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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Oh WOW.. another beautiful piece of writing from you.. My addiction to this is increasing with every post. Just Amazing girl. Take a bow!!!👏

You brought out their characteristics beautifully and the last line about the dress was a clever touch and wonderful ending 😳


Thanks so much you make me 😳 With your compliments thanks again 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: parjay

It was lovely sweetheart. .. hw can ur simplest of words appear piece of marvelous creation.. im reacting lik a teen bt u really dnt knw wat dese writtings of urs does to me... thanks a tonn dear... dey make me keep dreaming. .. 👏


Thanks so so so much!!!! Dreams pe koyi tax nahi and koyi pabandi nahi dream on! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i read it again... hehee... aare write another yaar... may be BTS abt today's epi?😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: paru_rox

This was so cute especially his concern 😃. And the last part was just so 😳

PS - Could we have one on what might have transpired behind the shooting of the sexy dance she did for her reel husband? You would write it beautifully.


Thanks so much 😊

Hmmm on the idea. Don't you think it shall get tad repetitive! Dealt with it sort of in this one na!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajji-cutest



"Rolex kabhi tho istamaal karo, she smiles
Abb tak tho adat ho Jani chahiye he says with a straight face
Kaise ho aap? She shakes her head
Mujhe kya hua? Main tho theek hun! Tum kaise ho, why don't you buy some clothes? Yeh lo, ye walla"


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"It's part of the job na, theek hai
You do it well, abb tho you can protect me also, he smiles
She laughs, bar bar if I use that excuse kal press bolega you have bladder problems
He laughs back, good na, thode din ke liye they will stop about your clothes
She smiles a small smile, kitna bura dress thaa na..
He stares at her, softly says, agar meri biwi ne pehna hota, main do second mai nikaal detaa.
They stare, the car honks, they turn to their windows and wonder."





Cutie you are hugs to you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thx so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalz_123

i read it again... hehee... aare write another yaar... may be BTS abt today's epi?😉


Hahahah!! Thx for reading and commenting again that is really encouraging. I need to think of one have something brewing I think I shall post tomorrow maybe!

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