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Posted: 10 years ago
Ruchiii...🤗 le do update ke liye ikattha laammmba comment...😃 Ek aur baar bura hain bola na. aake maroongi mein!😃
Love the battle of wits between Ishita and Raman...😛 Sparks fly.. such an apt title Ruchi...!!😳

Round 2.. and it gets even better..and putthar has his way...I have told you i have a soft corner for putthar... I am loving it!

Some dialogues which made me go LOL after imagining them...
Are you a sadist?!
Then are you actually so dumb or pretending to be ?
I was pretty much brainy but Ms.Iyer ruined me.

"Raman ! The Raman Kumar Bhalla who doesn't let a thing move without his permission, is now allowing a whirlwind without hesitation ? I am guessing too much or you care to clear my doubts." Raman smiled, a rare thing which happens in the office - A storm was coming.. disrupt him it would... but would the calm after the storm would be beautiful I would like to think!😳😳

Mihir.. another favourite character of mine.. i am glad he makes an appearance in this SS...😳

I loved the conversation between Ishita and her dad... Sixth sense - they bank on this so much much...! Reminded me of a conversation with my dad!!😛

Round 3.. and putthar still at it...tunnel vision i see...😆😆

The one-liners Ruchi.. they keep coming .. and feel so much a part of the narrative.. can't help but imagine the scene and laugh!😛😃
Go and plunge in that bowl of sambhar
Oh little kindergarten kid !
Just pray I don't use it on you.

And Shagun makes an entrance .. and Ishita's thoughts about Subbu... no Raman-Shagun past in this but Ishita has a past.. does Raman have one as well?...interesting...! I am waiting for the next update.. pleej to update soon!!😳

The way you write is very easy to read and the simple language and style of your writing is very easy to connect to... aur likthi rahe .. aur main comment karti rahoongi😛😛😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
When should we expect the next update Ruchi? Pl pl pl update na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its beautiful yrrr...loved their dialogs
and shagun...
well i tjink shagun ko dikhane ke liye ishita will come closer to raman
thnks 4 pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swathibalan

I dont know what to say and where to start.
Will try to put it delicately..
Tu na sahi thi - Yeh na - accha nahin tha😕
I had to read 3-4 times phir bhi flow samajh nahi aaya mujhe..
Uff.. yeh kya pada maine.. Aisa laga mujhe
Heart attack de de mujhe 😆
******
Accha. now that I have told you what you wanted to listen

Read what I have to say😛
I just loved it.. It was so funny, esp their constant fight
all the one liners - even Ishitas were so funny and I was constantly laughing🤣
THe whole convo is very natural and not at all filmy
Woman power ! I so want Ishita to retort back everytime but my love for Puttar overpowers sometimes😆
but at the same time, the 2 moms are so damn filmy.. POLAR opposites..*ahem*🤣🤣
hahaha ! I Ejjjactly got it 😆
As you made Raman rightly say, "aapne ghatiyaa serial dekhna band karo"😆
har ghar ki kahaani..
Amma as usual on her own tangent..🤣
Amma is one character which amazes me with the amount of positivity 😉
But still in all this I loved how Raman could read her eyes and her mind☺️
and I just loved the bond between appa and Ishita..beautiful. A Dad daughter bond is so special😳

And Shaggys entry and the twist- baap re - I was shocked like in serials.😲😲😲 teen baar face close up.. 😲I love the expression !! 😳
Ab jaldi se next post kar..I am not able to handle the twist..mujhe jaanna hai whats the majra..


🤗
You know how much positive I was for this update 😆😆.. First few lines where like splash of cold water but later .. awww.. Huggg !
Honestly I suck at romance, so I conveniently put bickering into the update 😉
Shaggy ! Well wait for the next one to come , 😃😃
Thank You so much for these kind words
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃😃😃

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res 😛

Doc you are silly, really silly...take some break between birthing babies - of other people not your own 🤣 if you think this is crap I can bet my money you have been in the labor room one time too many this week and havent had enough sleep because of those babies which would make your sleep-depraved brain think this is crap because it is NOT!

😆😆 Advice taken ! Posted in ortho now
Oh I am loving this battle of wills and wits between IshRa here can actually see them you know...him being this infuriating smartass and her actually wishing she could kill him with her bare hands if given a chance to do so 🤣
Awww.. that means a lot! Yeah .. its pretty upsetting that they havent killed each other yet 😆😆

Hell you have even got melodramatic FILMY Toshi aunty who would make Nirupa Roy and Kirron Kher proud and put them to blush all at the same time ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!🤣🤣


LMFAO at him saying stop watching so many shows - have used that line once or twice on mom too 🤣🤣
I used the dialogue on Mom the same day, so had to include in 😳😳How Typically correct !😆
And 😲 didnt see this coming you have Shagun here and she is what Subu' wife 😲😲😲 like KYA, KYA, KYA
😃 Winner Moment !!! 😆😆
update soon doc I so wanna see where you are taking this
Yup surely Aani !
Thank You so much 🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ohgod!

