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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

let me find time to pen down d next part guys..i might not use d baby names in d next part itself.. let me frame everything, lets see how it turns out.. thanks a ton for all d names so far.. beautiful ones, all of them!

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shimerrr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

very lovely os
my suggestion of names is
RUHAAN -- which means spiritual and kindhearted
ISHA...ISHANA -- name of goddess durga and strongwilled

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: shimerrr
very lovely os
my suggestion of names is
RUHAAN -- which means spiritual and kindhearted
ISHA...ISHANA -- name of goddess durga and strongwilled

nice yaar.. Ruhaan n Ruhanika wud be nice too! 😊

but like Ruhaan n Isha for Raman n Ishita..😃

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tehreem shahid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Rishi raman n ishita ko melaa kr hai

But I like Ansh, Aryan,Ayan, Ayuu, rahul n girl name Roshni, Arohi

In twin side Ansh n Arohi

Aryan n Arohi

Rishi n Roshni

Rahul n Roshni

N han plzzz continue soon n love ur os u r brilliant writter 👍🏼

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

wrong post again! i end up quoting rather than editing sometimes

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Nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

aarav and arnav or for daughter it can be anika

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Part 7:

Ishita parked her car in the parking lot of Akash Ganga Society. She was 6 months pregnant now.

Ruhi was playing with her friends on the street. The moment she saw Ishita approaching the building, her eyes filled with tears, she ran up to her and hugged her.

"Ishima aap kahan chale gaye the.. Maine aapko kitna miss kiya" Ruhi spoke as she cried uncontrollably.

"Naa..mera bachchu..naa..aise rote nahi hain" Ishita wrapped her arms around her, kissed her on her head and rested her cheek on it.

Ruhi: "Oh sorry Ishima, main aapko itni tightly hug nahin karoongi. Babies ko hurt hoga na"

"No..mera Ruu bachcha huggi karega to babies ko kuch nahin hoga.." she spoke to her lovingly, wiping her tears.
"Chalo wahan chalke baithte hain" Ishita spoke pointing towards the bench.

"Mera Ruu baby kaisa hai?" Ishita spoke putting Ruhi's hair falling on her face behind her ear.

Ruhi:"Main theek hoon. But Ishima aap kab aaoge..Mera bilkul mann nahin lagta aapke bina"

Ishita: " Kyun kya hogaya beta..Shagun mamma hain naa Ruhi ka khayaal rakhne ke liye.Aapki apni mamma. Aur ab Adi bhaiyya bhi to hain Ruu ke paas"

Ruhi:"No Ishima. Ruhi ko Ishima ke paas rehna hai. Aap hi meri mamma ho.Shagun mamma meri mamma nahin hai"

Ishita: "Naa beta. Aise nahin bolte. Shagun mamma hi aapki mamma hain. Aur aise zidd nahin karte."

"No Ishima" Ruhi shouted and started crying again. "Aap hamesha mujhe aise bolte rehte ho. Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni.Ruhi aapse katta hai" Ruhi ran away sobbing uncontrollably.

Ishita: "Ruhi..."

***
Ishita was heading towards her Amma's house when she saw Shagun coming out of Bhalla house.

"Isheeeta" Shagun spoke. "Kya baat hai..aaj kal tum dikhai nahin deti yahaan?"
"Aur ye kya, tum pregnant ho? Tumhari shaadi ho gayi hai kya? Tumhare husband ko to nahin dekha maine kabhi..Husband hai bhi yaa.."

Tears filled Ishita's eyes, but she tried her best to control them.

"Wo main apne husband ke saath hi reh rahi hoon aajkal" Ishita responded.

Raman was coming out of his house. The moment her saw Ishita and then Shagun with her, he sensed something wrong could have happened.

Raman shouted at Shagun: "Shagun tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.. Maine tumhe kaha tha na ki neeche jaake wait karo."

Shagun to Raman: " Jaa rahi hoon. Aur tum aaj kal kisi ki baat nahin sunte Raman. Jo mann me aaya karte ho, bas apni chalate ho"
Shagun moved down the stairs.

Raman waited for Shagun to get out of sight, and then moved towards Ishita and cupped her face " Tum theek ho Ishita?"
Ishita tried to look away." Main theek hoon" she spoke.

"Ishita meri aankhon me dekhke kaho" he made her look into his face.
"Main theek hoon Raman" she spoke now holding his hand.."Aap please tension mat lijiye"

***

Ishita entered Iyer house. She was still in a vulnerable state, she wanted to let out her feelings to her mom, but then she saw Subbu's mom sitting and chatting with Mrs Iyer.

Subbu's mom: "Arey aao aao Ishita, baitho. Kaisi ho tum?"

Ishita: "Main theek hoon aunty"

Subbu's mom: "Ab apno se kya jhoot bolna beta. Main samajh sakti hoon tumhari haalat. Ab do do bachche aane wale hain, aur inka baap to tumhare saath hai nahi..
She continued "Raman to ab settled hai Shagun ke saath. Vaise, kitni manhoos kismat hai naa tumhari.Aur yahi manhusiyat tum jahan jaati ho wahan failati ho.
Ab Shugun aur Raman ko hi le lo.. unki life me tum manhoos hi to ho! Mera beta lucky tha, wo to bach gaya"

Mrs Iyer shouted at Subbu's mom:" Ye kya ulta-seedha bol rahi hain aap meri beti ko? Arey usse is halat mein to bakhsh dijiye..Aap abhi isi waqt yahan se chali jayiye!"

