OS: On today's precap! - Page 2

liked both versions- hope the bye scene happens 😆

Superb OS..

Damn gurrl I don't know which one I like better...okay actually I do, the second one had the kiss and the last Raman line...wooo 😳 , but the first one was awesome too!

both of them were FAB!!!! LOVED IT

Nice OS. Loved the way Raman kepy mumbling to himself while Mani was saying goodbye and best was when he stepped in between to stop Mani from hugging Ishita. The end was awesome with Raman losing it and saying that Ishita uski biwi which answered the very question he asked Ishita.

aww perfect this ws...loved it

Originally posted by: Bul3

Hello everyone..My first OS on this forum..have written something after a long long time..I am not a very good writer but hope you like this small OS😊

No..Pammi Aunty..I know Mani..he is very choosy when it comes to girls..Mani is such a nice guy..he just knows how to bring smile to my face..Mani..he is just so sweet..he knows me so well...you know Raman..Ishita Mani were inseperable in school..Mani to Ishita par marta that..par Ishita ne Subbu se sagai Karli aur jab free hui to tum beech mein..

these words kept hitting him like daggers again and again..damn he hated this Mani guy..he is no choosa hua aam..mann to kar raha hai usko pees karke uski chatni bana doon..saala alarm clock ki aulad..thought an annoyed angry Raman..

He was not happy the way the evening has progressed. Mani's entrance in his life like Shani had given him sleepless nights earlier but seeing him in the cafe had assured him a little. He was already annoyed with Ishita's over the top Mani jap and Mani's importance in her life. His surprising appearance in the Pooja had done nothing but worsened his already bad mood. Why did Mani had to be this guy of all people!!why he couldn't be the choosa hua aam he had assumed Mani to be..God..you must be punishing me for something terrible

Raman's thoughts were disturbed by the very person responsible for his miseries😆

OK Raman it was very nice to meet you..ab main chalta hoon..kafi late bhi ho raha hai..

Nahi nahi yahin boriya bistar daal le..Raman muttered

Kuch kaha tumne..

Nahi to..mein to keh raha tha itni jaldi..thoda aur ruk jaate ..Raman fake smiled at Mani..

Are nahi..vo thoda kaam hai..and yahan bhi main Ishu ki wajah se aa gaya meeting chod kar..nahi to meri jaan jo le leti..Mani laughed fondly looking towards a busy Ishita..

If only looks could kill Mani would have been long dead 🤢..Controlling his emotions Raman fake smiled gritting his teeth..Jaan le leti to accha hota

Huh

wo mein keh raha tha phir milne aana

Definitely..ab yahan hoon to Ishu se mile bina to kaise reh sakta hoon..replied Mani happily

Bohat hua..thought Raman..now he is asking it himself!.

But before Raman could say anything..

Mani..tum ja rahe ho..asked Ishita sweetly

ye Madrasan ko isse itna pyaar se baat karne ki kya zaroorat hai..mujhse to kabhi itna pyaar se nahi baat karti😡

Haan Ishu..bas Raman ko bye bol raha tha..

"bye bol raha tha,..mimicked Raman ..idiot..dono chasni mein doob gaye the bachpan mein burned Raman

Oh..chalo,,par kal ki date bhoolna mat

Date..ye pagal ho gay hai kya😡

Kal..kyun? Raman asked inspite of himself😆

Vo we are going to watch film together..

Movie..akele..Raman replied instantly in a shocked tone..

Ishita-Mani both watched him curiously at his sudden outburst😕

Arre..vo mera matlab mujhse nahi poocha..I would have also come..Raman said trying to do some damage control Raman control kar

Are Raman..its a Rajnikanth sir film..aapko pasand nahi ayegi..

