Hello my dear YHMians😃😃. Im still not able to recover from the lovely Ishra scene last night. And I am sure all DIVAN fans are in the same situation⭐️⭐️. I am back with part 2 of my earlier OS: "Ishima's Surprise"😊. I just couldnt squeeze in time to get it completed earlier. Took me some effort as I wanted to make the post special with some images]. So I'm posting it now😊. If you want to read part 1 of this OS it's in the link below:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4127040/ishra-os-ishimas-surprise
I have once again color-coded the dialogues for Raman[blue],Ishita[green] and Ruhi[pink] and other characters[Purple] and have included Hindi-English translations in brackets. I really apologize. It went longer than I expected it to go😛. This scene follows the next day after the wonderful night surprise given to Ishu by Raman and Ruhi.😳😳
A scene from this OS is inspired by the movie "Hum Hai Raahi pyaar Ke"😃. I really like that movie and I find the relation between Aamir-Juhi somewhat similar to the one between Ishra😃. Also, Juhi is a Tamilian in the movie. Also please note that I have included some Tamil dialogues.😛 Being a non-Tamilian, I do not know if i have done justice to them. So all Tamilian readers as Raman says: "Please forgive me if something is wrong. And try to connect with it".😛 And also please pardon my Hindi grammatical mistakes too.😛
Scene setting: The next day [after Raman and Ruhi gave the midnight surprise to Ishu].😊
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It is almost 5:30 AM and Raman wakes up to the noise of the cell vibrating beside him. He wakes up and sees that the sun is faintly out. He puts his phone on silent mode and slips it into his pocket. If it had been another day, it would always be Ishita who would be the first one to get up and he would get up much later. But not today! Today was a special day. It was her birthday and he wanted to make it special in every sense for her. He looks beside him to see the lovely mother daughter duo curled up with each other and his face lit up in a smile.
He slowly lifts himself from the bed and walks out of the room stealthily ensuring that there is pin-drop silence. He closes the room door and freshens up in the washroom.
He enters the kitchen area and thinks to himself "This must be the best gift from me to Ishita. I really have to do a good job in preparing this breakfast for her😊". He suddenly remembers the previous day conversation that he had with Amma.
Raman: Amma kal Ishita ka birthday hai. Toh maine socha hai ke uske liye kuch khaas nashta banau aur usse surprise karoon. Kya aap mujhe bataa sakte hai ko Ishita ko kaisa South Indian khaana pasand hai? [Amma tomorrow is Ishita's brithday. So I have thought about making some special breakfast and surprising her. Can you tell me what kind of South Indian food Ishita likes]
Amma: Aiyo Raman..romba nalla..Nee romba nallavan..Hamari Ishu ko Idli aur pongal bahut pasand hai. [Aiyo Raman..very nice..you are a very nice person. Ishu likes idli and pongal very much]
Raman: Accha..Aur amma usko kounsa sweet zyaada pasand hai? [Ok Amma. and what sweet dish does she like most?]
Amma: Raman Ishu ko paayasam bahut pasand hai. [Ishu likes paayasam a lot]
Raman: Amma kya aap mujhe in sab cheezon ka recipe or banaane ke liye thoda tips dengi [Amma can you give me the recipes and tips to prepare these dishes?]
Amma: Aiyo..bilkul Raman..tum itna sab kuch mere Ishu ke liye kar rahe ho..Mai zaroor tumhari maddat karoongi. [Aiyo..of course Raman.You are doing so much for Ishu. I will definitely help you out with this]
He decides to make idli, chutney and paayasam for her. Amma gives him the recipes of all the dishes and gives him a few tips and guidelines how to make them efficient. She offers to help also, but Raman says that he wants to do it alone, as this is his special gift to Ishu. He also tells her that she need not worry, as Neelu is there to help him out in case he needs any help.
He snaps out of his thoughts and decides to make the coconut chutney first. He pulls out his phone and follows the recipe diligently. He puts on the apron and starts cooking.
The entire house is silent as everyone are sleeping and he turns on the mixer to prepare the chutney. He completes making the chutney. It is almost 6:00 AM and he sees Neelu walking up to the kitchen counter.
