Till Last Breath... (A IshRa Drabble) Completed!! - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart




hey... first I would like to say, your siggie is very cute.. I loved it!

thnks a lot...
will be updating soon...



thank you so much im soon getting there not really a pro yet 😉
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Awesome update. You brought Shagun to play cupid, that's refreshingly clever.
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Beautiful update love it please continue. 😛




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Awesome update. You brought Shagun to play cupid, that's refreshingly clever.




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Last Part


She was sitting alone in the clinic, all her appointments had already been taken care of and she was sitting in her cabin deep in thought. All that had happened a while ago, during lunch, it wasn't that he had hidden his friendship with her, not even the feeling that she had for him he had told her everything about it, but still she felt miserable.

Why she never felt like this, why her heart didn't tear apart like this when Subbu had told her that he was in love with Sukriti, and he had never even thought about her and that he would never like a girl like her ever. That she was never his type.' She did feel sad and she did felt broken about this fact that she had loved a man who would never return her love but right now what she was feeling was completely different from everything thing that she had with Subbu.

Right now her heart was bleeding even though she knew that he was never in love with Shagun but still seeing them together had broken all the hopes and dreams that she had built recently. But the real truth was seeing Shagun and the fact that she was so beautiful and yet he had declined her love was something she couldn't digest and on other hand had married her, a very ordinary looking girl, who was rejected by a very ordinary looking man, and yet this handsome looking man, had married her!

Why would he marry her?' This was the question that she was asking from the first time she had seen his face in the mandapum.

While she was in all these thoughts her phone rang breaking her trance, and she looked at the screen in surprise. It was an unknown number."

"Hello.."

"Neha!! Hi... yeah... no yaar I am fine... God its been years since we met... yeah... WHAT!!! Are you serious?? Yeah... but... at last minute you are telling me... No yaar... I mean and its almost 8:00 PM... I have a family yaar... I know.. but it won't be possible... Okay okay I will try...yep byee..."

She smiled and looked at the phone. Just as she was about to keep the phone in to her purse, it rang again. She picked up hesitantly looking at the caller id.

"Hello... Raman?" she inquired.

"Tum kahan ho yaar? Ye Ruhi kab se Maa ko pareshaan kar rahi hai... baar baar pooch rahi hai...8:00 baj gaye hain... itni der tak kya kar rahi ho? Tumhari clinic toh 7:00 baje band ho jati hai? Aur Maa keh rahi thi tumne appointments cancel ki thi?" he asked, his voice contained worry.

"Haan woh... kuch problem ho gayi thi isiliye... mai bass nikal hi rahi thi..." Ishita said hesitantly.

"Nahi... tum vahi ruko I am coming to get you..." he said

"Nahi Raman, I'll be fine... ye toh roz ki baat hai... mai aa jaungi..." She said hurriedly.

"Ishita wait karo, kaha na I am coming." He said adamantly.

"Raman... sachh mein I..." she again tried.

"Please yaar... Kabhi toh koi baat maan liya karo... Mai aa raha hoon, bass ye final hai.." and with that he hanged up the call before she could protest further.

She sat down dejected, all she wanted was some time alone and now he was coming, she didn't want to face him, not now, not for some time. She desperately needed sometime for herself, for some self thought, some solitude. She shook her head in exasperation and started to gather her stuff and got ready to leave. She knew he would be there in sometime and she didn't want him to wait.

After a few minutes he arrived and she sat in the passenger seat and he zoomed off.

In Car..

"uh.. Raman... actually woh mujhe kuch puchna tha..." She said hesitantly.

"Hmm..." he nodded for her to continue.

"Woh... mere batch mates ne reunion rakha hai... aur mujhe abhi abhi pata chala... my friends were asking me to join... maine unse kaha ke last minute kaise ... but maan hi nahi rahe the woh log... toh maine soch rahi thi ke kuch der ke liye chali jati..." she said.

"Toh chalte hain..." with that he looked at her with smile, while she turned to look at him in surprise.

"Don't tell me ke tum mujhe nahi le jana chahti..." he said in a mock surprise.

She was surprised that he wanted to go with her and so much that he had decided that himself.

"Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai... Aap chal sakte hain... maine isiliye nahi poocha kyu ki mujhe laga aap busy honge." She said in a low voice.

He smiled and said, "tumhare liye mai kabhi busy nahi hoon..."

She was surprised at his words and smiled but said nothing.

Then he called his office, "Hello Mihir, haan yaar, ye Ishita ke college mein reunion hai abhi, sunn aisa kar kal subah ki meeting shaam mein postpone kar de... nahi yaar... hmm... nahi theek hai...okay.. then bye."

"Arre aapne aise kyu kiya... mai akele chali jati aapne itni important meeting... meri wajah se postpone kar di..." she was feeling guilty that because of her he had to do this.