Pehle tho A HUGE sorry for having missed reading this so long!😒

Awww,.,. Devaraniji ! It means a lot that you commented here 😳
But having said that, aaj shuru se padke im feeling so good!! and so im gonna comment on all 3 together here 😳 so bear with me pleej.. irrespective of what happened in the show and knowing where this will all lead to, i loved everything about this!! The way you started it! the way Raman is being in character, Ishita's fiery attitude (not to miss her one-liners here for a change), the parents setting it all up.. you set the balls rolling for one helluva story ahead 😳👏👏
I love reading !! Tu pura page likhe dena fir bhi bore nai hongi 😆 Yup ! Its confused in itself only. Is there parents the only jest for marriage ? or They themselves want this to happen ? 😕😕
Filhaal mein khud confuse hoon iss cheez pe 😆
And Mihir ka intro! Ahem.. 😳 Yaar yahaan tho mein floor hogayi (sachhi wala floored not tera wala 😆) I have loved how Mihir has been the only one to understand even what Raman doesn't say! And hence, his intro where he notices the change in Raman was just so awww
I love Mihir too 😳
Aur is bar Shagun ka intro!! 😲 And so differently refreshing!! But the moment i liked more was Ishu's father stifling a laugh seeing them together!! Arent this dad-daughter too cute??? 😳👍🏼
Shagun ! Well wait and watch 😃
Aur ab actual reaction:

Woah Ruchi!!! 👏 pata hai we've almost always spoken only gutter and suraj and hence reading this got me so excited and happy! Its like i've known a new side of you and its so awww!!😳You write with a certain style which includes a mix of mischief, love and maturity and mein tho floored ho gayi re😳😳 devrani chod mein tho teri pankha ban gayi hoon! bachke rahiyo! 😆

PS: Jaldi firse likhna!! Warna get ready to be stalked! 😉
Thank You so much Bhu ! 🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mandu

The two ASSes together??

Subbu and shagun??


Wait and Watch 😉


Thank You 😃

Originally posted by: remya1990

Nice and Lovely update Ruchi.

Portrayal of emotions are brilliant. The hatred, the irritation, the curiosity, the sensitivity all leading to love are well depicted. Loved reading it.
Do update soon...


Thank You remya for these kind word 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Thanks Ruchi for PM. It was fun update light talk and small fighting keep going on. It is nice that they never stop give back for both of them argument.will wait for next update. Have a good weekend dear.🤗


Thank You ! Glad you liked it😃
Same to you dear 🤗

Originally posted by: zola007

lovely updates !

so they don't want to get married and are doing so for their parents !
Mihir 😆
love how they are always arguing 😆
are shagun subbu together ? 😕
Thx for pm


Actually kinda confused. They wont agree if they dont want themselves but do they really want it themselves ? 😕😆
A bit of twist thought of introducing 😆
Thank You for dropping by and Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

I was sooo engrossed the whole time. Its awesome. Loved it. The humour was amazing. Waiting for next part. U always leave it with a climax. After wedding sparks fly kaise honge ya before wedding? 😳 This anticipation is killing me.😳


Thank You so much ! Yes .. sparks have just begin😃
I love cliffhangers 😆
Will updte soon

Originally posted by: shavi2311

wow...so ishra r marying fr paretns...

nd dis shagun...nw wht she is doing...???
i lik ishra nik jhok...
lovd it...ishra nd their exprsn...raman's trdemark smle...
suprb updte...


Thank You Shavi !
Shagun..well she has a bit role to play but nothing to worry😳
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
this two don't know BT other can see their gone b a best couple n happily married
I love their nokjhok


Thank You Prachi .
Yes they are surely gonna be 😃


Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

I had almost forgotten about this story, I had to read the whole thing again and it was a lot of fun! Don't know how Raman and Ishita didn't kill themselves yet I love how they give back to each other all the time, sparks are flying high for sure.

Excited to know more how their relation develops.


I am so sorry for delaying it so much. Even I am surprised at this 😆
Thank You ! Glad you liked it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arrowfan

Beautiful update... Loved the humor, Ishra's emotions...
Y the cliffhanger???
Do update soon...
Thanks for the PM...


Thank You ! Well I love cliffhangers 😆
Will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: momb24

Fantastic story,very well written 👏
looking forward to more 😊


Thank You. Glad you liked it 😃


Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

ugh shagun yaha bhi 🤢
i'm loving the back and forth between ishra- the sparks really do fly when they meet 😃
continue soon


Yes ! shagun yahan bhi hai 😆
Thank You so much rutu. 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice...Interesting..😊


Thank You 😊

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