IshRa: Capture My Heart - Second Snapshot, Page 4 || 31 March, 11PM

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

loved it! i absolutely loved it!
this is actually one of my fav formats but not used on IF much :(
brilliantly written- the only one that didn't fit (for me) was when ishita says you're just ruhi's father and i don't care. 😕 care to explain the thoughts behind that one?

Quote

ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I explained how much I loved this part in detail in Meherbaan already, so I will just say I loved it once again here to keep it short. 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

hemanshi

@hemanshi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This is absolutely wonderful..and honestly it completely did justice to Rajji's OS. I have read that one multiple times and it sort of became my go to piece whenever i came on the forum. And I think this is the perfect "spin off" or continuation to it...

And i loved the the fact that you went back and forth..Because you know what, the significance of any moment is never realized when you are living in that moment. Its in the future that you realize how important or crucial that certain moment was to your present existence and you showed just that!

And then with their random moments thrown in..Seriously the writers in this forum specifically have gift..And i have loved a lot of shows before, i have read through a lot of forums but never have I loved the OS/SS's that I have read here as much! :)

It inspires me to think more, explore the characters more beyond what's show on tv, explore my thoughts and feelings more. And most of all, all your works - you, rajji, payal, doc, G, Oftheheart..I am inspired to be a better writer because of you guys..

:) loooking forward to more stories from you..Once again..Beautiful!

Quote

Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

...because this is so nice it deserves to be commented on twice! 😛

What can I say that I haven't said already?

"Fate. Meeting Ishita was fate, marrying her was choice but falling in love with her was beyond his control. "---- THIS. This is ISHRA!👏

Rajji- I think I've made it pretty clear how much iurrrve you and your OS. Seriously one of the best, most memorable, most realistic OSes I've read here. And it's different from your RR pieces- how can you all be so multi talented? It's not FAIR! I can barely identity one talent for myself! *Princess Ru pout*

Payal- your contribution is amazing and really helps add to the feel of the story. I don't know how you find such amazingly suitable quotes for each circumstance!

This works on so many levels- as a OS, as an addition to Rajji's and of course within Mehebaan. I am just amazed at how seamless it looks, it shows how well you work together and how much work it must have been, terrific job ladies!

As for this piece and your work Kiara hmmm... let me use the 'L' word that the whole world seems to make so difficult for RKB to say to his JKR to comment on this.

Love how you sneaked in the Abhi connection... did you think I didn't notice?😉
Love that she's wearing blue.
Love that the Raavan/Ram connections started immediately.
Love the song and that their dancing started at that meeting... and the video recording too!😃
Looove RKB's answer to Nalini... seriously! What an honest, beautiful, 'non confession -confession' all tied within a lovely verbal slap- L.O.V.E. it!
And finally, the explanation of Ru's name...

And you did all this while studying as well? Take a bow!👏👏👏

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

Quote

lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome superb fantastic beautiful."You are my wife."these 4words expressed strongest of emotion for me.I felt his fear,his vulnerability,his pleading,his assertion that she is his wife all at the same time through these words but why did she say "she doesn't care",'he is only ruhi's father' at the first place????was it just uttered in fit of anger or she really meant it? Bit confused though I read further believing the former possibility.

Quote

Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rutu83
loved it! i absolutely loved it!
this is actually one of my fav formats but not used on IF much :(
brilliantly written- the only one that didn't fit (for me) was when ishita says you're just ruhi's father and i don't care. care to explain the thoughts behind that one?

THE REPLY STARTS HERE. BECAUSE IF IS ACTING WIERD AND QUOTE ISN'T WORKING. UGH.

I haven't used this format ever. So proud to have done it right, if it was a format and if I did it right. Thank you.

To be bluntly honest, I missed that part and forgot to edit it out.

As I've mentioned earlier (or forgotten to, idk) this shot is Chapter 16 of Meherbaan. So when I decided to post it here (with Rajji's due permission, cause she is Bae) I edited out everything - almost- that had linkage to Meherbaan. Practically. Subbu. The dance scenes. Other characters and Meherbaan-ish interactions. And I missed this bit.

