My original scene - Page 4

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

👍🏼

thanks

Wow Leo

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Wow Leo

Quite perceptive!

you included all of Raman's current emotions in this short piece. His anger, hurt, fear, insecurity and maybe even a defeated acceptance of his reality (the way he sees it). I know the last line is intended to be powerful, but the one before that was what choked me... when he says "you think I dont understand you, but you dont even see me" So apt. It was as if he is speaking our collective minds.

sigh... all it will need is for them to have a talk with each other. then it will all be so clear!

Good one Leo.👏

Thanks lucky

I just thought about it

We would be lucky if w get something about this

But all would be resolved with a banal joke

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Thanks lucky

I just thought about it

We would be lucky if w get something about this

But all would be resolved with a banal joke

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

sad but true

Yes

That's how pattern of writing has been so far

Build a track

And end in a comic way

At the end ishita will come to know about raman discomfort and will say to him aap Jaise ho waise hi mujhe acche lagte ho and raman will be surprise and give smile to her and she will return and yhm be will play and scene ended and next day back to square one. 2 week ka torture 2 minutes me khatam 😆

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

At the end ishita will come to know about raman discomfort and will say to him aap Jaise ho waise hi mujhe acche lagte ho and raman will be surprise and give smile to her and she will return and yhm be will play and scene ended and next day back to square one. 2 week ka torture 2 week me khatam😆

Absolutely correct jaya

Cheers everyone and thanks for commenting

That last line tho...awesome!

-Raman says "baito aur socho Maine Aisa kyu kaha aur jiski madad Leni hai lo aur phir bhi jawab na mile to koi baat nahi aur waise main tumhe samajta nahi Hota na jo itne din se ho raha hai use home nahi deta "

This right here explains Raman and his "cute jealousy" this far on the show.../he really does understand Ishita, well better than she understands him I think. He's jealous for sure, seeing Ishita with Mani, tall and handsome Mani, pisses him off sure, but he knows her and he TRUSTS her. Whatever he's feeling is his own issue and he hasn't fully pushed it onto her, despite his taunts (he's Raman so the taunts are a must)...he hasn't done anything like what a seriously jealous husband could...and your scene caught that perfectly, especially the last line.

Originally posted by: sunny303

That last line tho...awesome!

-Raman says "baito aur socho Maine Aisa kyu kaha aur jiski madad Leni hai lo aur phir bhi jawab na mile to koi baat nahi aur waise main tumhe samajta nahi Hota na jo itne din se ho raha hai use home nahi deta "

This right here explains Raman and his "cute jealousy" this far on the show.../he really does understand Ishita, well better than she understands him I think. He's jealous for sure, seeing Ishita with Mani, tall and handsome Mani, pisses him off sure, but he knows her and he TRUSTS her. Whatever he's feeling is his own issue and he hasn't fully pushed it onto her, despite his taunts (he's Raman so the taunts are a must)...he hasn't done anything like what a seriously jealous husband could...and your scene caught that perfectly, especially the last line.

Thanks man

You have put it perfectly

He is insecure and jealous

But he knows she won't cheat on him