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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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"Yeh ashiq ashiq kya laga rakha hai? Biwi hai meri. Baqaidah shaadi ki hai humne. Meri bacchi ki maa hai yeh." Raman held the man by his collar as he said those words right to his face through clenched jaws, looking right into his eyes.

Raman Kumar Bhalla was furious. Furious would be an understatement. Raman Bhalla resembled a walking talking volcano, the lava bubbling inside him in the form of anger waiting to erupt. And it had found its target - Ishita. Raman turned to Ishita, his fingers trying thir level best to calm his nerves as Raman Bhalla attempted to massage his forehead telling himself for the umpteenth time that no matter how furious he was, he shouldn't take it out on Ishita. But this woman, this woman... This woman was his red string of fate that knotted each passing moment complicating his life and ruining his well set plan. Bidding a final goodbye to all his romantic illusions that would be shattered post this much needed outburst, Raman Bhalla turned over to his wife.

Ishita locked gazes with Raman as she stepped a step closer to him with each beat that flew.

Seduce him, she could do that.

@Aaminah123: Amna, there you go. Teaser. I know. I'm evil.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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Payal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

RES

Lady, I owe you for 3 updates...just holding this spot. I'll be back tonight so I can do you justice.

You are awesomesauce. Surely you know that. 😳

❤️🤗❤️

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
#1

"Yeh ashiq ashiq kya laga rakha hai? Biwi hai meri. Baqaidah shaadi ki hai humne. Meri bacchi ki maa hai yeh." Raman held the man by his collar as he said those words right to his face through clenched jaws, looking right into his eyes.

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Raman Kumar Bhalla was furious. Furious would be an understatement. Raman Bhalla resembled a walking talking volcano, the lava bubbling inside him in the form of anger waiting to erupt. And it had found its target - Ishita. Raman turned to Ishita, his fingers trying thir level best to calm his nerves as Raman Bhalla attempted to massage his forehead telling himself for the umpteenth time that no matter how furious he was, he shouldn't take it out on Ishita. But this woman, this woman... This woman was his red strings of fate that knotted each passing moment complicating his life and ruining his well set plan. Bidding a final goodbye to all his romantic illusions that would be shattered post this much needed outburst, Raman Bhalla turned over to his wife.

#3

Ishita locked gazes with Raman as she stepped a step closer to him with each beat that flew.

Seduce him, she could do that.

@Aaminah123: Amna, there you go. Teaser. I know. I'm evil.

Okay this may officially turn my love in to anger and then into hatred.

I want the whole update now!

In the third one, is se going to kiss him? Say yes.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Do you play any instrument?

I suggest you keep meherbaan on hold until your mood gets better. I don't want you lose the crux of it.

PKYEK?

My day was usual, busy. How bad was yours? Something bad happened at school?

Okay get some sleep and hopefully you'll be in a better mood tomorrow insha Allah.

Taylor swift? Dont really like her.

Sorted he Meherbaan issue. Reorganised it successfully I know I'm awesome. Cut down on the intended glamour. Will write the Subbu bit later. Pssht.

Nope. Know a piece or two on the organ and guitar. That's about it. I sing though. You?

Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani

Nothing great but still I'll pm you about it later. If it still messes with my head. :) I hate being busy. It's so (obviously) tiring.

Listen to the album. Her songs are pretty good.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Okay this may officially turn my love in to anger and then into hatred.

I want the whole update now!
In the third one, is se going to kiss him? Say yes.

The opposite in the third. See. You should love me. I'm killing the hype.

I don't have the update. You know I would if I had it ;)

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: -Payal-

RES

Lady, I owe you for 3 updates...just holding this spot. I'll be back tonight so I can do you justice.

You are awesomesauce. Surely you know that. 😳

❤️🤗❤️

Payaliya!

I missed you. And that Rajjo. We need to drag her here.

Yes. Yes. I'll be up all night waiting for you.

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Okay. Am seriously trying to understand what happened in the teaser.

I'll re-read that tomorrow. But u better update soon. Will end up stressed about what's happening :/

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: Liashna
Okay. Am seriously trying to understand what happened in the teaser.

I'll re-read that tomorrow. But u better update soon. Will end up stressed about what's happening :/

*glares*

Good to know that you're alive. 😆

Don't pull a disappearing act again. We miss you.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Sorted he Meherbaan issue. Reorganised it successfully I know I'm awesome. Cut down on the intended glamour. Will write the Subbu bit later. Pssht.

Nope. Know a piece or two on the organ and guitar. That's about it. I sing though. You?

Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani

Nothing great but still I'll pm you about it later. If it still messes with my head. :) I hate being busy. It's so (obviously) tiring.

Listen to the album. Her songs are pretty good.

You know I wouldn't even mind if you omit subbu's view altogether. Ever notice I give minimum attention to villians in my fiction)

You have a guitar and you know how to play, its enough for me. How I wish we could do a jamming session. I mean you perform and I would be the audience. I sing for myself only.

What songs do you play BTW?

Besides yum I have no idea about the soap, okay perhaps ek has in a because of my sister. But its the first show I follow religiously and the one one which has brought about the writer in me. Really.

Sure, write me the details whenever you wnat to :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: Liashna
Okay. Am seriously trying to understand what happened in the teaser.

I'll re-read that tomorrow. But u better update soon. Will end up stressed about what's happening :/

Is it the lack of sleep lia or migraine?

Kiara you ooiught to update soon, your readers are forgetting the background of the story.

I have been thinking of re-reading the whole thing only because you take too long to update and I miss reading this fiction. So glamorous it is, I tell you.