IshRa SS - Forbidden Love - Prologue Pg1 (16.09.14)

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whitelily

@whitelily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

interesting prologue 👍🏼

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

reserved,

im so mean. i read and then comment 23687254 years later 😳

sowieee ☺️ 😛

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

interesting prologue👍🏼
cannot imagine raman to be like this.. but its different and am looking forward to this ss
do continue soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome. this is interesting start

Raman hated ishita and she means nothing to him yet he want to use her to fulfill his needs.

i am eager to know what ishita thinks about their marriage.

looking forward to read next chapter.

update soon

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

intrstng...pls cntinue...pm me fr nxt update...

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

interesting start.. raman character is different.. waiting to read more.. plz pm wen u update...

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
No doubt this is wonderfully written Anu but.. somehow its very disturbing to read to be honest, I hope I didnt offend you but if I did I am sorry... its just it seems ... so horrid to even consider this - that a woman would have to be subjected to a kind of domestic and sexual violence in lieu of a child. That she be considered just a body and not a person...once again am sorry if I hurt you, didn't mean it but this just gives vibes that really jolted me.

I am not at all offended Aani...

To be honest, this was the one reason I was so scared to post this prologue.. I was scared of the reactions I may get..

I just wanted to experiment with the characters. I was kinda skeptical when I started typing casue even I wasn't able to connect through to the characters for a while but then I tried a bit harder and dared to post.. I would certainly agree that it's a really disturbing thought.. It got me for sometime as well..

I totally understand your POV on this one.. Believe me, I won't mind one bit of you chose to ignore this story because I know, it's hard to read a story if you are unable to connect with it.. 😳

I'm really sorry if this disturbed you very much.!

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

I am not at all offended Aani...
To be honest, this was the one reason I was so scared to post this prologue.. I was scared of the reactions I may get..
I just wanted to experiment with the characters. I was kinda skeptical when I started typing casue even I wasn't able to connect through to the characters for a while but then I tried a bit harder and dared to post.. I would certainly agree that it's a really disturbing thought.. It got me for sometime as well..
I totally understand your POV on this one.. Believe me, I won't mind one bit of you chose to ignore this story because I know, it's hard to read a story if you are unable to connect with it.. 😳

I'm really sorry if this disturbed you very much.!

Dont be sorry Anu, anything that comes to you, which inspires you no matter the nature of content is always something you should be proud of.

Only I didnt see this coming that is all, it took me by surprise... the thing is when I read such stories that deal with the content of this nature - I know the book contains this subject matter and on FF sites mostly they write a note - that this could trigger things... here it was not there and so I kinda just went in and the effect was Whoa OMG I didnt see it coming and moreover since Raman isnt this man it kinda rattled me but you have really written it so amazingly - that its a nod to your skills I could feel the things I did

I am unsure if I would be able to proceed on this one but if I do, I would surely let you know what I thought of the UD 😳

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sudhajo

@sudhajo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

great start... plz pm if possible.

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Amazing.. Raman in this story is different.. I am sure their is something behind this and Ishita would bring him back from Ravan avtar... Will be waiting to see how. Please continue soon...

Thanks for the pm.. :)