or even spoke
something out of context but his smile these days has been creating
havoc in her body and today was no different.

Raman:
Shhh.. Ishitha calm down, you look nice.. Sachme bahut khoobsoorat
lagrahi ho. Sach boldo, Iss party sirf ladkiyon ki party na ? I really
have no heart to send you out all alone even out of this room .. Jaana
zaroori hai kya ?

Ishitha: Tumhe kya hogaya aaj kal ? Am I looking so bad .. Mazaak mat udaana pls.

Raman: Hadd hai .. I am complementing you

Ishitha:
Blushes more, I am confused what to wear and starts moving towards the
wardrobe and takes out few jewellery sets and stares at them in
confusion and looks at him for his suggestion. He looks at a pair of
earrings which looks grand and elegant at the same time and helps her
wear them. He takes great care while helping her out and makes sure that
he does not hurt her.

He again starts admiring her and
she turns to leave the room. She stopped when she felt his hands on her
wrist refusing to let her go. He guided her towards to the couch and
both sat next to each other but he refused to leave her hand all while.
He held on to both her hands tightly

Raman: Are you sure
you want to attend this party ? I mean, after all that had happened
during her sangeet. My son had defamed you, Shagun and Ashok have never
wanted any kind of good to happen with you. Now along with Suraj and
Param, I want you to think once more. I never want anyone to speak or
think bad about my wife.

Ishitha: Raman, these words are
more than enough for me. These words have given me a lot of strength. My
husband who once upon a time saw me just as his daughter's mother then
as a friend is now thinking about his wife which is me. He does not want
even his life which is his son to think bad about me. Tell me what can
really go wrong. Life is never fair Raman it is both colorful and grey.
Whatever happened the other day was not from the mouth of a 12 year
world but from the mouth of someone else. You and Ruhi are there for me,
I will want nothing more.

Raman: I really do not feel good
about this. Lekin tum ho Jhansi Rani and tum apni kyal rakh sakthi ho.
At any point of time if you do not feel comfortable, either walk out of
the party or just give me a call. I will be there and he tightens his
grip on her hands.

She arrives at the party hall but her
thoughts are occupied only by Raman. The love and care that his eyes
emit towards her have been way too overwhelming and thinking about
something else other than him has become difficult for her. She asks the
ushers about Shagun's hen party but enters in to Ashok's bachelor
party by mistake. It was only after a couple of minutes she realizes
that she is in the wrong party and tries to make her way out as soon as
possible. While she was hurrying out, Param notices her first and blocks
her way.

Param: Ishitha Ji, Your inside a bachelor
party and in this kind of dressing, planning to kill all of us ? She
tries to avoid him even without answering to his questions and starts
walking forward. He starts whistling and few others join him and start
passing comments.

Ishitha (ST): I just need to walk
out from here somehow. Just then she looks at her phone flashing "Ravan
Kumar" name and immediately receives the call. He hears the background noise but does not hear her voice.

Ishitha
Ishitha ... Ishitha, can you hear me ? Is everything alright ? Answer
me, Dammit.. I am coming right now and hangs the call.

It
was then both Ashok and Suraj enter the party. Both move towards the
gathering near the entrance only to find Ishitha standing amongst a
group of men.

Ashok: Ishitha Raman Bhalla all alone.. Where are your guards ? No Abhimanyu or Raman today ?
Anyways you have entered the right place, lets all of us have some fun.
Consider this as the gift your giving for my wedding with Shagun ? What
say Suraj ?

Ishitha: Learn to respect all of you. I am
standing here alone and all you are upto is Badtameez. She was
controlling her tears badly and tried hiding the fear in her eyes. All
she hoped was someone to come and rescue her. The Jhansi Rani in her was
failing miserably. She slowly started moving back. In a flash, she
turned herself away from all of them and rushed to the entrance only to
bang herself against another men. She was kinda afraid to even look who
the person was but once his hands went around her she did not have any
doubt where she had landed.

All had moved back after
seeing Raman Bhalla, especially Param. He instead of having a word with
them was more worried about his lady who was looking scared.
Ishitha, look at me nothing more to worry I am here. I won't let anything happen to you. All these words made her feel secure
but her eyes started to water the minute he spoke. He rubbed her back
soothingly and walked her to the car. He made her feel comfortable in
the car and started to drive the car.

To be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please do continue..

the conversation between raman and ishita is very good..how we miss those (like bench talks)
Thanks for the PM
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Thanx for d pm
nice start awww Raman is so caring
update soon
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nice start plss continue... very eager to kno wat ll happen nxt... cont soon dear...
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Wow..excellent start
pls cont soon
thanks for the pm buddy😊

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Thanx for d pm
nice start pls do continue.
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Awesome.. loved it.. plz continue soon.. n thnx for the pm..!!
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very nice ts pls pls 😉pls continue soon
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Very beautifull. Please do continue...
Loved the talks of Raman and Ishita.
Yeh Param aur Ashok-Suraj kisidin mere haatho se pitenge,sacchi mein..
Tharki log.. Huh...
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wow that was an awsumm one..on the upcoming scenes..!!
But one thing should have happened..!! Raman should have gone and atleast have gave a few slaps nd spme of his dosage of punches to those three idiots..!! I so hate them after watching the shoot scenes..!! But ur ts helped me with my curosity to watch this upcoming episode now..!!
Plz dont lead it to any separation..!! m already feeling low thinking about it..!!
Enough of my blabbering..hehhe..!! but it was fab..!! loved it..!!
plz continue soon..!! m so eager to know further..:D :D

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