Of Tears and Separation! (OS) - Page 2

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Res. Why can't I never be the first one? Seriously!!!!!

# edit 1

Bwaah. Hot. Hot. Hot. Do you see me burning? I'm on fire woman. Fire of emotions, all thanks to the bloody you. *superwoman style*

You totally no cool. Here I am all sadistic and there you had to go and come with a totally amazing OS. THE KIND I GO CRAY FOR!!!!!!! Wait, ignore the caps. This is what happens when you give a student struggling to study at 3am a dose of her favourite couple to their hottest and fluffiest mess.

I plan on this essay.

Pehli bar. For pehli baar I went haai on Mani. No jokings. All serious wa.

Haye meri Ruhi and mera puttar is always the chuha falling into all kinds of traps. Honestly, at times I just feel like taking Raman and Ishita and smashing them together.

Okay what the f**k am I even on about. You've got me hyper woman. Take responsibility

Or you will be exterminated *Dalek style*.

Too many references I know.

But you had to perfectly define Ishita, Raman and the turmoil they face due to our Puttar's want to be mahan like his wife. #nooffense

And the ending kiss was haaayeee. Hot and happening Ish. Imagine someone grabbing you by your hair and placing his lips over yours # dead.

Okay longest comment till date on any bloody Fiction.. Didn't want to leave you hanging out dry. So here we go.

In all honest and sty and seriously I will read it all over again tomorrow and give you a "sincere comment and not mention I fangled when I saw your comment on my fanfiction. #forreal

I've been doing that alot lately, fangirling.

(fun fact: Spellchecker "checked" fangirling to fingering several times. So scandalised.)

I have a potty mouth in this comment. I sound so uncultured that it's insulting. Ugh. Whatever. Will Edit tomorrow. And I promise I am much saner than this.

And I am officially having a sweet and cordial mental affair with KP . Told you.

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

...and that was a comment of one kind, that I had never come across, nonetheless it made me happy!😆

I am happy that you liked this piece, I actually didn't know how to take this, I mean how any one would take this as we have no base of this track, yeah but only the promo, but I felt this was not enough so this was an early writing...

Anyways...Can I res this post to comment after really re-reading your comment?😉😛

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Brilliantly written

Originally posted by: sulochana90

⭐️

Its simply superb

amazing

beautifully written 👏

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

res

edited

Brilliantly written 👏👏

Again Bala and Mani to the rescue...

you have described Raman's anguish ans Ishita's Heart brilliantly..no words to express it 😊

In the end as Ishita forgives and forget so fast ...that is Ishita how she is 😊

and seriously Bhalla's and Iyers please unka pichha chod do 😉

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

I think I am going to make do with this until the sad so called separation track plays out...

LOVED IT!!

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Awesome OS, but I still don't want to go so many episodes without proper IshRa scenes, of they do actually do a separation track they better make every episode IshRa centric and not give us all that other crap!

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love it!👏👏 So good. I really hope that the families [and Mani.. i guess😛] come together to help Raman see the error of his decision and bring ISHRARU back where they belong- together.😉

And please, please don't let it last too long! My poor heart is too invested in these characters.😭

As for you sprinkling of Tamil in the story- yay!👏 I appreciate the effort and the placement!😊 Good on you for trying, it certainly is a beautiful language and I love that it is being promoted in some way on YHM!😆

Hope to read more from you during the troubling times ahead.. i need my fave FF writers to keep me sane!😕