FF Kaun Kiska? UPDATED 17/07/16 Part 9A Pg 63 - Page 31

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Lovely UD V

What I absolutely loved here is the contrast that you have created, the juxtaposition of similar situations both the couples are in. One couple that has been together for a duration of 6 years now but has practically fallen apart but is together for namesake where both the partners are now trying to up the ante and lock horns with each other to emerge the winner while the couple that began by locking horns in the first place who has just crossed the 6 month mark in their relationship has found bliss. Each of them from belittling the other now in fact competes over one thing - who is more smitten, more in love, more crazy about the other and herein lies the beauty of this contest - its a tie. 😳

I legit cracked up when you expressed Ashok' irritation over being fawned over, coddled and called baby, darling 😆 can she call him cootchie next? 😉🤣 even being despiced by his own bro and his loyal subject Param 😆 the food would def taste like sawdust to anyone at this point and then doing it since its expected of him...like its *ahem* duty oddly reminded me of something I read once about the late Princess Diana - supposedly her sons were made to pass paternity tests before being bestowed the honor of Princes, since Charles would bed her 3 times a year MAX and that too since it was mandatory of him to do so 😳

While the other man is definitely awaiting the moment he can make love to his wife again and not because he is expected to do so but because he wants too

Originally posted by: Veeann

I think it will lead straight to the bedroom 🤣

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Res ... gonna read all the 4 parts tom V 😃

EDITED:

V 🤗 ...sorry for the late edit bey. Got around to this now.

I loved Shagun's manipulation. Whatever it was that she held atleast confirmed that she isn't dumb, not when it comes to dealing with kameena's like Ass-Oak. And Ass-Oak's predicament was hilarious - one unwanted Biwi, one disgruntled saas cum bro & one irritated side-kick. I was surprised the two bro's did not have a slap fest 😆

Ashok's disinterest in Shagun while parallel Raman's love for his wife. It was so well written. The way you wrote it made me feel the love between these two. Awww ... is all I can say 😳😳

Originally posted by: paru_rox

And who writes that better than you V 😆

Waise am looking forward to see JKR inebriated. Hope she gives Raavan Kr some tough time before the lovey-dovey 😉😆

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

V awesome update... Really looking forward to Ravan kumar handling his Lowered inhibition waala Jkr 😉

Originally posted by: Veeann

Paru 🤗

Thanks for reading yaar. I always wait for your comments because I know you'll tell me straight if I'm writing crap. I wanted to put in a slap fest after watching Vidya's VM - but since I'm doing a contrast thing here, I couldn't think of a parallel situation for Ishra.

I find it easy to write the lovey dovey bits, it's the other stuff I am having trouble with. But since next update is romantic, I should do fine. 😆

Originally posted by: Veeann

You've given me an idea for the next update Paru. JKR leading Raavan on a dance through the Dilli night 😆

Originally posted by: paru_rox

More than that ... see Ishita is always so goody-goody, I wud love it if she actually gives trouble to RKB sometime.

Remember the loaded wala episode at the Iyer's anniversary? Becharay ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi. I adore that episode where he tries to keep her out of trouble & she wudn't listen to him 😆. Ahh ... bedroom mein kuch hungama toh banta hai V 😆