Neelu: Arrey bhaiyya aap? Aaap kyun khaana bana rahe hai? Mai karloongi na. Aap jakar soyiye bhaiyya. [Brother..why are you preparing food? I will make it. You can go and sleep]
Raman: Arre Neelu..Itna tension kyun? Aaj na tumhari bhaabhi ka janam din hai. Isliye maine socha uske liye nashta banaake usko surprise karoon. [Hey Neelu..Why so much tension? Today is Ishita's birthday. So I thought I shall prepare breakfast and surprise her]
Neelu opens her mouth in surprise to see that Raman in a not sadu mood.
Neelu: Accha theek hai bhaiyya. Mai ghar ki safaayi karne jaarahi hoon. Agar aapko kuch bhi chahiye toh mujhe bulaalena. [Ok that's fine brother. I shall go clean up around the house. If you need help with anything please call me.]
Raman: Theek hai. Tum jaao. [Alright. You can go]
He then starts preparing the paayasam. He had all the right ingredients, but he wasn't sure about how much sugar he should be adding. Thinking to himself "Yeh madraasan ke liye kitna shakkar daloon yaar..Hamesha lecture deke mujhe sulaadeti hai Jhansi ki Rani..Par ha us din jab mai tea bana raha tha or woh coffee , kuch zyaada hi shakkar daal diya tha madam ne..Chalo Raman beta ..woh sab bhool jao..Jaise bhi banega baad mei dekha jaayega"..[How much sugar do I put for this madraasan?. Everythime she opens her mouth she gives a lecture and drives me to sleep, this Jhansi ki Rani..On that day, when I was making tea and she was making coffee, didn't madam put a lot of sugar..Ok Raman..forget all that..However it comes out, we shall bother about that later]
He puts what he feels is an appropriate amount of sugar. The paayasam gets ready. He then removes the idli batter and carefully pours it into the plates and lets them steam for a few minutes.
It's almost 6:45 AM and his mother wakes up on hearing the steam cooker whistles. She walks into the kitchen and is surprised to see Raman there.
Toshiji: Haye Raman puttar..kee hoya? Itni savere savere kitchen mai kya kar rahe ho? Kuch chahiye tha kya puttar? [Raman..what happened? What are you doing in the kitchen up so early? You needed something my son?]
Raman: Maa..aisi koi baat nahi hai..woh kya hai na..aaaj aapki laadli bahu ka janam din hai..toh isliye maine socha ki usko surprise karne ke liye kuch naashta banaloo. [Mom, there's nothing like that..today is your loved daughter-in-law's birthday..So I thought of surprising her by making this breakfast]
Toshiji: Haaye mere puttar..Bahut vadiya..patni ke liye cooking shooking seekh rahe ho.. [Oh my son..This is great..Learning cooking shooking for your wife]
Raman: Kya maa..aap bhi na [What maa..you also started off]
Toshiji: Sharma mat mere happy..kinna accha gal kar rahe ho tussi..Ishita jaroor khush ho jayegi.. [Don't be shy my "Happy" You are doing such a nice thing..ishita will definitely be very happy]
She leaves from there happily, leaving a smiling Raman. He scoops out the idlis and places them in a hot box. He places all the dishes on the dining table.
Meanwhile in the room, Ishita wakes up and is surprised not to see Raman. She thinks he might have to leave for work early and so hence must be getting ready in the washroom. She then tries to wake up Ruhi, but Ruhi is going on with her "Five minutes..please Ishima" jap. Raman walks into the room and Ishita looks at him, and he smiles at her. She smiles back at him and decides to take a quick shower and then wake up Ruhi. She picks up her clothes and is walking towards the bathroom, when Raman suddenly grabs her hand. Ishita looks at him in surprise. He walks towards her, looking into her eyes and says "Happy birthday my dear Jhansi ki Rani. Thank you for coming into Ruhi's and my life. I really wish all your wishes are fulfilled". Ishita becomes all teary-eyed and looks up at him "Thank you my dear Raavan Kumar. Mere sab wishes are already fulfilled. I have you and Ruhi with me and I do not wish for anything more". They exchange a mini eyelock with a smile and he then lets go of her hand. She walks away blushing profusely at the encounter that just passed between them.
