SS: SENSITIVE BUT WILD 'love' part 2 pg 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳😉Hey guys I am a new writer...but not new on this forum...
I think with out some jealousy and agressive romance...their can't be a love story...
So just writing a ss on the new seperation spoiler...
So If u guys want me to post than I want some likess... I am a bit greedy :p
So show some respect and like the post if u want me to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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GUES PLZ DO NOT FORGET TO COMMIT AND LIKE!!!!!
so here it goes

PART 1:
At Bhalla house

Ishita was sitting on the so called Raman's bed.Remembering their silly nok jhoks.It had been 6 months now till Raman had left to mumbai making an excuse of a big contract,but only Ishita knew what was the reason behind his escaping.
FlashBack
(afte raman got the asia bussiness man award)(in ishra room)
Ishita:(hurt)Raman why did u take shagun's name and gave her all the credits.

Raman:q tou kia tumhen deta,jisko meri feelings ki kadar bhi nhi.

Ishita:raman ap aisa q keh rahe ho mein aisa kia kardia,batao

Raman:Ishita mujhe akela chor dou isse pehle ke mein kuch galat bol behtoon..

Ishita:jee nhi jab tk mujhe mera jawab nhi mille ga mein nhi jaongi... apko pata hai mani ne.. (cutting her off)

Raman:han pata hai ke tum oss se pyaar krti ho aur ye rishta sirf ruhi ke liey nibha rhi ho..

Ishita:ye kia bakwaas kr rahe ho raman... aisa kuch nhi hai

Raman:mujhe pata tha ke saari aurtein aisi heen hoti hein,sab dhoka deti hein, hr bar mein jis bhi larki se pyaar krta hoon wou mujhe dhoka deti hai so just get lost from my life..

Ishita:(was happy) raman app mujh se pyaar krte hein(trying to put her hand on his shoulder but he pushes her away)

raman:pr ab nhi q ke mujhe teri asliat pata chal gayi hai tum aur shagun dono ik jeisi ho..

ishita:raman ye kia bakwaas kr rahe ho... mein aur mani...(crying)

raman: magarmach ke ansoon na tapkao...
(with that he left)
flash Back end

Raman ap mujh pr itna bhi bharosa nhi kr sakhte the...ap ko pata hona chahiey hai ke mein app se kitna pyaar krti hoon...hr relationship mein trust hona chahiey hai pr agr ye hamari relationship mein nhi tou apko samjhane ka koi faida nhi...

Ruhi comming from outside screaming
ruhi: ishima papa ka interview araha hai...on ko world 3 best bussines man mein chuna gaya hai... wowww mere papa ktne successful hein...wou kitna kaam krte hein...

Ishita:(wiping her tears)
rest continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice hai !!
Continue sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: YhmCraze

Nice hai !!

Continue sooon !!


Thanx... weise abhi tou ss ki starting hai age age dekho hota hai kia...:p
I am addicted to agressive romance
Edited by Gulabo12345 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Mee back!
Sorry I left part 1 incomplete
So here it goes, this is part 1 continue, just a short update

CONTINUE;)
Here in Mumbai Raman was also sickened from his life...He was tired from running from the truth of Ishita being the culprit...
Raman: jhansi ki rani tou wahan oss shani ke sath maze ora rhi hogi..
Aur meri halat dekho raat ko wine ke bina nend tk nhi ati.hr khwaab mein wou meri bahon mein dekhayi deti hai.mujhe gawahi de rhi hoti hai ke wou galat nhi hai...lekin mein janta hoon ke ye sach nhi hai..wou bhi hr aurat ki tarah dokha deti rhinaur mujhe pata bhi nhi chala..ab bas bohat hogya ab mein mumbai jaon ga...oss ko ye dekhaonga ke mei n oss ke bagair bhi zinda reh sakta hoon.
Aisa krta hoon sohani ko apne sayh le jata hoon, wou flirt krne se roke gi bhi nhi.aur mein os ishita ko saza bhi de paonga...

But still mein hotel mein rahoonga...

End of part 1
Will update tomorrow.
Edited by Gulabo12345 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
please update soon and please pm for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
do continue n pm m if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
Sohani was a good friend of raman.she was the one who took care and listened to ishra stories from raman.she knew every bit about his life.
In delhi.

Trng trung trung
Ishita:han han arahi hoo baba..

Opening the door...

Mani: hi ishu,kesi ho tum

Ishita: mein theek hoon aur tum batao tum yahan kese...

Mani:yr mujhe world three best business man mein select kia hai so kia tum mere sath chalo ge.

Ishita:han q nhi wese raman bhee select hua hai lekin I dont think ke wou ab kabhi bhi yahan wapas ayenge...he hates me..

Mani:osko choro na ishu just move on in ur life..acha mein ja rahan hoon aur shaam ko ready rehna mein tumhein pickup krke direct wahan award ceremoney mein le jaon ga...

Ishita:k mani..

In evening ishita went to parlour and dressed up in red saari..which was showing her every delicate curves...actually she was looking amazing and hot and sexy,,what not...

Trung trung (bell rang)(gate)
Ishita:han han arahi hoon mani

Mani: (with open mouth)wowww

Ishita:mani ab flirt krna band karo aur chalo..

Mani: kasam se ishu tight lag rhi ho;)

Ishita:acha na ab chalo bhi

Romi:(from back)dekha abhi mein hhi bhabhi ko jab se yehi kh rahan hoon

Ishita:(holding both of their ears)bakwas krli tou ab hum chale mani aur romi bhabhi pr line zara kam maro..( actually romi did have an idea why raman left)

Precap:raman's patakha entry and jealouey

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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue soon..Loved the updates !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waitng 4 jealous Ravan kumar..
nyc ss.. readed both d prts.. 👍🏼
plz updt it soon.. 😊
nd pm me

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