ISHRA SS: Woh Lamhe, Woh Baatein Koi Na Jaane Pg 25(last part) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. U ended at perfect timing 😕... Plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM.
I am really sorry😭 for late comment actually I am busy at my Choti maa house.
It was very Interesting SS.😊
Three parts were so nicely explained.😊
I like this change in Raman.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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Edited by PriyaCherry - 10 years ago
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Hello YHMians...back with the 4th part...hope u like it

Not proof checked...so pls excuse errors...

PMs later

Thanks for every comment and like you ppl shower on the stories I write...it is truly my motivation to write more...

Part 4:

Now when he saw her standing there lost and lonely, all he could think was doing this. Perhaps this was that one right step towards the right direction. He shut the door without a sound and walked slowly towards her. She hadn't heard him come or rather she was too engrossed into some thought. He didn't think further but just locked his arms around her and hugged her from behind surprising her completely.

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She shuddered by the suddenness of his action. Her lips muttered, "Raman" as she felt his hands wind around her waist.

"Shhh...kuch matt bolo...just feel this moment with me Ishita!" was his instant reply silencing her the very next second.

Kuch Na Kaho, Kuch Bhi Na Kaho
Kya Kehna Hai, Kya Sunna Hai
Mujhko Pata Hai, Tumko Pata Hai
Samay Ka Yeh Pal Tham Sa Gaya Hai
Aur Is Pal Mein Koi Nahin Hai
Bas Ek Main Hoon, Bas Ek Tum Ho
Kuch Na Kaho, Kuch Bhi Na Kaho

She instantly obeyed and her head slowly rested on him, eyes closing in the bliss of the moment. She didn't know why he did that but what his gesture did to her, inside her was beyond what words could explain.

His hands entwined with each other against her waist, gripping her more close to his body, if at all possible.

It was total bliss that both experienced in those moments of togetherness.

After long moments of silence, she felt his warm breath fanning her earlobes making her inner skin tremble with a sensation that she never knew so far. It was passion ignited with the desire or rather love that they had been secretly nurturing beneath the thick layers of indifference or perhaps act of ignorance to their own true emotions.

Slowly, he started whispering something and she felt it similar to something she already knew. It wasn't a taunt or mock but even then she felt a tug deep down her heart which shook her out of her blissful state.

He was whispering her own words about her prince charming. She was first stunned at the realization that he read something so private as that but then a little disappointment crept in knowing that he had hugged her just because he read it and now to make her happy, he did it. She felt a beautiful dream crumbling down before her. What had she hoped and what had happened.

His reading and invading her personal space never made a big impact inside her as the other reason. But she remained as calm as possible.

She slowly freed herself from his wound arms muttering, "toh aapne padhliya?"

There was no accusation or anger in her tone but then he felt something amiss. A dullness in her voice which he first assumed to be her dislike to his reading her private diary.

He grinned naughtily as she stepped away from him and replied, "haan...warna kaise jaan paatha ke iss Jhansi ki rani ke andar aisa bhi ek ladki hai!"

She didn't react as he had guessed. Her reaction was rather cold to whatever he said and did. Just to pull her leg, he also commented sarcastically, "Waise, tumne apne personal diary ko aise khula kyun choda? Is it for me to read and do whatever you wished for?"

She glared at him for a brief moment but then walked to the wardrobe to pick her clothes for changing. He had expected her to pick up a fight with him or atleast scold him for reading it and now making such mockery of her but her silent treatment was puzzling him. Or rather angering him because he hadn't expected this response from her.

"Kya hua madrasan? Maine tumaare diary padhli, isiliye naaraaz ho? Ya phir sharmaa rahi ho?"

His question earned him another cold stare from her but then she gave a fake smile and replied, "naaraaz hone se kya hoga Raman? It wont change the reality..."

She trailed off her words making it ambiguous as to what reality she meant. Was it the reality that he had trespassed her privacy and read her diary or was it the reality that it wasn't a genuine gesture from him and their relationship stayed at the same place from wherever it started?