She gets ready and wakes Ruhi. Ruhi doesn't budge, so she goes towards her and starts tickling her. Ruhi starts giggling and wakes up and Ishita gets her ready. She walks upto the kitchen and sees that Neelu and Toshiji are already there and they are smiling at her. They both wish her for her birthday and she asks Toshiji what to prepare for breakfast.
Ishita: Mummyjee aap boliye naa..Aaaj naashte mai kya banao. [Mummyjee tell me na..what do you want me to prepare for today's breakfast?]
Toshiji: Tu aaj nashte ka chinta na kar Ishita. Waha dining table per kuch hai. Jaake zara dekhna. [You do not worry about breakfast today Ishita. there's something there on the dining table. Go and check it once]
Ishita walks to the dining table and sees that there are idlis in a hotbox, a bowl of chutney and another dish filled with her favourite paayasam. Her face lights up in a smile and she turns to Toshiji and asks her:
Ishita: Mummyjee aapne yeh sab banaya? [Mummyjee did you make all this?]
Toshiji: Naa Ishita..yeh maine thodi banaaya..yeh mera puttar da kamaal hai..Aaaj mere happy ne apne haathon se tumhaari liye ishpecial naashta baanaya hai Ishita. [No Ishita. I did not make all this. This is the magic of my son. Today my "Happy" a special breakfast for you Ishita all by himself]
Ishita's happiness knew no bounds. 😃😃 She is beaming with joy and has tears stemmed in her eyes. She now realized the reason for his absence from the room this morning. She loved his gesture so much that she repeatedly thought about it and couldn't stop blushing. First the night cake surprise and now, the wonderful breakfast surprise. She was too overwhelmed. After awhile, the family sat at the dining table to have the special breakfast prepared by Raman.
Toshiji first served the idli and chutney to Ishita. She sat with Ruhi on her lap and made Ruhi eat it first. By then Raman grabbed a piece and placed it in Ishita's mouth.
She ate it as Raman expectantly looked at her face to see her reaction. She had the idli-chutney and a big smile appeared on her face.
Ishita: Raman bahut accha hai..Seriously itne accha bana hai idli or chutney dono bhi..Thank You so much Raman.. [ Seriously Raman. Both the idli and chutney have come out so well. Thank You so much]
Raman looked at her with a small smile creeping up on his lips. She then tasted the paayasam. It was also cooked to perfection.
Ishita: Waah yeh paayasam..ekdum perfect bana hai..Aaap itna accha paaayasam banaana kaha se seekhe Raman? [Wow this paayasam..It has come out perfectly. From where did you learn to make paayasam so well Raman?]
Raman[trying to taunt her]: Ab mei kya bolun Ishita..Har type ka khaaana prepare karna..you see woh jaadoo har kisi ki haath mei nahi hota..Kuch log punjaabi khaane paakane chale the woh bhi classes leke aur maine bina classes ke Madraasi khaana banaya aur woh bhi itni acchi.. [Now what do I tell you Ishita..You know preparing every type of food ..that magic is not blessed in everyone's hands..Some people tried to make Punjaabi food taking classes..and look at me without taking classes, I managed to whip up Madraasi food and that too, so well..]
Saying so he grinned at his temporary success of winning her praise and winked at her slightly, while she mouthed "Raavan Kumar" to him.
Toshiji: Arrey waah waah..bhalle bhalle..mere puttar toh aaj paas hogaya..Dekha Bhallajee mere Happy toh sab mei number 1 hai..ab usne Ishita ke liya khaana bhi pakaliya..[Wow..Bhalle Bhalle..My son passed today..See Bhallaji..my son is number 1 in everything..He prepared food also for Ishita]
Mr.Bhalla: Aaakhir beta kiska hai Toshiji..Sahi mai..Bahut accha banaya hai puttar.. [After all who's son is he..? Really it has come out very well son]
Romi: Waah bhai..aapne toh kamaal hi kardiya aaj..bhaabi ke liye breakfast and all..din par din bahut romantic hote jaa rahe ho aap.. [Wow brother..You did an amazing feat today..Made breakfast for bhaabhi and all..Day by day you are turning out to be more romantic]
Raman: Beta tuh ab chup chaap khalenga ya mai.. [My bro, will you shut your mouth and eat or Shall I?..]
