THEY don't roam in the same circles

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Posted: 10 years ago
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They don't roam in the same circles, and that's why never bump into each other ever. So they are surprised and wonder when they see each other at the club. For a second he does not recognize her, she looks very everyday, a pair of jeans and a Tshirt and for her, he looks just like him, looking at her leaving her wondering. They are here with separate set of friends and for some very very odd reason she does not want to have a conversation, but then just then he waves at her, and she smiles back, wants to leave, and then she waves. He senses her hesitation, he turns around and joins the rest of his friends.
They don't know what happened or how it happened but suddenly their groups have sat down together at the lounge area in the balcony, everyone discussing Box Cricket wondering what it shall be like for their careers. She is at the other end of the table making a call, he is at this end the smokers end, she will never come here, he knows, she is on the phone, he knows. She is playing with her phone, her ride is busy having a drink, he is at the other end having a smoke of course, he isn't going to leave that.
They don't look at each other, participating in every conversation around them, laughing and making jokes, when someone talks about food, and someone says gotta leave. That's when they look up. Her ride is still here, he is relieved, she wonders, he announces he is around late shoot tomorrow, she is relaxed. Some friends leave.
They don't know how, and they have not thought of it, but now they are seated next to each other. He is cracking jokes, his back adjacent to her, she is looking at pictures on her phone. His friend takes a call. He crushes his cigarette and with elbows on the table, half turns to her
What are you doing?
She smiles and turns and shows her phone screen to him, he smiles,
I have a better one
He grabs his from his pocket and shows her
Episode mei yahi vala dikha ya na?
Haan, he nods and smiles, and just like in the episode he rubs his thumb over it.
She watches him,
I miss her
He smiles
I miss her too
Such a good child na, if I ever have a daughter I want one just like her
Hmm. Starts to see more pics and shows some to her, she watches and smiles.
She pulls out her phone and shows him some. They remember and laugh over moments. He looks at her
And if it's a boy?
Kya?
Agar ladka hua tho?
Hmmm..she thinks
Shravu!! They say it together and laugh heartily!!
Suddenly her ride comes to her, nikalna nahi hai?
Haan chalo na.
She waves a bye at everyone and leaves.
She thanks her friend for the ride when she reaches home
Bore tho nahi hui na? I know this is not your usual gang
Not at all, Mazaa aaya! Something different!
So you won't mind another night
Hmm.. No
I am surprised
She wonders why she is not.
He reaches home, removes his phone, stares at the pic. And wonders why is he?


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NOTE::: THIS is purely fiction. FUN fiction. this may be interpreted as an RPF and then again may not. If it has offended anyone please forgive, must be taken in good fun and no offense is meant to any fan base.
Just wanted to scribble something that is Diffy from the track thank you for reading. Press like or write comment if you enjoyed.
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Nisha0604 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UNBELIEVABLE

I am so blown away by how you take a very small sliver of a real life incident and tailor it into this silky luscious outfit...👏

I can picture this sight so vividly, especially crushing the cig. You have kept him extremely real. His attention caring and the general way he conducts himself from what Ive noticed...

I dont feel guilty at all asking you to write or having to comment.

This is REALLY stuff love stories are made of...

Thanks C!!

I LOVED it BTW, wonder why you were so unsure😳

P.S. And if its a BOY I want the lil guy to look like HIM... that's a non-negotiable clause I am sorry😆


Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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READING :D

WOW, Again, such a beautiful piece. So simple yet so engaging. How do you do it? Its our mutual love for them, i guess?! ;)
Very nicely written, the setting, scenario is all awesome! VERY close to reality. LOVED this! <3

Keep it up! & NEVER stop these from coming! 😳
Edited by serendipity. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And Oh! C,
I dont care if NOTHING ever comes out of it... cuz I KNOW its all right HERE AND it happened for REAL

Thousands of pairs of eyes cant lie...Nope...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww loved it !
This fantabulous ! Loved it so much !!

Hmm... i'll send you a pm i'll feel more at ease !😉
Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago
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Wow Too Good. I was waiting for your post. How nicely You have combined the on giong practise session into it n gave a correct title too.Its interesting to read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww so cute yaar...u really give such a beautiful illusion which seems so realistic that it make us dream about it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha0604

UNBELIEVABLE

I am so blown away by how you take a very small sliver of a real life incident and tailor it into this silky luscious outfit...👏

I can picture this sight so vividly, especially crushing the cig. You have kept him extremely real. His attention caring and the general way he conducts himself from what Ive noticed...

I dont feel guilty at all asking you to write or having to comment.

This is REALLY stuff love stories are made of...

Thanks C!!

I LOVED it BTW, wonder why you were so unsure😳

P.S. And if its a BOY I want the lil guy to look like HIM... that's a non-negotiable clause I am sorry😆



You know your gush is just way too lovable! 😃 Thx for the generous comment and shall I say comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha0604

And Oh! C,

I dont care if NOTHING ever comes out of it... cuz I KNOW its all right HERE AND it happened for REAL

Thousands of pairs of eyes cant lie...Nope...


Didn't understand.😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb piece of writing ..i loved it ⭐️

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