A Beautiful Mistake (OS) Completed!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart




That is because, sometimes I almost like dominating men, because in my limited experience I have seen that girls barely come out of their shell until the other party toils to get them... and Secondly its Hot isn't?😉

Not mentioning Raman's name was never a point, was it?😆

Aww... and I thought most people didn't liked that my all the other OSs were longer... and I purposely cut this short to 2978 words while all other OSs were more than 5000 words... okay may be from other time I'll write longer..



@bold red: Definitely . i was literally awwing when he said that...☺️
i personally love it when the stories are long 😃. most of the time its stuff we wish we could see onscreen and the os/ss satisfy our fantasies .
you're a fantastic writer👏 so please dont think we wont like lenghthy stuff or we're gonna get bored or something..😆
looking forward to more lovely os's from you😉
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rozy77



@bold red: Definitely . i was literally awwing when he said that...☺️
i personally love it when the stories are long 😃. most of the time its stuff we wish we could see onscreen and the os/ss satisfy our fantasies .
you're a fantastic writer👏 so please dont think we wont like lenghthy stuff or we're gonna get bored or something..😆
looking forward to more lovely os's from you😉
take care




Okay, now that I know it, you'd not be disappointed from next time...
Thanks for your appreciation, it means a lot to me as a writer...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. I never wanted this to end! What a wonderful story. Wish this was a looonng FF instead of a one shot! Lol. Brilliant work!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: black_haze

Wow. I never wanted this to end! What a wonderful story. Wish this was a looonng FF instead of a one shot! Lol. Brilliant work!




Thank-you so much!!!😃
Its overwhelming, reading appreciation about myself☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Glad that you liked it!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is amazing!
Can you please continue it, make it a 3/4 shot?
Really love the idea! Please write more on this!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks...
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Thank-you😊

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