First of all sorry for the delay, yesterday I had a quite busy day and also I was out of words to comment on the last part of this story. Somehow I'm finding it difficult to comment.
Never have I enjoyed the climax as much as in this story. I've realised you keep things simple, discomplicated and without the unecessary drama which is really one of the best things of your writing. You get straight to the point. That being said Raman-Ishita's conversation was really enjoyable to read.
Raman is such a chuppa rustam. He contacted Mr. Iyer without informing Ishita, I felt like hugging him here. He truly is a Mr. Perfect, a Prince Charming for any girl.
Everytime I was coming near to the end I used to go back and re-read the whole thing from the beginning but this couldn't go on forever, isn't it? I want more, more and more.
Is it too much to ask for a last part, a part B of this? With only Raman-Ishita-Ruhi in it? Please?!
A fantabulous story from a fine writer!👏
Edited by -Srishty- - 10 years ago
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