Into the mind of a FATHER - OS - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshi33

Wow... This was so wonderfully written...😃

Fab job...😃


Thanks Arshi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

As always a delightful read Bhanu

this is a pair I would love to see interact on the show to be honest but alas... dil ke armaan

I loved how Raman' dad wants him to realize the importance of Ishita in his life, how a fear of a heartbreak is somehow keeping him away from a lovely woman with whom life has given him a second chance at love and happiness...the kind Bhalla Sr. has had the pleasure to live with his better half and now wants his eldest to have too.. esp since he missed out on it the first time around and just like he had the foresight to know Ishita would be the perfect woman for their family, he knows should Raman trust himself and her, show some faith and courage - she would truly make his son' life blissful and happy... he would be content knowing his eldest born isn't alone in a way anymore, esp since now the only thing keeping him away from that shot at happiness and love is he himself.


I particularly loved the ending but Bhanu...how could you end it there... pretty please try to write more on this make this a TS or write a sequel 😳


Aani ... 🤗 .. always a pleasure to find you in my posts ... Amen to your first thought .. may be someday CVs do show some interaction between this father son duo ... sadly they have cornered both the fathers after Ishra marriage and it is unfair to be honest ...

I think the biggest challenge in any relationship is the self-acknowledgement and Ishra are hoinh through a similar phase where both of them understand each other as a companion perfectly, yet have not even given a thought about the "What Next" phase ...

This was actually a request from Paru where she wanted a cliche talk between the father son duo, so I had visualized it till this point only ... BUT she also wanted something romantic, cliche, fun ... and my attempt to make it remotely similar to it failed ... so I have promised her a romantic sequel ... have to sit and visualize and try hard to make sure this time I pass in my exam 😆😆

So ... I promise this will either be a TS or there will be a sequel ... the only challenge is When ... Me doing my homework diligently .. dekhte hai kitna time lagta hai 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome and so beautiful

the father son conversation was very well written and it totally rocked.
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Thanks Javeria ... Glad to know you liked my attempt 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful, Bhanu! 😊
The entire conversation between father and son was so heartwarming. I really want to see this scene on the show. Its long overdue.
Mr. Bhalla is probably the best person to explain to Raman how much his life has changed since Ishita has entered his life. Especially since it was he who took the decision of getting Raman married to Ishita in the first place.
I really liked how he was trying to get his son into admitting to his feelings, coaxing him to come out of his shell and urging him to move forward in life. Very well written..
Loved it 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, so beautifully written on the relationship on Mr Bhalla-Raman, a bond that has not fully been explored and showed on screen. Would love to see both of them share heart-to-heart talk like this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow bhanu. loved father son convo. i wish you continue more to emotional raman talking with father . i want to know about what raman shared with father about his wife in more details
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TAKE A BOW GIRL ..

The depth of feelings u can convey in a sentence .. is astounding ..
For me a fav writer is someone who can titlate me .. but can also make me think .. they can woo me .. but also make me smile .. can transport me but also touch my heart ... this story of urs will stay with me for a longtime ...

what i love about ur style of writing is .. there are 2 meanings to the tale .. one surface one deeper .. ur happy with the surface .. but the moment u delve deeper it blows u away ..

Its eloquent . its brilliant .. its mesmerising .. i totally loved it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nrn1486

Beautiful, Bhanu! 😊

The entire conversation between father and son was so heartwarming. I really want to see this scene on the show. Its long overdue.
Mr. Bhalla is probably the best person to explain to Raman how much his life has changed since Ishita has entered his life. Especially since it was he who took the decision of getting Raman married to Ishita in the first place.
I really liked how he was trying to get his son into admitting to his feelings, coaxing him to come out of his shell and urging him to move forward in life. Very well written..
Loved it 😊😊


Thank you Dear 😊.
I so want something like this to happen rather than the pathetic MU track they have taken ... how I wish something like this ever happened on the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rev4eva

Wow, so beautifully written on the relationship on Mr Bhalla-Raman, a bond that has not fully been explored and showed on screen. Would love to see both of them share heart-to-heart talk like this...



Thank you Dear 😊. Glad to know you liked it.

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