Kyun..kyun nahi ayegi pasand..arre..Rajnikant itna bada superstar hai..I am a big fan of Rajnikant..mujhe bohat pasand hai unki films..Raman said convincingly

Par Ishu tum to keh rahi thi Raman ko south films pasand nahi

accha aisa kaha tumne Ishuuu..Raman said holding Ishita's shoulder and squeezing them lighltly

Raman par aap to

Kya aap to..aap to laga rakhi hai...ye meri biwi bhi na bohat bholi hai..mujhe south movies bohat pasand hai..I will definitely come..said Raman cheerfully still holding Ishita close to himself showing his authority over her..tumhe koi problem thodi na hai Ishuuu

Ishita could understand nothing..What is wrong with Ravan Kumar..!!

Mujhe..Nahi..mujhe kya problem hogi..

Accha accha we will go together..so Raman see you tomorrow..Bye Ishu

With final byes Mani bent forward to hug Ishita but suddenly out of nowhere Raman just came in between and hugged him instead..😆

😆 How I wish this happens...

Ok..Mani..see you tomorrow..bye

Ok..Bye said Mani feeling weird😕

Bye Mani

Bye Bye and with that Raman closed the door making sure no more byes were exchanged between the so called childhood friends!

Ye Ravan kumar ko kya hua..itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe hai! Wondered Ishita..

Raman just gave a look to her and moved to their room angrily..

Ab inhe kya hua..aiyyo murugan..ye kya hota rehta hai inko..

She followed him in the room ready for his usual taunts

"mujhe samajh nahi aata tumhe doosre logon ki life mein interfere karne ki kya zaroorat hai? blasted Raman

Ab maine kya kiya asked Ishita confused😕

Kyun tum khud hi to keh rahi thi Mani is very choosy, Mani aisa hai asia hai kaisa hai..uaka khud ka dimag nahi hai kya decide karne ko..tumko kya fark padta hai vo jo bhi kare

Mujhe farak nahi panda chahiye..Asked Ishita annoyed.Mani is her friend and what exactly is wrong in what she said!

Kyun farak pade tumhe

Kyunki he is my friend..she tried to reason

He is your friend ..you have not adopted him!!aur tum to aise behave kar rahi ho jaise tumhe apni pati ke liye ladki dhoondni ke liye kaha hai

Aap kuch bhi kehte ho said Ishita loosing her patience. What was wrong with this man she wondered!

Nahi theek bhi hai na..tum chun bhi sakti ho..aakhir hamara rishta hi kya hai..said Raman highly annoyed and fed up with the entire situation..

Ishita was hurt.

Aap sach mein pooch rahe hain humara rishta kya hai asked Ishita angrily.

Haan replied Raman confidently

It was enough..Ishita could guess he was angry for some reason but he was being too unreasonable..

Theek hai..kuch nahi hai na humara rishta to aap mujhse itne sawaal kyun pooch rahe ho..meri marzi mein jo bhi karun..meri marzi mein apne friend ke liye jo decide karun..aapko kya..mera friend mera Mani meri marzi

Raman could not take it any more..did she just say mera Mani!!this woman..

He took dangerous steps towards her but she was unmoved..she looked back at him with the same anger and intensity as bestowed upon her by the great RKB..

Tumhara mani? He asked angrily.

Haan mera mani..koi problem hai aapko

And Raman was as angry as he could be. He pulled Ishita with force towards himself..and looked at her dangerously..Ishita was not going to give up either today..

Har baat ki had hoti hai Raman..chodiye mujhe..she tried to free herself

Nahi chodunga he said determinedly.

Kyun nahi chodenge..aakhir kya rishta hai hamara...she asked back angrily!

It was enough

Biwi ho tum meri he roared..

Ishita looked into his eyes to see the intensity of his words. He had finally given answer to his own question.

A tear escaped Ishita's eye which broke his reverie and he realized what he just said. Coming back to his senses he broke the eye contact and left her at once. As he turned back to leave the room he was stopped by her words..

Aage se kabhi mat poochna ki humara rishta kya hai...

a very lovely os
both the endings were amazing in their own way...i liked itt
do write more
and pm me wenever you write pls

awww this was awesome
n d version2 was sone pe suhaga
loved it