"1 min, tumhe aisa laga ke ye maine tumhare liye kiya hai? Toh madam get this thing clear, I have done everything for myself... I wanted to spend some time with you... So its not because of you but its all because of me... samjhi." He stopped the car and continued, "Ghar aa gaya hai... jalti jao and ready hokar aao... I will be waiting."

He just changed into one of his black shirts and black jeans and black jacket and left his top two buttons of the shirt open, showing a part of his chiseled chest, in other words he was looking absolutely Ravishingly handsome and hot!

She after a while climbed down the stairs, seeing him waiting by his car. A look at him and she was blown off by his handsome features, sharp jaw-line and his serious looks, all of them were making him irresistibly attractive.

While as he noticed her coming towards him, he was stunned seeing her soft hair that were left open, it was second time that he had seen her hair open and man he loved it. She was so natural in every way, her beauty had a type of freshness that he had seen for the first time, no maked up features, she had no artificiality about her, and that was why he was so much attracted to her.

As she stood infront of him in a white net saari, he gave her his hand still mesmerized by her soft glowing skin in moonlight and her smile that was making her more beautiful than she actually was.

She sat in the passenger seat while he took the driver seat and zoomed away.

In car they were both silent, both sneaking glances at each other. Raman, to break of the silence and awkwardness switched on the Radio, and a beautiful voice of Kshitij and Shilpa Rao filled the air in car, and a beautiful song came out...

Tose naina lage... piya saawre...

...and again she was lost in her new found feelings for the man sitting beside her. How cruel can life be...the man whom she thought she loved, he jerked her off because she was not beautiful nor was as much intelligent as compared to him, and here this man, who is much more handsome than any man she had seen and much more intelligent, who has acquired top most position in his life at such a young age, this most successful man of his age and at his age, for whom her supposedly first-love worked, she didn't wanted to marry him, and now, she couldn't even want to think if he didn't like her.

Life can be so diverting, it makes unthinkable happen, at the brink where life seems to end it gives a new chance to live, maybe that's the philosophy of life. It's a fiction which is being written by almighty, who can say anything to or question Him?

Then she looked at the man who was driving the car, a soft serene look on his face told her that he was not annoyed but rather was actually pleased to go with her... this fact satisfied her that she had not disturbed him. He even canceled his meeting for her, so that he could go with her to her simple reunion.

She knew that she was married to a man who was so important to the world, his every second was precious, he signed deals of crores every single day, people, his clients waited for one meeting with him for months, and he instilled everything for her, for her reunion. Was she really that important in his life to him? Or was he just doing out of courtesy and due to their relationship's sake. That has to be, after all she was no one compared to him, he was the best and here she was, a rejected one. How can she imagine herself to be someone he could like?

The car stopped infront of the venue, it was her college only, the reunion was planned in the great hall. They got out and then suddenly his phone rang, he looked at the id and looked at Ishita with apologetic face and said, "I am sorry Ishita, I have to take this call... tum ander jaao, I am coming in after a moment."

She nodded and went in.

As she went in, all the familiar faces surrounded her and she was enveloped in a bear hug by her besties.

"Oh My God! Ishu... you got married!! And what the hell you never even invited me..." said Anukriti

"Us... she didn't invite us..." said Neha in complaining tone.

"Where is your husband and our jija ji? You didn't bring him?" asked Anukriti looking around.

"He is coming... koi urgent call aa gaya tha..." Ishita replied.

"Office se hoga..." said a voice from behind her.

They all turned to look at the beholder of the voice and found none other than Sukriti who stood there smiling broadly, her arms laced with her husband who was none other than Subbu.

"After all, all can't get lucky to get a man at top position. You know na Subbu is the head of Technical Administration in none other than the best MNC under the best CEO RKB. And Subbu is his team member, we wouldn't have been able to come agar unhone meeting postpone nahi ki hoti. Subbu is always busy, you know.." As she told them that proudly, her husband slightly embarrassed moved out of her hold and without looking anywhere near Ishita left towards the group of his friends. " and you know what!! I have toh even seen RKB from so close, I have even attended his party, you know. Can you guys imagine? Log toh usse milne ke liye mahino intezaar karte hain..." Than she looked directly at Ishita, who was not paying any heed to her talks, rather she seemed lost in her own world and said,

"Gosh Ishita... tumhara husband kya karta hai? Aaya nahi tumhare saath?" her voice was filled with mock and pride.

"Come on Sukriti, sirf mili hi ho na RKB se shaadi toh ki nahi hai... usse toh tumhari shakal bhi yaad nahi hogi..." said Anukriti defending her friend.

