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Posted: 11 years ago
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Back with part 5!! Kindly ignore the mistakes

Part 5

"How shameless can this raavan kumar get??" She questioned herself.
Little did she know that this was just the beginning and her raavan kumar won't stop until he got what he wanted from her.

Ishita screamed at him much louder than she originally planned.
Ishita: NO RAMAN! I'll do it myself. Aur mihika hai na. She'll help me. You go and rest. You must be very tired na?

Raman: Arre oh madrasan! I'm telling you na, ki main tumhari help karoongi. Toh issme discuss karne ki kya baat hai? Pati hoon main tumhari.. Haqq hai mera tum par. Aur waise bhi mauka mila hai toh haath se jaane mat de. Baar baar main tumhe nahaane mein help nahi karne wala. But if you want...

Saying that he gave her a wink and disappeared into their room. Ishita's mouth had fallen to her feet and she didn't have the guts to even look at the family members. To make the situation worse, mihika started laughing at ishu's flabbergasted expression. Before anyone could comment on this new side of raman, ruhi and shravu returned from school and ruhi ran right into her ishima's arms. Ishita thanked her murugan for sending ruhi at the right time. "This little angel is always a life saver!", she thought.

Ruhi: Ishima how are you feeling now? Abhi bhi pain ho rahi hai? Aap ko pata hai. Ruhi ne jab aapko hospital mein dhekha, toh ruhi bahut sad sad ho gayi. Par baad mein laga, ruhi ki ishima toh ruhi ki tarah strong hai na! And now that you've come home I'm going to take care of you! Sabse pehli baat, aap kitchen ka koi kaam nahi karenge.

Everybody laughed at the little grandma. Ishita promised her princess that she would follow all her orders. Ruhi helped ishita walk to her room and made her sleep on the bed. Raman kept stealing glances at the two most important beings in his life- his wife and their daughter.

Ishita woke up with a scream. Raman, who was in the living room heard her and ran into the room at the speed of light. The rest of the bhalla family also came.

Raman: Ishita kya huva?? Kuch bolo ishita. Main hoon na. Im right here. Kuch nahin huva hai.
Everyone had a worried look on their faces.

Ishita: Raman kuch nahin. It was just a nightmare. I'm fine.
Ishita gave an assuring smile at the family and they let a sigh of relief and resumed whatever they were doing. However raman kept staring at her. She snapped her fingers at him.

Ishita: Tumhe kya huva? Maine kaha na. I'm fine.

Raman: Nahin I was just worried...

Ishita: Arre wah! Raavan kumar se Caring kumar ban gayi kiya? Waise wahan hospital mein you were saying something. "Ishu main tumhari bina..." If I remember correctly, tum aise hi kuch bola tha na.

It was raman's turn to go speechless this time. He racked his brains for a proper answer.

Raman: Oye zyada udd mat. Maine aisa kuch nahi kaha tha. Maine bas yahin kaha ki ruhi tumhari bina nahi rehe paaongi. Ruhi ki ishima jo hoon. Paagal madrasan. Tumhe na dentist nahin, architect banna chahiye tha.

Ishita: Haww! Kyun?

Raman:Hawaa main itni badi badi fascinating castles jo bana rahi hai.
Raman chuckled.

Ishita: Tum hamesha meri profession ko beech mein kyun laate ho. Jhalan ho raha hai kya? That you don't have DOCTOR attached to your name?
Ishita raised her eyebrows at him.

Raman: Even if I wanted to become a doctor, I wouldnt have become one like you. Paagal and stupid.

Ishita opened her mouth to snap at him again when he closed her mouth with his palm. Both got lost in each other's eyes for sometime. *the title song can be heard very evidently in the background*

Raman broke the trance and took her in his arms. It took ishita few seconds to register what is happening.

Ishita: Raman what are you doing? Put me down.

Raman: I'm sure you want to shower and freshen up before having lunch.

Ishita couldn't believe her ears. Raavan kumar is actually sticking by his words! She tried thrashing her legs and he only smiled in response. He took her to the bathroom where he had already kept a stool for her to sit. Ishita tried her last attempt to convince him that she can shower by herself.

Ishita: Umm raman. I'll do this myself. Tum please bahar jaao. I'll call you when I'm done. I'm fine.

Raman didn't say anything. Instead he went to the door and locked it making ishita's heart jump a mile.

**Little mature content ahead**

He went behind her and untied her dori. Ishita closed her eyes at his touch. Her pallu had already fallen on her lap. He removed her blouse and threw it to the side. Ishita was too lost and could not control the blush that crept up to her cheeks. And before she could register, he had removed her sari and she was in her bra and panties.

Raman gulped down the lump formed in his throat. "Damn she is gorgeous!!", he thought.

He tried to divert his mind from her body while he unhooked her bra. He made her stand up while he removed her panties. And he couldnt help but press his mouth to the column of her neck and to his surprise, she tilted her head giving him more access. He stroked the length of her spine and she shivered in pleasure. He continued placing wet kisses down her spine. He felt her knees giving away and knew if he didn't stop right now it'd be too late to stop. So he made her sit and took a step back.

