OS: Naam Ada Likhna - Page 2

it was awesome!!

I loved it...they mean so much to each other whether they acknowledge it with words or not, but I'm glad they finally did in your story😃😳

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

You truly proved by this OS that you are a true TV fan as your username suggests. I really do hope that we get this scene in tomorrow's episode! So very Ishra like, mature and understated yet full of passion! For the past few days I think I am liking Raman and Ishita in these OSs and FFs more than the show lol

Originally posted by: sunny303

it was awesome!!

I loved it...they mean so much to each other whether they acknowledge it with words or not, but I'm glad they finally did in your story😃😳

It was so sweet n lovely!!

Lucky it was a treat to read this one. It was put together so beautifully and effortlessly that I couldn't help but almost imagine them. The last part, the kiss on her forehead was a cherry on the cake for me. It was so calm and serene, thank you for giving me a touching scene when they have disappointed me in turning the whole fiasco into a kiss huntung. It was so natural and left me only hoping that they show something of the sort, alas!

And even awesome part is

You Are not even watching the show

Still such brilliant imagination

I remember telling you when we first met 4-5 months

Btw thats a long time

Anyway saying to you that you have awesome range

It got proved again

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Thank You 😊

I have this image of them in my head that always writes itself... and I am glad you saw the understated emotions too 😊

😳 Am literally like this. Lucky am brain freezed yaar 👏👏 <-- I wish this clap was more slow montion-ed 😳 😆

Simply Brilliant. I 'read' this part as exactly as I would see it unfolding as scenes of the show. I could clearly feel Raman's desires, Bala's look, Ishita's tears and the last bit and that quote 👏Simply awesome sauce!!🤗

Love how you described the feelings, confusion and desires here. Ishita's dialogue for Raman was absolutely beautiful!

"They didn't have to try to sleep any more. Sleep came to them. " ❤️ Superb play with the words for the whole OS, it flows easily while reading.😳
Am a sucker for good writing and this one was a treat for me 👍🏼

Great one, do write more often 😆

Lucky lucky lucky... Where r u yaar !!! I wanna hug u u for this EPICNESS !!! Ufff kia zabardast cheez i've just read !!! Thi is dreamyy.. Awww Lucky.. Dnt knw if itz normal.. I always think u should write for YHM.. Emm.. Just saying..

Originally posted by: naima.a

It was so sweet n lovely!!