Romi: Ok bhai..khaaaloonga..gussa mat hona.. [no no..Okay bro..I will get back to eating..Don't get angry na]
Ishita started blushing at Romi's words and when their breakfast was done, she went into their room. A hurricane of emotions were swirling through her mind. She was very overwhelmed by the love that Raman had been showering on her. She wanted to eagerly express her heartfelt emotions/gratitude to Raman. All his small actions and gestures of love kept replaying in her mind. He entered the room and looked up at her to meet her eyes. She walked up toward him.
Raman: "Khaana kaisa laga? Tumhe sab kuch pasand aaya na?" [How was the breakfast? i hope you liked everything]
Ishita: " Sirf pasand hi nahi, bahut pasand aaya Raman. Nee romba nallavan. Romba dhairyamaanaala. Nee romba alaaga irke..Aiyoo..naa unna kaadalikkeren" [Not only did I like it..I loved it..You are very nice Raman..very brave..You look very nice..Aiyoo..I am in love with you..]
Unable to comprehend the Tamil Raman says:
Raman: Tum yeh kya keh rahi ho Ishita? [What are you saying Ishita?]
Ishita: Aiyoo..mai keh rahi hoon ki.. [Aiyo Raman..I am saying that..]
Saying that, overpowered by her emotions for Raman..She hold his cheeks with both her hands firmly..plants a quick kiss on the left cheek and then on the right..and a quick tight one on the lips..
[this is the scene from hum hai raahi pyar ke😆😆..I know its very fast, but the best I could get😛]
She then realizes what she has done and says "Aiyoo Amma" and runs away from the room, rushes into the bathroom and bolts the door behind her. She is breathing heavily and blushing profusely thinking about the sequence of events that just happened in the last two minutes.
Meanwhile in the room Raman is too shocked by her sudden advance. He is stunned and left open mouthed. He touches his face to feel the places where she has kissed him. He was transported to another land and was not in his senses.
He was just not able to recover from the kiss, and he suddenly felt someone tugging at his pant. He snapped out of his thoughts and saw Ruhi yelling out "Paapa paapa" towards him. He sits on the bed and pull Ruhi on his lap.
Ruhi: Kya hua paapa? aap kya soch rahe ho? [What happened paapa? What are you thinking about?]
Raman: Woh Ruhi..uhhh..kuch nahi beta..tumhaari Ishima na aaj mujhe kuch gift diya..Mai abhi uske baare mai hi soch raha tha. [Uhh Ruhi..nothing much dear..Your Ishima gave me agift today..i was just thinking about that]
Ruhi: Woow paapa Ishima ne aapko gift diya? Kya diya Ishima ne paapa? [Wow..paapa..Ishima gave you a gift?..What did she give you paapa?]
Raman: [Muttering to himself]: ab main tumhe kya bolu Ruhi..ke teri Ishima ne jo gift diya hai na..Uske waja se mere hosh hi udd gaye hai..kya bolo tujhe [Now what do I tell you Ruhi..the gift that your Ishima has give me has made me lose my sanity..what do I tell you?]
Ruhi: Paapa aapne kuch kaha? Boliye na..kya diya Ishima ne? [Paapa did you say something..Tell na..What did Ishima give you?]
Raman: Beta tum ek kaam karo..Gift ishima ne diya hai..toh aap hai na Ishima ke paas jao aur pucho ke usne kya gift diya paapa ko. [Dear, you do one thing..Gift was given by your Ishima..Toh you go to Ishima and ask her what gift she gave to paapa]
Ruhi: Ok paapa..Mai Ishima se poochoongi..[Ok paapa..I shall ask Ishima]
Raman finds it very amusing to know what Ishita will tell Ruhi. Ruhi runs to the kitchen and finds Ishita packing up the lunch box for Ruhi. Raman walks slowly behind her and comes near the kitchen counter. Ishita is not able to meet Raman's eyes, thinking about what had transpired between them a few minutes ago. She maintains her gaze downward trying to avoid eye contact.
