The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13 - Page 16

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Aani,

Just last weekend we had a session on desicion making in my office and there a quote was put up -

"If only. Those must be the two saddest words in the world." - Mercedes Lackey

Hey Swathi thats such a poignant quote and yep those words must be the saddest

Reading your portrayal of Subbu and how his life changed with a wrong and selfish decision reminded me of it. Regret is one of the harshest and undeniable phases of everyone's life

Very difficult to get over and get on with life as you keep doubting your self after taking a wrong step

Regret is truly harsh since it is inescapable and undeniable and what makes it harsh is you know you are wrong and that you cant change things, it gnaws at you until you either do penance or ask forgiveness - neither of which is an option sometimes

In all your posts I have noticed that you have a way to pen emotions without going overboard and its very difficult to just be ON the line.👏

☺️ thank you going OTT is really not my thing 😳

But you superbly achieve it everytime. God bless you for that(with much much more valuable things than charged batteries of course😆)

😆amen to that and thanks

The way you used pathos in your writing shows how good you are at controlling your reader's emotions. You really are gifted my dear.

☺️ thanks Swathi

I purposely didnt point any particular line which stood out, as for me, it was not one or 2 lines but the way it was written, the flow of emotions, which stood out.

I dont know if I am making sense but hoping you got what i meant😕

😆 dont worry you made perfect sense

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

finally read both updates...

so sorry Aani for being so late😳😳...

my god i amazed reading it...

its personally one of my fav stories of urs..

u knw very well how much i am against Subbu entry and jealousy track..

and here i read something different...not the jealous Raman but a man regretting what he let go... i loved it...specially loved the second part...

i was amazed reading the every line of it...

so wish to see Subbu's entry for regrets what he missed... give justice to Ishita , that this guy is suffering now..

dnt wanna see raman jealous coz of Subbu...

loved both the parts Aani

Originally posted by: remya1990

Ohh Aani...a masterpiece... I love your writings.

the entire talk between Raman and Ishita gave the answer for subbu' selfishness. I actually have no words to tell you how your writing is Aani. I have read it 4 times and still searching for words to tell how your story was. Couldn't. I love to read your writings as my favourite author'.

waiting for your next creative writing.

stay blessed Aani.

Originally posted by: VENBA

Beautiful update...👏👏

Superb..👍🏼

Thanks for the pm...😊😊

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

lovely updates..!!

both were just awsum.!

loved it..!

do continue soon..!

and if possible do pm me for next updates..::)

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was So Beautiful and Nice TS.😳

The whole part was so nicely explained.😊

ISHRA moments were so cute and lovely and their conversation was so cute.😳

The way Raman explins how much he loves her was so cute.

Subbu wife wanted Divorce,it was interesting.😊

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.

I'm sorry for not commenting on last part,actually I am suffering from Fever and I am busy at my studies.Please Forgive me...😭

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant..👏

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Res

Originally posted by: avni_19

Sorryy for the delay in replying. My account was not working for few days. Now all set!

Brilliant update! i loved raman ishita's conversation! too goodd!!

You have written them beautifully with all the emotions attached at the right places! perfect update indeed! kudos!

A whirlpool of emotions! Brilliant!

Originally posted by: Manchalateriore

Omg i loved tht