If you aren't aware of the premise of Meherbaan, here it goes (the background related to the scene that you want clarification to). Meherbaan alternates tracks after the accident track, where Ishita who has had her heart broken yet again has had enough and IshRa decide that they better off as close friends rather than strangers or lovers from that moment onwards (the Shagun fiasco), and as time times though they they come love each other it's their insecurity and other individual issues that keeps them apart. They stand together as a couple, as best friends as companions and everything in between but fail to come together as lovers. As Meherbaan explores their journey towards falling for each other and getting over that aspect it also explores Ishita's past - namely Subbu and all his trolls.

How do I explain this? The whole Aditya scene was Raman's insecurity getting to him. Or his demons getting to him. Or those moments that switched tracks from what was to be starting over to this sense of limbo where they stand now, where they're not together and neither are they apart.

I'm terrible at explaining. Hope it made some sense.

Thank you for taking a leap of faith and reading this one. Lol. ;)

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

Quote

Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lourel24
Awesome superb fantastic beautiful."You are my wife."these 4words expressed strongest of emotion for me.I felt his fear,his vulnerability,his pleading,his assertion that she is his wife all at the same time through these words but why did she say "she doesn't care",'he is only ruhi's father' at the first place????was it just uttered in fit of anger or she really meant it? Bit confused though I read further believing the former possibility.

Reasoning: Please read the reply as I get back to you. Xx

Quote

Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vidpz
Update sooon dear! U write many stories but only update 1/2 parts...have 2 waiting so long!

Vid,

Hey. Sorry, for letting you down. My apologies. I have mentioned it in my index or on Don't Kiss And Tell that I have only three active stories for now due to exams, namel - Meherbaan, Don't Kiss And Tell and Break You Hard (I was gonna write Bad and then remember Rajji 😆) and this os thread. My apologies.

Meherbaan is frequently updated.

Quote

Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I explained how much I loved this part in detail in Meherbaan already, so I will just say I loved it once again here to keep it short.

I know. And thank you for being so amazingly awesome. Bas.

Quote

rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

THE REPLY STARTS HERE. BECAUSE IF IS ACTING WIERD AND QUOTE ISN'T WORKING. UGH.
I haven't used this format ever. So proud to have done it right, if it was a format and if I did it right. Thank you.

To be bluntly honest, I missed that part and forgot to edit it out.

As I've mentioned earlier (or forgotten to, idk) this shot is Chapter 16 of Meherbaan. So when I decided to post it here (with Rajji's due permission, cause she is Bae) I edited out everything - almost- that had linkage to Meherbaan. Practically. Subbu. The dance scenes. Other characters and Meherbaan-ish interactions. And I missed this bit.

If you aren't aware of the premise of Meherbaan, here it goes (the background related to the scene that you want clarification to). Meherbaan alternates tracks after the accident track, where Ishita who has had her heart broken yet again has had enough and IshRa decide that they better off as close friends rather than strangers or lovers from that moment onwards (the Shagun fiasco), and as time times though they they come love each other it's their insecurity and other individual issues that keeps them apart. They stand together as a couple, as best friends as companions and everything in between but fail to come together as lovers. As Meherbaan explores their journey towards falling for each other and getting over that aspect it also explores Ishita's past - namely Subbu and all his trolls.

How do I explain this? The whole Aditya scene was Raman's insecurity getting to him. Or his demons getting to him. Or those moments that switched tracks from what was to be starting over to this sense of limbo where they stand now, where they're not together and neither are they apart.

I'm terrible at explaining. Hope it made some sense.

Thank you for taking a leap of faith and reading this one. Lol. ;)

yes - it is a format(i've been reading fanfiction for too long- my own addiction 😳) and you did a fabulous job! hope you continue using it 😉
ohhh - meherbaan related- makes sense now. thanks for the explanation 😊

Edited by rutu83 - 10 years ago