Ruhi: Ishima paapa ne mujhe bataaya ki aapne usse kuch gift diya hai. Kya diya aap paapa ko Ishima? [Ishima paapa told me that you gifted him something..What did you give paapa?]
Ishita's eyes now widened in surprise and she looked at Raman in shock. Raman gave her a small wink and Ishita looked down nervously not knowing what to answer to her innocent angel's question.
Ishita: Ummm uhhh..woh Ruhi..ye gift hai na..Ishima ne paapa se special thank you kaha beta..paapa ne Ishima keliye kal cake laaye aur aaj breakfast bhi banaaya hai na..isliye..ek chotu sa thank you bola paapa ko..yahi hai aapke paapa ka gift.. [hmmm..Ruhi..This gift na..Ishima just said thank you to paapa specially..he brought a cake for Ishima and this morning made a nice breakfast for Ishima..Hence I told a small thank you to him..This was the gift I gave]
Ruhi: Par Ishima..thank you bolna bhi gift hota hai kya? [but Ishima is saying a thank you also a gift?]
Ishita: Haan Roo beta..Jab koi aapke liye pyaar se koi kaam kare.chahe woh chota ho ya bada..hum usse thank you bolna chahiye..It makes them feel good and happy.. [Yes my Roo dear..When someone does something for you, be it small or something big, we should acknowledge it and say thank you..It makes them happy and feel good]
Ishita thanked Murugan in her mind for giving her this quick victorious idea to convince Ruhi. Raman smiled at Ishita stealthily at the way she had convinced their innocent angel. She did not miss that smile and a small blush crept up on her face. Raman picked up Ruhi in his arms.
Ruhi: Paapa aapko meri friend Roshni pata hai na. Last week mai uski party mei gayi thi..Jab maine usse gift diya toh usne mujhe return gift diya tha..Aap Ishima ka return gift denge na paapa? [Paapa you remember my friend Roshni right? when I had gone to her birthday party last week, I gave her the gift and she gave me a return gift. Did you give a return gift to Ishima?]
Raman's face lit up and Ishita's eyes widened in shock. Her innocent angel had put her in a tight spot. Raman thought of seizing the golden opportunity to make it even with his Jhansi:
Raman: Oh accha..aise hai kya Ruhi..I would love to give your Ishima a return gift..Similar to what she gave me [Oh is it Ruhi..I would love to return the gift t your Ishima]
Saying that he looked at her and winked, while she stared open mouthedly towards him. Raavan Kumar had trapper her and she tried bailing herself out of the situation, but all her efforts went in vain.
Nervously she said:
Ishita: Ruhi..return gift nahi chaahiye mujhe..Aapke paapa ne mujhe already gift de diya hai na..special birthday surprise or breakfast surprise. [Ruhi..I do not need a return gift my dear..Paapa has already given me so many gifts..first the birthday surprise and then he special breakfast]
Raman realizes that he should act before the opportunity slips away from his hands and tries emotional blackmail on Ruhi. He makes a sad puppy dog face towards Ruhi and says:
Raman: Ruhi ..dekho naa tumhaari Ishima ko..mei itne pyaar se keh raha hoon aur tumhaari Ishima maan hi nahi rahi hai [ Ruhi..look at your Ishima..I am requesting her with so much of love and she is not listening to me only]
Ruhi: Ishima..its okay..paapa itne pyaar se de rahe hai..tho aapko leni padengi.. [Ishima..it's alright..Paapa is giving you the gift with so much love..you should accept it]
Raman smirked at Ishita, gave her a victorious smile and said : Haa Ishita..come on ..ab "Ruhi ke liye" toh maan jaao na..[yes Ishita..Come on ..atleast agree for Ruhi's sake]
Ishita glared at him and looked up nervously.
Ishita: Roo beta..aisa nahi hai..suno toh meri baat [Roo..it's not like that..Listen to me atleast]
Ruhi: Nahi Ishima..mai kuch nahi sunoongi..aap paapa ke gift le rahe ho..and that's it.. [No Ishima..I am not going to listen to anything..You are taking paapa's gift and that's it]
Ishita was still in shock. What was Raavan Kumar upto now? What did he want to give her? She was already nervously twitching her saree pallu out of tension. Romi picked up Ruhi in his arms and told Ishra that he will drop her off to school. Ruhi waved bye to her parents and left with Romi. Raman came close to Ishita and whispered in her ears:
Raman: Are you ready for my return gift my dear Jhansi? I am waiting for you in the room.