Ishita opened her eyes and realized what state she was in. She tried to cover her front with her arms. Raman knew she was shy. And he involuntarily told her that she is beautiful. Ishita blushed more if possible. Raman took the shampoo and washed her long silky hair. He loved how the water trickled down the length of her hair. After rinsing her hair, he couldnt help but bury his head in her hair and smell the fresh aroma. She sighed in contentment.

Meanwhile Mrs. Iyer came searching for ishita. She had made her favourites for lunch. She asked toshiji where ishu was and she told him they were in the room. She heard the sound of water running in the bathroom. She knocked on the door and called out to ishita

Mrs. Iyer: Ishu.. Are you in there??

Ishita and raman was startled and raman dropped the water jug he was holding.

Ishita: Raman... Amma!!! Aiyoo murugan. Woh kya sochengi jab usse pata chalengi ki aap mujhe sach mein...
She looked down embarassed.

Mrs. Iyer and Toshiji both heard the jug falling and got worried.

Toshiji: Ishita. Sab teekh hai na? Kuch bol kyun nahin rahi hai?

Raman secretly whispered in her ears in a teasing way.
Raman: Yeh toh sach mein bahut galat baat hui ishita. If everyone in the house gets to know that I'm actually helping you shower toh woh log kya kya sochengi.. Tumahi naak katt jaayengi!

Ishita: Tum chup rahiye! Sab tumhari ghalti hai. Kya zaroorat thi mujhe...

She was cut off by Mrs. Iyer's voice.

Mrs. Iyer: Ishu.. Agar kuch chaahiye toh bolo. Sirf hum dono hai yahan.

"Aur yahan raavan kumar bhi hai", ishita thought. She quickly replied to them.

Ishita: Nahin nahin amma. Main teekh hoon. Bas jug gir gayi thi. I'll be out in a minute!

Toshiji and Mrs. Iyer waited for ishita to come out.

Mrs. Iyer: Santoshi.. Ek baat bataao. How long can a shower take?? Mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai. Agar ishu ko kuch huva toh??? She wont even tell. She's too shy. Since childhood. I think I should go inside and check on her...

Precap: Toshiji and Mrs. Iyer finds the duplicate key to the bathroom!!

Thats it guys!! I skipped my zumba class to write this

Please comment and buddy me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

OMG...!!!
The part was just...wow...!!! i am speechless..!! :D :D Raman indeed shocked and embarrassed her in front of both families..!! ahh..!! Mr. Raman Romantic Bhalla..!!! hahahahhaha...i so loved him..!!! I was just reading all in awww...!! It was a fab...wonderful...amazing...superb part...!!! I sooo loved this part...!!

Ruhi was indeed a saviour for ishita even when her own sister made her more embarrassed by laughing..!!! But seriously raman had guts to say all that..!! heheh..!!
I have read the part about two times..!! and again going to read that after commenting..!!!

Raman and Ishita's fights were super fun..!! Somethings never change..!! heheeheh...!! And their moment were superb...heehehe...!! Indeed both look adorable with each other...!!! I so love this couple...:D :D :)

Raman was damm adamant...he helped her..!!! But the most funny scene was when amma and toshiji were asking her whether she is fine and need help and Ishita blaming him while raman was still in his naughty mood...!!

But you ended it on such a note..!! ahhh..!! I was so excited to know what have had happened next..:P Plz Plz it's a request..plz update next part as soon as possible..!! I am so loving this ss..!! And really can't wait to read more..>!!! Plz Plz it is really a genuine request plz try to post next asap...!! And even longer one..!! Plz PLz..!!!!

I hope u will not disappoint me..!! well but first look at your comfort...!! I will wait..:P :D

But dont make us wait for a long tym..!!
M dying to read more...!!
Continue soon..!!
take care..!!
luy ya... :D
& "GOOD JOB" :D :D
Edited by desire_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
wow... this part was simply.. mindblowing... i loved dis romantic kumar bhalla even more... it was sooo sooo super... i have no words to explain how much i enjoyed... i could just say a STANDING OVATION TO UR WRITEUPS... u r an awesome writer yaar... esp the mature content...😉 plzzz update the next part soon... bcoz i cant wait for a long time... dying to read the next part... plzzz continue sooonnn yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Fantastic
Will Raman be caught by his MIL AND MOM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Really good I really hope they go in the bathroom and see Raman
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Loved it.precap was hilarious. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was hot
BT promo is super hilarious
update soon n Thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap: Toshiji and Mrs. Iyer finds the duplicate key to the bathroom!!
yar bathroom door ka b koi duplicate key rakhta h kya..? 😆 😆 😆😆 (Sory but dis was my 1st reactn after readng precap)
i lyk dis new caring kumar... kacha aam ab pakk gaya h pura.. ☺️
loved dis bathroom romance.. 😳
waitng 4 ntx updt as wat will hapnd if tosh g nd mrs.iyer gt 2 knw abt raman aslo dere in bathrum... too much excted 😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well duplicate key rakhta nahin hai but every lock has got three keys so lets just assume they didn't throw it away and kept it randomly 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope ruhi again from sumwhere out of blue will work as a saviour for them..!!
It would be quite embarrassing...:P :P :P
waiting

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