OS: Naam Ada Likhna - Page 4

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Wow that was so BEAUTIFULl😳😳 such a heart warming convo between Ishra😳❤️..you are really a gifted writer😃..Amazing work👏

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Thanks PB😊

i listen to this song regularly 😳

Ramblings you mean? actually na, I won't be able to do justice since i am not watching Raman. I don't want to write complete fiction when it comes to ramblings yaar. Thats why i am not writing anything.

Originally posted by: akkikinats

It was lovely. Loved rkb and ishita...

Originally posted by: shalz_123

i m downloading this song like right now.. i always loved this song.. however never downloaded it.. u r compelling me to girl... as always awesome..u write very well...

i miss ur stories when you dont write. hey what happnd to ur europe diaries?? u havent updated it for ages..

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy

awesome Lucky. 👏

this must be passed to sonali jaffer who is hell bent right now to prove raman childish and ishtia stupid and careless.

true IshRa and bala. ishita 's and raman 's characters have still chances of saving if they show like this . badly wishing for heart to heart convo on show

Originally posted by: Liashna

😳 Am literally like this. Lucky am brain freezed yaar 👏👏 <-- I wish this clap was more slow montion-ed 😳 😆

Simply Brilliant. I 'read' this part as exactly as I would see it unfolding as scenes of the show. I could clearly feel Raman's desires, Bala's look, Ishita's tears and the last bit and that quote 👏Simply awesome sauce!!🤗

Love how you described the feelings, confusion and desires here. Ishita's dialogue for Raman was absolutely beautiful!

"They didn't have to try to sleep any more. Sleep came to them. " ❤️ Superb play with the words for the whole OS, it flows easily while reading.😳
Am a sucker for good writing and this one was a treat for me 👍🏼

Great one, do write more often 😆

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Ash... mera bachha😊how are you doing ???

hug???🤗yeh lo😊

Thank you very much for reading and liking it my dear

Originally posted by: RisingAsh

I had to read it baba.. 😳
N haan huggies 🤗
Doing perfectly fine.. Thnx to this itz prettier now.. 😃
OMG I just noticed one thing !! Kal ka din is spl !!! For me !!! Kal ka din.. OMGGG !!!