FF: Tujhse naraz nahi zindagi Part 3: Pg 5 Update - Page 2

wonderful start dear...totally njoyed tie scene..plz continue soon n pm me whenvr u update

very nice start...

Thanks everyone!!! I will reply to each and every comment later in the day.I just wanted to thank everyone for reading and for the encouragement.😊 Part 2 is coming up!!!!

I was a little lost writing this and had to return to studying so this might seem all over the place, additionally I love music especially old classics so I have tried to incorporate a few my favorites in this FF. Hope you enjoy it and if you have any requests please let me know so I can try to incorporate your favorite songs in this FF.

Part 2

That evening Raman was home promptly at 5 and as soon as he entered his house his eyes were scanning for Ishita. Meanwhile Ishita had postponed her dental appointments and was home by 4:30 preparing ginger tea and low fat baked snacks for the family. Raman saw her serving tea and snacks to his family, he was about to loosen his tie and sit to enjoy the snacks but he thankfully remembered the beautiful morning. He just looked at Ishita and proceeded to their bedroom. Ishita was about to follow Raman to their room when her mother in law held Ishita's hand and made her sit down. Ishita was about to protest when toshiji said,

T: Beta sube 6 AM se uthi hai, thodi der bainth yaha, saans le

I: Par mammi ji...

Toshiji cuts her in the middle and continues

T: waise gal das itne ache snacks ba nana kahan se sekhi

I: who mummy ji aapse aur amma se aur kisse

Meanwhile Raman was waiting for Ishita in their bedroom and starts getting restless, he peaks outside and gets irritated seeing Ishita sitting with Romi, mummy and his papa meanwhile his tie was suffocating him.

Romi: Bhabhi aap mere hathon se khao, sach bhabhi ek aap hi ho jis ko mere looks ki fikar hai. Tabhi to low fat aur low cholesterol snacks benaye hai apne warne to mummyji or neelu didi ke haath ka khake mera haal papa ke tarah hona tha

Raman who was irritated now started smiling; he realized why his madrasan had made healthy snacks. He remembered leaving his blood report on the table and it showed high cholesterol and hyperlipidemia. Raman thought to himself yeh madrasan to such moch multi tasking aurat nikle yaar. He thinks about his previous marriage and how he made all the sacrifices to make Shagun happy but she was never satisfied with him or his family. Now life had turned around for him, there was someone making sacrifices for him and his family, someone who cared for his happiness, someone who waits for his return and if he is late there is a prompt call from her enquiring his whereabouts, someone who cared for his likes and dislikes. Who doesn't like being loved and cared for, Raman thought to himself, maybe this is what one feels when they are in love. Raman continues with his inner turmoil and thinks if this what love feels like then what did Shagun and him share? Was that just infatuation of two immature adults. Shagun's thoughts made him angry but thankfully he came back to the present when he heard his name in her sweat voice.

I: Mummyji mein Raman ki liye chai

Before she could finish her sentence, she sees him walking towards the table still in his office clothes

T: Raman tu ander kya tare gin raha tha?

Sarcasm runs deep in their family. Meanwhile Ishita poured Raman tea and handed him snacks

R: Kyun maa

T: Agar tare nahi gin raha tha to kapde kyun nahi badle

R: Who aap apni bahu se poochiye, aisa phasi ka phande hai ke kya kare insaan

T: Tu pagal ho gaya hai kya, ishita ye kya keh raha hai

This banter continued and finally Ishita entered their bedroom, and Raman followed.

R: Toh multi tasking madrasan, apne kaam khatam karo

Ishita gazing towards the floor approaches Raman, loosens his tie and speaks

I: Raman, hame mihir mihika ka shaadi plan karne...

R: Who to hum kar lege par tum who bag kholo pehle

She opens the bag and starts blushing

I: Itni sari ties, apka dimag kharab ho gaya hai

R: Bilkul nahi jab patni tumhari jasi multi tasking ho to bande ko ek kadam aage rahna padta hai.

The tie was off now and ishita had moved to open her work file to study for her appointment and as usual she was completely focused on her work.

R: Suno yeh low fat aur low cholesterol nashte ka shoonk kaise hua?

I: Kya shoonk, kabhi kisi ko low fat khane ka shoonk thodi hota hai who toh apke reports dekhi to maine socha...