"Jealous ho rahi ho Anu? But Anu, woh toh hona hi hai... jisse tumne sirf news mein aur magzines mein dekha hai usse maine haath shake kiya hai... and he is so handsome..." Sukriti said without paying any heed to Anukriti's previous remark.

After a while there was hustle-bustle all over the place, the only thing they could hear was astonishment in every one's voice.

"what happened... ye sab kya ho raha hai?" Asked Neha to one of the girls who was hurriedly reapplying her lipstic.

"Don't you know... RKB is here!!..." her voice had excitement.

"What!!" Neha and Anukriti looked at each other in shock while Sukriti was also in shock and even Ishita was in same condition.

How could she have forgotten this fact that he was not just an ordinary man but he was a celebrity! She mentally smacked herself, and tried to move forward, but she couldn't, everyone had crowded around him. She sighed and went behind the crowd and sat on one the chairs, seeing her going away her friends- Anu and Neha also sat beside her.

"Gosh Iss RKB ko bhi abhi aana tha.. ab toh Sukriti aur show off karegi... I hope vo uski shakal bhool gaya ho" Anu said while giggling.

"haan yaar... tab toh sachh mein badi embarrass ho jayegi... but yaar... ek baat samajh nahi aayi... ye toh Harvard ka banda hai... ye humari reunion mein kya kar raha hai...?" Neha asked confused.

"hmm... Mai bhi yehi soch rahi thi..." Anu exclaimed.

"Hey guys..." they heard Excited shrill of sukriti above their head and looked up and were surprised to see RKB standing with Subbu and Sukriti. They stood up almost immediately, while Sukriti was proud as ever and came forward, "Guys, he is RKB I was talking about... and RKB they are my few class mates... I hope you are comfortable? Par aap yahan humari reunion mein?" she asked showing off her friendly rapport with him to everyone and especially to Ishita and her friends.

"I am here with my wife..." he said and directly looked at Ishita, who just stood there in surprise, remembering the cold words by Subbu who once said, "You are one girl I would never want to acknowledge in front of anyone because it would only embarrass me." And here was this man who was acknowledging her infront of whole world, and his voice even had a tinge of pride while smile adorned his perfect lips.

Every one gasped and looked shocked.

"Wife?" Sukriti exclaimed, "Your wife is here?"

"Yes" he said with a smile and came forward and forwarded his hand infront of Ishita who took it shyly and pulled her towards him.

"I am sorry, bohot der Intezaar karane ke liye..." he said softly, to which she just nodded a No. "Apni friends se introduce nahi karvaogi?" he said in a complaining voice.

She smiled and nodded for a yes and said softly, "They are my friends, Anu and Neha... and guys... he is my husband Raman."

While the two said a simple *hi* to him and then turned their gazes at Sukriti whose mouth was open in a big O.

"By the way Subbu I didn't know ke tum bhi yahan aane wale ho..." Raman said while turning towards Subbu.

"Nahi sir vo meeting ki wajah se nahi aane wala tha but aapne meeting cancel kar di toh... anyways.. thanks so much sir." Subbu said and nugded his wife to do the same.

"Ji, thankyou, other wise hum ye reunion miss kar dete." Said Sukriti.

"Actually thank-you aap Ishita se kahiye kyu ki agar iska reunion nahi hota toh meeting postpone nahi hoti." Raman said and smiled towards Ishita who was feeling uncomfortable, as everybody was just looking at them.

Ishita who was standing just beside him, seeing her uncomfortable, he grabbed her and enveloped her in a side-hug and whispered, "Are you okay?"

"I think it's getting too late, Ruhi must be waiting..." she whispered back.

He nodded and said okay.

"Guys... we'll go now... its too late.." Ishita told her friends.

"But Ishu... its been only an hour... why are you going so early? We have met like after ages..." Neha pleaded.

"And phir pata nahi hum kab mile?" Anu said sadly.

"hey, Ishita why don't you invite them over dinner..." Raman said looking at Ishita.

While Ishita was surprised at the suggestion and just nodded, "okay then its decided, you both will be dining with us tomorrow evening at our home. Hey Subbu why don't you along with your wife and also join us?"

"No sir, tomorrow she is going to my mother's place." Said Subbu and excused him self along with his wife while his wife looked at him in anger and walked off.

They waved a bye and went off towards their home.

When they were in their room and had already changed, he in tracks and a t-shirt while she in loose kurta and leggings, she sat on bed on her side while he on his with his mac, he looked up from it and asked, "you didn't looked comfortable there... are you okay now? Why did you asked us to leave early?" he couldn't keep this question inside him any further.

She looked at him wide eyed, she wasn't expecting this question. But how was she supposed to tell him, would he be able to understand, but now he has to know about her, he has right and she must tell him now.

"Raman... I have to tell you something." Her voice was serious and it made him close his lappy and turn towards her, his all concentration was now on her and what she was going to tell.

