Into the mind of a FATHER - OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy

wow bhanu. loved father son convo. i wish you continue more to emotional raman talking with father . i want to know about what raman shared with father about his wife in more details

Zeno ... 🤗 . I also want this relationship to be explored ... but I guess will have to be satisfied with the OS itself because there is no hope of anything like this in the YHM for sure.

Originally posted by: madhavimanish32

awesome

Thank you Madhavi 😊

Originally posted by: redwine1

TAKE A BOW GIRL ..

The depth of feelings u can convey in a sentence .. is astounding ..

For me a fav writer is someone who can titlate me .. but can also make me think .. they can woo me .. but also make me smile .. can transport me but also touch my heart ... this story of urs will stay with me for a longtime ...

what i love about ur style of writing is .. there are 2 meanings to the tale .. one surface one deeper .. ur happy with the surface .. but the moment u delve deeper it blows u away ..

Its eloquent . its brilliant .. its mesmerising .. i totally loved it ..

Ruby 🤗 ... u made me blush with the comment ... I share friendly terms with you and we chat and have fun on a daily basis but that does not mean I for once can forget the brilliant writer in you ... so when such comments and reviews come from someone like you, they definitely take the top spot ... 😳😳 ...

Am not so happy with ongoing track, it is taking the regular jealousy track as always, therefore was reading my own old stuff and I realized I never responded to you ... so kaan pakad ke sorry for that ... your comment always brings a smile on my face ... 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..👏

Thank you dear 😊.

Hey bhanu...😛 a very beautiful OS.. I dunno how I missed this... But...I love this show and one of the reasons is the wonderful ensemble and how everyone is a part of the story in a unique way...loved this scene between father son the way you have written it.. How I wish they showed something like this on the show... Leads ke beech conversation na sahi such a scene would be so awesome...

Originally posted by: janu12345

Hey bhanu...😛 a very beautiful OS.. I dunno how I missed this... But...I love this show and one of the reasons is the wonderful ensemble and how everyone is a part of the story in a unique way...loved this scene between father son the way you have written it.. How I wish they showed something like this on the show... Leads ke beech conversation na sahi such a scene would be so awesome...

Thank you Janu ... I so wish this happens in the show .. but with the recent track ... this looks like a lost dream only ... so guess will have to settle for the OS world instead

Thank you for appreciating my work 😊

Yet another beautiful piece of writing I guess... Mr. Bhalla's thoughts and concerns were amazingly described...