Chupana Bhi Nahi Aata, Jatana Bhi Nahi Aata - IshRa OS

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Edited !

Wow ! Can this get any better ?
I generally read before calling a night and I am glad I saved this one for today. It just had me captured in a beautiful cocoon that you built so delicately.

"She cannot decide whether she wants to kiss
him, hug him, pull his cheeks or do all of
these things when he is being this adorable."

These lines are your longlasting wish from Saturday epi ! I laughed thinking about it.

You know Aani, the best thing about your stories is that you imbibe them with emotions and preserve the depth of the situation.
Loved it !

Thanx for this Goodnight tale :D

"Humein tumse mohabbat hai, jatana bhi nai aata." Ahh ! Love this song and hope Mohabbat word comes in Raman's mouth too like it did with Ishita.

Edited by Let-It-Go - 10 years ago

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Very sweet and Lovely OS, Aani. The ending dialogue of Raman was just Aww worthy😳

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

this was beautiful Aani ! Loved it very much !!

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

one of my fav songs too! and fits ishra so well right now 😃
beautiful os aani- i really liked the convo they had - i almost expected raman to say "well, if you don't know what's bothering me, i'm not going to tell you" with pout and all 😆😆
ah the end- don't know when they'll be ready but i'm totally enjoying the ride meanwhile

p.s. they ARE freaking cute, aren't they?
p.p.s. yayay your muse is coming back! woohoo

Edited by rutu83 - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

hey such a awesome os
brilliantly written
I so wanted something like this show on our serial BT we knew we didn't get it
so thank u so much for this lovely os

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Wow amazing😃 brilliantly written😊

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This was another awesome os from you...

Just brilliant..👏👏

Awesome and superb...👏👏

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

edited my comment on pg 4😳

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KK2926

@KK2926

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Awesome aani... You made my sunday darling. After the promo last night i thought i will not open IF but opened it and read this first thing in the morning. Very nicely written. I could imagine the characters so nicely.

Thanks dear for making my day!!!

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janu12345

@janu12345

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Hey Aani...😛 I am so glad you got your groove back .. yayy! Love reading your OS.. perfect as always .. makes up for what I can't see in the episodes! 😛😛

I love this song... it fits this couple perfectly 😳 .. and now its running in a loop in my head 😃

In quite a few episodes, personally I ve felt there has been no follow up scene when a beautiful premise has been set up... how I would love to see something like this in the episode... not even looking for the elusive HUG.. just a conversation... the part where Raman apologizes is typical RKB style..and asks for the gift which is rightfully his...the droolfest just continued 😳

Pata nahin kal ke episode ka toh pata nahin...but right now after this OS i have that goofy smile on my face 😳😳

Edited by janu12345 - 10 years ago