Ishita felt queasy due to the proximity and his husky whispering had made her weak in the knees. She was too shocked to comprehend all that was going on around her. She finally garnered the courage to face her Raavan and stepped into their room. She felt like she was stepping into a lion's den. Once she came in, she spoke up:
Ishita: Kya dene chaahte hai aap? [What do you want to give me?]
Raman walked over and closed the door slowly. She felt more nervous than before wondering the reason for this action of his. He started walking slowly towards her..She started walking backwards..They continued this until her back hit against the wall..but their eyes were fixated on each other..
He crouched in closer to her..She got more weak in the knees due to his intense proximity..He placed his arms on her shoulders and gazed deeply into her nervous eyes.
Raman: Tum jaante ho ke tumhaare yeh sab karne se mere upar kya asar padta hai? ..Mai uss pal ko bhool nahi paa raha hoon Ishita..Baar baar sochke paagal ho raha hoon.. [Do you even realize what an effect you have on me?..I am unable to get over that moment Ishita..it's driving me crazy]
He leaned in closer..Ishita looked down..
Ishita: Raman..woh mai..ummm..mai aapko actually thank you kehna chaahti thi..pata nahi kya hua, I just couldn't control my emotions..are aise nikal gaya..I ..I am sorry Raman..
He placed his finger on her lips and she felt jolted by the touch.
Raman: Shhh..Ishita..kuch mat kaho..Is pal ko yaaha aise hi mehsoos karo..[Shhh..don't say a single word..just stand still and live this moment silently]
Saying that he inched in closer to her face and she shut her eyes in nervousness. He lifted her chin up with his finger and asked her to open her eyes. She slowly opened to look up at him and realized that they were just inches apart. Raman gripped her face with both his hands and moved to her left cheek and planted a deep kiss and repeated that on the right cheek too. Ishita closed her eyes in response and she could feel her skin burning due to his intimate touch. Finally he leaned in and kissed on her lips. This time it was a proper liplock. Ishita responded to his kiss and clutched on to his shirt. Finally they broke off. Both let out a gasp and Ishita was breathing heavily.
Raman: Waise Ishita..uss waqt tumne Tamil mai kuch kaaha..aur mujhe samajh mei nahi aaya..Please batao naa..kya matlab tha uska? [Also..Ishita..you muttered something in Tamil earlier..I did not understand a single word..Please tell me what is the meaning of that]
Ishita[blushing and looking down]: Raman mai aapko woh baat ek aur din bataungi..Aaj ke liye yeh khaas gift hi kaafi hai..[ Raman I shall tell that some other day to you..for today, this one special gift is enough]
She closed her face with her hands, feeling shy, unable to face him and tried running away from the room. Raman caught her hand before she could escape and she turned slowly to face him.
Raman: Aur Ishita suno..Aisa gifts to baar baar dete rehna..Isse lene mai aur waapas tumhe return gift dene mai..dono mai bahut mazaa hai..mere Jhansi ki Rani.. [And Ishita listen ..keep giving such gifts often..I have great fun in both receiving them and returning them..my dear Jhansi ki Rani]
Ishita blushed intensely and tried to free her wrist from his hold. "Chodiye na Raman" [Leave me Raman] she said. He loved to see her struggling to get away from his clutches..and then he finally let her go. Ishita ran out, grabbed her handbag and car keys and rushed to her car. She got into the car rapidly and drove off, blushing harder thinking about the heavenly moment. While in the room, Raman ran his hand through his hair thinking about the wonderful moment. Both were lost in thoughts of the special moment and wishing in their hearts that it was everlasting..
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So that's it from my side guys😊..Hope you guys enjoyed my OS.😃.Will send out PMs later..I am not a very great romantic writer..This is the best I could pen down..Please feel free to leave your comments/ feedback..Any type of feedback is welcome😊..Your comments do encourage me a lot😃.. #YHMRocks #YHMiansRock❤️👍🏼
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