Ishita held her mother's arm, trying to pacify her : "Amma aap shaant ho jaayiye. Waise bhi aapki tabiyat theek nahin hai"

Subbu's mom: " Haan haan jaa rahi hoon.Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai yahan baithne ka" She exited.

Ishita heard her phone ring.It was Raman.
Raman:" Ishita mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hai ki tum theek nahi ho"
Ishita:" Main theek hoon Raman, aap please chinta mat kijiya"
Raman:" But Ishita.."
Ishita: " Raman main aapko kaise samjhaoon. Aap please apna kaam kijiye, aur meri tension mat lijiye"
She cut the call quickly, before she would start crying on the phone.

But she cudnt take it anymore. She went and sat next to her mom, held her shoulder and totally broke down this time.

"Ishu bas Ishu.. Kisi ki baat ka itna bura nahin maante..Wo Subbu ki amma to hai hi aisi" Mrs Iyer spoke consoling Ishita.

"Amma main kya karoon amma. Aisa kab tak chalega" Ishita spoke sobbing uncontrollably.
She continued "Aur Wo subbu ki amma theek hi to ke rahi the. Main manhoos hi to hoon Shagun aur Raman ki life main. Socho agar Shagun ko to pata chal gaya ki mere bachchon ke papa kaun hai to uspe kya beetegi Amma"

Mrs Iyer:"Tum ye sab mat socho Ishu. Tum abhi sirf apni health pe dhyaan do. Kisi bhi tarah ki tension is not good for you"

Ishita:" Amma kaise na sochoon kuch bhi. Main bahut din se is baat se pareshan hoon."
Mrs Iyer: " God pe bharosa rakho Ishu.Sab theek ho jayega"

Ishita: " No amma kuch theek nahin hoga. Ye sab itna complicated hota jaa raha hai. Mujhe to kuch samajh nahin aa raha ki kya hoga"
She continued: "Socho jab ye bachche aayenge tab kya hoga..agar Raman ne Shagun se kuch keh diya to uska kya hoga..koi bhi chhez Shagun ki life se zyada important to nahi hai naa Amma"
"Aur agar Raman ne kuch nahi bhi bataya Shagun ko to Raman ka kya hoga..Ruhi ka kya hoga. In sab ki life kitni bat jaayegi, kitni complicated ho jaayegi meri vajah se"

Mrs Iyer:"Ishu.. tum sabke baare mein kitna sochti ho..Apne baare mein kab sochogi?"

***

Raman had been trying to call Ishita frantically for some time, but she was not picking up her phone.He spoke to himself "Pata nahin mujhe iski awaaz se kuch
ajeeb saa kyun lag raha tha..ye madrasan kuch gadbad naa kar baithe"

Mihir: "Bhai aap abhi tak yahan kya kar rahein. Aaj humari kitni important conference hai shaam ko. Wo bahut important clients hain bhai.We cant afford to loose them. Aap ready hain naa"

Raman:" Mihir wo to theek hai, but main Ishita ke liye thoda worried hoon. Kya main usse jaake abhi milke aaoon?"

Mihir: "Bhai hum already bahut late ho chuke hain. Venue vaise hi bahut door hai. Main ek kaam karta hoon, Mihika se kehta hoon ki aaj office ke baad wo seedha Ishita bhabhi ke paas chali jaaye. Aap please unki tension mat lijiye"

Raman: " But Ishita mera phone kyun nahi utha rahi?"

Mihir: "Maybe wo clinic mein busy hongi.."

Raman:" Hmmm.."

Raman was busy the entire evening. He had been trying to speak to Ishita in between whenever he got time, but she was not picking up her phone. He finally got free at 1 in the night.He thought of meeting Ishita, but then stopped himself because it was already very late. "Ab subah hote hi isse milta hoon" he spoke to himself.He couldnt sleep properly for the rest of the night.

He finally got up at 7 in the morning and went on to check his regular work mails. And then what he saw left him totally flabbergasted.

To be continued..

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Guys I want you to give me the final names of the kids.
The boy- Aarav, Ruhaan,Rehan, Anmol or Rishi?
The girl: Isha/Ruhanika/Ishana/Arohi/Riya/ a tamil name?
Do let me know your choices..

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Rinki

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Posted: 10 years ago

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My sugstn 4 Name of d kids,, Anmol & Arohi.. 😊

comg to d updte.. it was nyc.. ruhi-ishu convo was cute in strtng nd bcmes emotinl at d end.. y ishu said dat shagun is her mumma ..? she knws her daughtr vryy well den too.. 😕

shagun nd subbu's mom.. 😡 go 2 hell...!!

raman concernd 4 ishu lovely... carning kumar.. 😉

last li9s.. wat hapnd sudden ..? Ishita left dem or wat..? eager to knw it,,..

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: SuryaNakshholic
My sugstn 4 Name of d kids,, Anmol & Arohi.. 😊
comg to d updte.. it was nyc.. ruhi-ishu convo was cute in strtng nd bcmes emotinl at d end.. y ishu said dat shagun is her mumma ..? she knws her daughtr vryy well den too.. 😕
shagun nd subbu's mom.. 😡 go 2 hell...!!
raman concernd 4 ishu lovely... carning kumar.. 😉
last li9s.. wat hapnd sudden ..? Ishita left dem or wat..? eager to knw it,,..

u will have to wait for d next part! thanks for d comments 😊