He seemed to be getting to close to what her real despair was but then she added after a heavy sigh, "It wont change the fact that you have read it Raman"

She walked away not giving him time to reply to it. He shook his head confused, "yeh madrasan aise kyun react kar rahi hai??...choti si choti cheez keliye hungaama machaathi hai...phir aaj kya hua?"

The truth was that he had whispered those things in her ears in order to let her know that he read it and in turn make her fight with him. All he wanted was to get into a silly nhok jhok which would change her sober mood. When she fought, he would be relieved that she was fine as always but then this silent and calm attitude from her wasn't going down well with him.

He had to find out what her problem was. He also quickly changed his clothes and waited for her to return.

After a long wait, she came back and walked straight to the couch without giving him a glance while he was expecting an extended conversation with her. Spreading out the sheet, she was preparing herself for sleep.

He felt annoyed at her indifference but was he the reason for it? He really didn't know but would know soon. He was totally determined about it.

He spoke up all of a sudden breaking the unsettling silence, "Ishita, tum yahaan bed pe so sakthi ho...I know the couch is not..."

She snapped his words understanding what he was going to say, "Its ok Raman...main yahaan comfortable hoom...aap aaraam se so jao"

He was furious now at her subtle rejection of his invite and sat up, "tumaari problem kya hai? Zyaadha mahaan banne ki zaroorat nahi hai...jab main keh raha hoom ke bed pe so jao, phir argue kyun karthi ho yaar?"

Ishita lost her cool too, "wahi baat main bhi aapse kehna chahti hoom Raman...aap mahaan matth bano...mere liye aise adjustments karne ki zaroorat nahi...waise bhi, if you dont remember, let me remind you ke aapne hi mujhe couch pe sone ko kaha tha..."

He was by her side almost hovering over her furiously, his arms rested on either sides of the couch and she was locked there, "kisi ne sacch kaha hai...pati jitna bhi karein, biwi ke nakhre bandh nahi honge...ek paise ki khushi nahi hogi usse...ab tumhe hi dekhlo...main tumaare perfect pati banne ke khoshish kar raha hoom aur tum ulta mujhe sunaati ho"

She tried to push him away to free away, "toh matth karo na khoshish...I have never asked you for anything Raman...yeh sab karna aur humaara rishta nibaana aapke majhboori nahi hai...mere liye, mujhe khush karne keliye kuch matth karo...just let it be, ok?"

He scowled back in protest, "Not OK...biwi ho tum meri...tumaare khushi ke baare mein main nahi sochunga toh aur kaun karega?"

She mellowed a little but then replied sarcastically with a faint chuckle, "ohhh...aur isiliye mere diary padhke yeh sab..."

Her words trailed off and a lone tear swam in her eyes. She suppressed a sob and then added, "But Raman, woh sab bohat puraane baatein hai aur unn sab ka ab koyi matlab nahi...waqt ke saat aise dreams bhi mitt gaye hai...so don't bother..yeh jhoot moot ka naatak karne ki zaroorat nahi!"

She looked away saying that in mock sarcasm.

Somehow, this didn't make him angrier, rather it mellowed him down a little. He could see the real reason for her cold response and such weird behaviour. He chuckled naughtily at the dawn of it and replied, "matlab tum yeh kehna chaahti ho ke mujhe tumaare yeh saare wishes bhoolkar woh karna chaahiye jo main chahta hoom, right?"

She nodded without turning to him, "hmmm"

He bent down further saying "okay...agar tum aisa chaahti ho toh..." and quickly placed a kiss on her cheeks shocking her to the core.

She was shaken by that sudden kiss, their first kiss. His lips lingered on her soft cheeks for a little longer than needed, rubbing against her skin gently and then he pulled back very slowly. The gentleness didn't do anything to stop the crimson blush nor the burning passion he set alight.

She turned to face him with her palm touching the spot on her cheeks. She couldn't believe that it happened in real but yes the warmth of his lips still stayed on her skin to confirm to her that it wasn't a dream or mere imagination. He had really kissed her cheeks.

He spoke up with a naughty glint, "Yeh karna chaahta hoom main...aur sirf yahaan hi nahi..."