Raman grabs his laptop sits next to her on the couch and cuts her in the middle

R: Yaar tum to sach me multi tasking bandi nikli, I mean daant ukhadti ho, tie pehnati ho, meri chest aur collar bone ko dekhti ho, aur uske upar mere cholesterol ko lower karne ke liye low fat snacks..wah wah

Ishita was thinking to herself "yeh raavan kumar lawyer to nahi hai, meri bolti band kar de hai sobha se'

R: Phir khayalon mein kho gayi, oh hello madam pati samne hai aur tumhara dhyan kahi aur, kahi tum mere chest ke bare main to nahi soch rahi

Before Ishita could answer, Raman takes her hand in his, kisses her forehead and takes her into an embrace.

R: Maine kaha tha mujhe multi tasking madrasi bede pasand hai and winks at her. Acha chalo kaam shuru karen? Kitna kaam hai, mihir ki shaadi ki planning, aur more importantly kal ke liye tie choose karni hai

She hits him lightly on his chest while being in his embrace. They both are growing comfortable with each other and their newfound closeness, even though they haven't had a physical relationship; with each passing day they were fulfilling each other emotionally.

Days passed by with everyone planning mihir-mihika wedding, there was now a new normal in the Bhalla household. Ishita & Raman were closer than ever before and everyone else was happier than they had ever been.

15 days before Mihir-Mihika wedding.

It was a normal Saturday night, everyone had finished dinner and the men were clearing the table. Raman believed in equality but more importantly he was worried about Ishita, she is a working woman who handles her clinic, and her house so why is it that a man can come home from office and not a lift a finger on the pretext of being tired. He had a made a new rule, that household chores will be shared by the family. Men will set up and clear the dinner table while the ladies cooked. Men would tidy up their bedrooms while women took charge of the family room and kitchen. Ishita had noticed the subtle things Raman would do for her, and her heart was content with all this happiness.

After all the work was done, Raman was putting Ruhi to sleep in her room meanwhile Ishita was in their bedroom sitting in the balcony gazing at stars. Raman enters with two cups of filter coffee and a blanket. He engulfs her in an embrace from behind and drapes them both with the blanket. She rests her head on his shoulder while he hands her a cup of coffee.

I: Buddhu bhalla ek baat pochu

R: Hmmm

I: Aap yeh soch rahe ho ki is shaadi aur hamari shaadi main kitna farak hai

R: Looks at her in disbelief, tumhe kese pata chala...

I: Mere naam multi tasking madrasan hai...remember

A smile crept on this face but then looking down with a melancholy look

R: Ishita humne ek doosre ko samajne aur janne mein kitna samay barbad kar diya. Shaadi kitni khushi late hai par hamari shaadi ke waqt main tumse nafrat karta tha.

I: Aur main apse

R: Jab hum gadhe mihir aur chote madrasan ki color theme select kar rahe the to everyone was busy trying to figure out what mihir mihika like but on our wedding day, we didn't care but why didn't our family care

Raman still in a sad mood

I: Are baap re mere buddho bhalla ko itna bura lag raha hai ki humari shaadi rookhi sooki thi.

She touches his cheeks and lifts his head up to see in his eyes, she could see the hurt in his eyes.

I: Main janti hu ki aap ki pehli shaadi main apka parivar khush nahi tha aur doosri shaadi aap khush nahi the. Aur main toh apne aur subbu ke rishte ke baad pyar aur shaadi main vishwaas hi nahi karti thi. Is shaadi ka matlab tha Ruhi ka saath toh mujhe toh farak nahi pada ki catering main konsa food, decorations ka color kya hoga and more importantly aapko kya pasand hoga. Aaj pata chal raha hain ki agar ladka ladki ek dusre se pyar karte hain to wedding planning kitne fun hota hai aur kase do parivar ko jod sakti hain.

Raman wiping away her tears gets up and puts on music, she is surprised to hear the song playing. Raman walks up to Ishita gives his hand to her.

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho
lag Jaa Gale Se ...
hum Ko Mili Hai Aaj
ye Ghadiya Naseeb Se
je Bhar Ke Dekh Leejiye
hamako Kareeb Se
phir Apke Naseeb Mein
ye Raat Ho Na Ho
phir Is Janaam Mein
mulakaat Ho Na Ho

R: Toh aaj shuru karee ik dosre ko janna aur pehchanna, yeh shaadi toh Mihir mihika hai par bandhan hamara judega, ek pyar ke bandhan

I: Aapko kase pate ki ye mera favorite song hai

R: main buddho bhalla hoon par behre bhalla nahi hoon, jab dekho tab yeh gun ganati rehti ho. Lekin ye batao ko itna depressing gana kyun pasand hai tumhe? Kitni boring ho tum

I: Boring? Yeh kitna romantic gana hai, keh raha ki Lag ja gale

Raman takes her in an embrace, she keeps her head on his chest and they start swaying to the song in the balcony under the moonlight.