"I didn't love you on the day of our marriage." She said and she heard his shock in his eyes and also hurt. But she continued, it was now or never.

"I liked someone else, he was my classmate in college. My friends knew about it and they used to tease me... and one day suggested me to confess my love for him and we decided that I would confess on our farewell."

He was sitting silent and was now looking away from her. And she continued...

"...and then the day came and I confessed to him but" she stopped and he looked at her, she had tears in her eyes and he looked away, "but he rejected me, saying that I was not pretty enough and chose another girl." she wiped tears off, and smiled.

"I felt miserable; I hated everything about me... My face, my body and entire me." He looked at her understanding her position but said nothing; he wanted her to pour out everything.

And she continued, "...and then you came, and everything changed. You agreed to marry me, all I never wanted was to enter a loveless marriage but I couldn't say no to it, because my family's happiness was based on it. I agreed, and I decided that now I would never expect anything from this marriage, I would rather surrender myself to my new life."

And then she smiled broadest and continued, "And then I entered this house and met Ruhi, Romi, who made my life a joyride. You were away for the first week of our marriage, but I never felt alone, Ruhi became my daughter and Romi was just like my younger brother that I always wanted. I had almost forgotten that I had a husband or the fact that I was married..." With that she giggled looked at him who looked annoyed and his gorgeous face showed hurt.

"And then you returned and my life took a new path, I anticipated so much on your return, but nothing ever got life, it remained just in thoughts and wayward anticipations. You never once forced me into any kind of physical relationship and I am so glad for that to you, It gave me enough time to think, about what I want. I don't know why you married me... why you behave around me like you like me... why you smile at me... but I want to tell you that in these few weeks... I have started to like you..." she looked at him in anticipation of his reaction to her feelings, but all she could see was his surprise. And so she continued, little disappointed,

"I know that I am not beautiful and you are one man that every woman wants in their life, I really don't know why you agreed to marry me but..." she couldn't complete when he bend forward and took her words with her soft lips in his in a soul-searing kiss. She was too shocked to react but gave in as she felt his hand on her neck caressing her and bending her neck backwards so that he can have better access, he then he deepened the kiss and after a while left her mouth and moved towards her creamy neck, inhaling her toxic scent and trailed kisses on every inch of it, while she sat in same position with her head bending back and her eyes close and her breathing erratic.

"...because I love you..." he mumbled as he kissed at the hollow of her neck and brought her towards him. She gasped at his sudden confession as he took her lips in his again in a passionate kiss.

And then he left her and moved back a little and looked at her with a satisfied but shy smile, his eyes were sparkling in happiness and he hugged her tightly and she hugged him back with a smile blushing profusely.

And then a new morning came with bright future, and IshRa started a journey to a love filled days and years ahead, while all the guilt that Raman had held for all these years returned to Ruhi in the form of love of a father and towards a new life they went, with nothing but love and happiness.

The End

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Okays so that's it!

It's finally finished. Hope this part is not much corny and if you find it boring then I m sorry... hope its readable...

Thanks so much

Writing in this forum was fun!!

Edited by OfTheHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
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yayy. me 1st🥳

aww, that was such a beautiful, amazing ending👏⭐️
i loved it😃

that damn subbu's wife was so freaking annoying 😡.
urgh, and subbu was an absolute jerk to react so rudely to ishita's feelings 😡.

raman was an absolute gentleman 😳. loved him and lovedd the full black attire (drooling..)
ishita is a good soul and it would have been awesome if she shut that sukriti up but oh well😆
am glad she shared her past and insecurities with raman 👍🏼.
and i loved his response and confession to her...❤️☺️

thoroughly enjoyed this story😃
it was wonderful⭐️
hope u write something on IshRa again soon😊
take care
Edited by Rozy77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

res
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yayy. me 1st🥳

aww, that was such a beautiful, amazing ending👏⭐️
i loved it😃

that damn subbu's wife was so freaking annoying 😡.
urgh, and subbu was an absolute jerk to react so rudely to ishita's feelings 😡.

raman was an absolute gentleman 😳. loved him and lovedd the full black attire (drooling..)
ishita is a good soul and it would have been awesome if she shut that sukriti up but oh well😆
am glad she shared her past and insecurities with raman 👍🏼.
and i loved his response and confession to her...❤️☺️

thoroughly enjoyed this story😃
it was wonderful⭐️
hope u write something on IshRa again soon😊
take care





Thanks a lot!!
I loved writing on IshRa as well... and I am so happy that you liked it...
Thanks so reading and appreciating... it has always been very motivating...🤗
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beautiful ending 🤗




Thanks...😊
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👏👏👏BESTEST ENDING EVER




Thanks a lot for appreciation...😊
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