Manwa lage - Ishra OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: sow2428

WOW ! It was so beautiful.Ishita's emotions and insecurities were beautifully penned.You are a great writer.👏

Originally posted by: Hsp.canada

That was just beautiful... How we viewers wish that something like this happens on the TV as well.

You weaved the story and emotions so well. Great job.

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Awww,,..it was such a cute os di..!!

And don't say it bad..!! it was just awsumm...and above our expectations..!!! Whatever u write have its own essence..!!

And i really loved it..!!

It was just perfectly potrayed ...this confession was such a cute n perfect one..!!! too good..:D :D

Originally posted by: peace..

hey ur welcome ankita..actually i was waiting for smbody to write on d scene coming up,n den i found urs here..so quickly read it! 😊 good job again..

Originally posted by: smrithyrajan402

beautifulll!!!! no words to express!!! feeling sad for ishu... after confession there will be a stage wen ishu really wants to be a mother!!! which woman doesnt want to be one?

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Amazing no words beautifully written loved how u showed Ishita's insecurities and a really cute end

Originally posted by: avni_19

hahahahhahahha!! atta maaji sataki!!!😆😆😆

thats the whole point.. wtever u expect u dont get and wt u dont expect, u get!!! Social msg! 😉

Mujhe bahut maaza aya yeh OS padhke!😳

Originally posted by: arunabhi

lovely OS this one. The way Ishu was trying to express her feelings and all of a sudden the officials entry was like what we can expect from the show. When it comes to Adi and Ishitha's relation you explain it really well. This was another proof to it.

Poor Ishu, tried covering up her feelings after returning home thinking about her infertility and the way Raman made her feel better about the whole thing was beautiful. These two have been expressing their emotions felt for each other so well even without confessing. Loved the way you have taken the whole OS

I do not know why you have the feeling that you have not been writing well recently. I am loving every single update of yours. Please do not bother about spamming and all that. Even if you feel you do not want to spam other's inbox your more than welcomed to spam my inbox with all your works. Love ya ..

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

This is written so well you spam my inbox with your write up...anytime

anjali

Originally posted by: rutu83

lovely os
why did you say it was bad?
if only it would happen this soon in the show- they're going to stretch it like chewing gum, i just know it :(
write more yaar- this is really good