R: mujhe ye song nahi pasand, Lag ja gale to thik hai per isme bhi time limit, ye song to keh raha hai ke ye hansi raat wapas ho na ho. Ase kaise ye raat wapas nahi hogi. Aise raat bar bar hogi...kyon?

Ishita is just quite enjoying his nonsense while being in his embrace. She finally moves away and changes the song surprising Raman.

Tere mere milan kii yeh rainaa
On the night of your and my union
Nayaa koi gul khilaayegi
A new rose will bloom
Tabhi to chanchal hai tere naina
That is why your eyes are playful
Dekho na! Dekho na, tere mere milan kii yeh rainaa
Look! Look at the night of your and my union

Raman gets teary eyed listening to this song and before he could speak, Ishita wipes his tears and speaks

I: Raman ye apke favortite gana hai, mujhe pata hai, Uss din abhimaan movie aa rahi thi, ap is gane ko sun kar bahut ro rahe the. Maine apke aason dekhe the, man kiya ke apko gale lagalon aur apka dark kam kurdon par mujhe nahi pata tha tab ki mera buddhu bhalla mujhse pyar karta tha ya nahi

R: Ye gana mujhe pehlse se bohot pasand tha, jab shagun meri zindagi main aye toh mujhe laga ki ye gana mire zindagi ki asliyet hai pur woh...tum is gane ko band karo, hum ek naya gana...

Ishita cutting him in the middle while cupping his face

I: Bilkul nahi, hum apne aap ko kyun badle, maine apse pyar kiya hai toh apke past se bhi pyar kiya hai. Pyar main shart nahi hoti Raman, I accept you for who you are and this song and it's bitter memories are part of you and hence a part of me.

Raman touches his forehead to hers and stares at her deep eyes

I: Aur humara pyar is gane ko naya matlab dega, aag humara Milan hai Raman, jaise gane ke shabd hai na

Tujhe thame kai haton se

Catching hold of you in countless embraces

Milunga madhbaru raaton mein

I'll meet you in the scented nights

Jagake ansuni se dhadkan

Awakening unfamiliar feelings in your heart

Balamvaa bhar dungi tera man

I will fill your heart and soul, my love

I: Raman I am in your embrace, in this scented night with new awakened feeling in our heart, I promise you that I will help you forget your past and will do best to get over mine. I promise that I will share all my sorrows and worries with your and I hope you find me worthy of sharing your worries no matter how big or small they might be.

Raman with tears in his eyes,

R: Meri multi tasking madrasan tumhe hindi gane itni achi tarha aate hain? Aur ik baat bataon tumhari madrasi gane itne romantic hote hai kya?

Before she could answer

R: Main bhi na pagal hoon, madrasi aur romance tum to bas kolaveri di main hi khush rehna. Aur hindi gane chuna bhi to kaise, gale lag ga par who bhi time limit me kyunki bhai ye raat phir ho na ho. Meri choice tum dekho kya jaana hai Milan ka, raat ko, hathon main ek dusro ko lekar, ek doorse ki akhon main dekhna ka, koi time limit nahi hai, ke bhai ek din pyar kar lo kyunki kal ye raat ho na ho.

I: Raman kya aaap...

R: Chalo mujhse chipki rahogi ya choti madrasan ki shaadi ki planning karoge. Waise mehndi kal hai, usme kya likhogi Raman, Ravan kumar, buddhu bhalla ye phir...

I: Main likhwaonji Mr. Multi tasking madrasan

They laugh uncontrollably and fall asleep with a smile of content and happiness.

Brilliant story loved both parts really interesting love the songs u have chosen perfect for the situation can't wait to read what went wrong do plz continue soon

interestingg... tensed free updatee!! loved itt completelyy!!!

loved it :-D

how there relation is growng and how they are moving forward in their realtion beautifully written .


cont soon :-)

really nice your both parts of story

a very nyc start..i loved itt
continue soon n pls pm me..

@Raatri: Thanks!! Glad you liked it.