He left his words incomplete allowing her to gather up the meaning of what he intended on her own. She sat there immobile for a while and he added, "aur suno, yeh sirf trailer tha...asli picture abi baaki hai meri Jhansi ki rani!"

He walked back to the bed and as he sat down, he voiced, "ab koyi lecture baaki nahi hai toh aa jao...warna picture bhi aaj hi dikaa doonga...aur woh tum seh nahi paavogi!"

She snapped out of her lost state slowly and walked to the other side of the bed as she wasn't in a state to fight with him.

He sank his head into his plush pillows muttering, "Good night"

A little into the night, she felt his hands on hers. That made her realize that he was wide awake like she was. He was pondering over what had happened between them in the last few hours. His mind was restless and his eyes, his mind, his body every inch of him refused to sleep. Though he had made it all seem like a light moment with a peck on her cheeks, he had serious matters to talk with her. And that realization rendered him sleepless.

Well her state was no less. With a hug, a kiss and all his naughty yet intimate talks, he had literally started a storm inside her.

She turned her head to his direction and understood that he was already looking at her. He smiled as she turned and his fingers entwined with hers passionately.

She didn't know what he wanted to say to her but then she was loving each moment. She was loving each of his touches. She was loving the whole feeling of being a wife, and sleeping beside him on the bed. She didn't know if it was love but she was loving and cherishing every moment of this night.

He voiced huskily, "Ishita, agar woh sapne mitt gaye toh kuch naye bhi honge na? tell me...I really want to make it up for you and..."

She cut his words short, "Raman...aisa kuch...I mean..."

He spoke up when she was lost for words, "maana maine tumaari diary padha but I hugged you because I wanted to and it was one of the most beautiful moments of my life...meri koyi majhboori nahi thi uss pal mein...kya tumhe woh sab majhboori laga?"

She knew that he was hurt by her words. She felt rather guilty. She melted and completely turned around to cup his hands with her other palm, "Raman...I didn't mean to hurt you...baat bas itna hai ke humne aaj se pehle aise baatein kabhi share nahi kiya...We never spoke about us, you know?"

She left it as a question expecting him to understand what she meant. And he knew she was right as always. They never spoke about them. It was never their focus. Everything in their life was about others but he had off late understood that it was time they thought about them, their life, their togetherness.

Perhaps this was the moment when it was just them and no one else.

Samay Ka Yeh Pal Tham Sa Gaya Hai
Aur Is Pal Mein Koi Nahin Hai
Bas Ek Main Hoon, Bas Ek Tum Ho

Both let silence take over their senses for a few long moments before they actually took a plunge into what they were realizing or rather experiencing.

In a magical moment, he too turned around completely to face her and voiced all of a sudden, "Do we still need to play hide and seek with our feelings Ishita?

[To be continued]

SO how was it? pls do reply...

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Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Vidya...awesome update
loved the progress in their relation...u have very beautifully written the baby steps they r taking to move ahead..
loved it
waise ab trailor toh dekha diya..picture kab shuru hoga😉
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm glad that misunderstanding didn't last long and that Raman cleared it to Ishita he hugged her because he wanted and not just cause he read it in her diary. The kiss on the cheek was surprising yet sweet. The end scene was so serene, the way they both were awake and Raman held Ishita's hand and they started talking about what all these means. Can't wait to see what will be Ishita's answer in the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was Just an very Nice Part.😊
Ishra Moments were so Romantic.😳
The conversation of Raman and Ishita was so nicely explained.😳
It was so nice that Raman didn't misunderstand to meaning that Ishita what she saying.😊
What will be the answer by Answer?Waiting for it.😊

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww! Ths is sooo brilliant! Loved it! Esp the emotions n convo between ishra! Ekdum perfect!

Awesummm.. continue soon! Want to knw hw thy r planning to stop playing hide n seek!
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update. The way you moved ahead regarding the stoy was so good.
Raman Kissing her
telling her that its only trailer
and at last asking her do we have to play hide and seek with our feelings was so good
Thanks for the PM
Edited by iloveyhm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
so beautiful...
i was lost in ur words...
emotions were portrayed just right...loved their silence and convo...
specially his last line..:)

cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
eager to see how it progress... plz update soon😳😃

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