HE hates the press!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Beautifully written

Thank you 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Hima-
Loved it! Thanks for these beautiful bytes.. really makes me smile😊

Your comment made me smile 😊

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Paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

This was so cute especially his concern 😃. And the last part was just so 😳

PS - Could we have one on what might have transpired behind the shooting of the sexy dance she did for her reel husband? You would write it beautifully.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: felciya
Beautifully Written. Their understanding level, taking care of each other in the particular situation looked real. The last line 😆Waiting for your next update.

Thanks so much 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: shalz_123
i read it twice... u know i always loved them... but ur stories make me love THEM more... n I wonder...
PS: I hope u get y there is a them n THEM...

sigh... till next time..

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What a sweet comment - thanks so much

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: shalz_123
i read it twice... u know i always loved them... but ur stories make me love THEM more... n I wonder...
PS: I hope u get y there is a them n THEM...

sigh... till next time..

😆😉😉

Such a sweet comment thanks so much for it

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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"Rolex kabhi tho istamaal karo, she smiles

Abb tak tho adat ho Jani chahiye he says with a straight face

Kaise ho aap? She shakes her head

Mujhe kya hua? Main tho theek hun! Tum kaise ho, why don't you buy some clothes? Yeh lo, ye walla"

and

"It's part of the job na, theek hai

You do it well, abb tho you can protect me also, he smiles

She laughs, bar bar if I use that excuse kal press bolega you have bladder problems

He laughs back, good na, thode din ke liye they will stop about your clothes

She smiles a small smile, kitna bura dress thaa na..

He stares at her, softly says, agar meri biwi ne pehna hota, main do second mai nikaal detaa.

They stare, the car honks, they turn to their windows and wonder."

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sub_rosa
Very nicely conceived and written!

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You dare not hold back the next time I write something 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bluetaurean
Sigh!!!! You nail it every single time .oh man the last dialogue .typical wicked and naughty him. please keep continuing.and thanks a ton for the p.m

How could I not PM - pls keep yen comments coming very encouraging!!! Thanks 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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