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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Yep. Mentally sequencing.

*kdrama

I know right I should totally ask Ekta to hire me as a creative. Totally. Stop out and watch my favourite couple and stories come alive on tv. # hopes

I will, tomorrow. I hope I get my phone back.

Okay.

There are two routes that I am stuck on - a) take a route to change Ishita's beliefs and b) I could totally have Raman make out with Ishita only to be witnessed by Subbu if not others and reinforce Ishita's beliefs that he was letting her "use him" to show off her perfect relationship.

I don't even know what I don't know. And I'm killing it for you.n I should stop.

Take route b and eventually route a will be tackled.

Go for it. I would love Raman to help her in portraying the prefect r/s.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

I am so adding kamasutra to the FF. I am jumping around just thinking about it #sonothotandbothered

And since it was originally a one shot I will add it to my scene collection.

Damn, woman I live you.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Awesome awesome update...👏👏

You are a fabulous writer...

I read all your stories and never miss any...

The way you handle each story is brilliant...👏👏

Waiting for next update...

Please pm me...

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: VENBA
Awesome awesome update...👏👏
You are a fabulous writer...
I read all your stories and never miss any...
The way you handle each story is brilliant...👏👏
Waiting for next update...
Please pm me...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my other fiction too-

I'm the same person who doesn't send pm, kindly bookmark it.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
I am so adding kamasutra to the FF. I am jumping around just thinking about it #sonothotandbothered

And since it was originally a one shot I will add it to my scene collection.

Damn, woman I live you.

Kiara, you better update soon. Your ideas are giving me ideas and I don't want my mind to go crazy just by thinking of your fiction so update soon.

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Finally ! Res

Edited !

Worth a wait !
A progress well shown. I honestly had a broad smile while reading it and almost had a chuckle at the punch. Well deserved !
Ok, so does Mr.Iyer knows about Raman's past or was it just a passing remark ?
One thing more yaar - Will ishita ever come to know that Raman was the same Bookstore guy ?

But ol in ol - A Great Read :)

Edited by Let-It-Go - 10 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

The update is unusually early. Normally it's after 1 am. Today 10:30 pm only update.

Okay.

I've been dying to say this - your FF is an unexpected bundle of joy. And just like the kiss they shared. Abrupt. Enchanting. Immortal. It just draws you in.

I loved the this bit the once upon a time reminded me of The Originals season 2 promo which begins with Rebecca narrating a bad time story version of Klaus and the Michaelsons.

The father, Mr. Iyer. Why do I feel he knows what Ishita has gotten herself into. The darker side to Raman that contradicts his Knight in shining armour persona or am I looking too deep into it? Just like when you had Ishita describe Raman as a "good man" which made me believe that her ex was a bad guy and he did turn out to be an abusive f**ktard.

I think I adore. Correction, I adore Ruhi as a kid. And the picture you paint is so picture perfect. Ishita's Raman. I like him. Like Lia, I love him. And to be honest I was blindly impressed by this chapter. It had me in awe - the look perfected with a huge o.

I won't pester you for updates. Keep your pace and don't rush it. You don't have to please anyone or keep upto anyone's schedules. :) Take your time and we'll turn this thread into a Cc.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
The update is unusually early. Normally it's after 1 am. Today 10:30bpn only update.

Since I had finally penned down I thought of uploading right away, I just don't have the patience to hold it once I have written.

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

res

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Why do i get the feeling that Isihita's father knows a darker secret fo Raman..which he will later on use it as a trumph card to separate Ishra..

good they are establishing relationship quite early not waiting for ages 😉

Aww ishita felt safe from the time she entered Raman's life..😊

Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Since I had finally penned down I thought of uploading right away, I just don't have the patience to hold it once I have written.

Same here. I just stop at where I stop and update. It's that urge to see how it's accepted or to just put it out.

Updated resd.

Reply fast. I need to go and start studying.