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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Freaking Awesome work Lucky Di!Thanks fr pm!Luved Raman's last dialouge!Pls do write more!

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Shagun was given one of the many unused bedrooms in the Bhalla house? Lucky, there's 5 bedrooms in the Bhalla House and bechari Rinki doesn't even have a room, so itne saare unused bedrooms kaha se aa gaye? 😆 Loved your sarcasm!

And hahaha, the first time Simmi overheard Param being his usual self is when he wasn't even doing anything perverted!

And Raman's last thoughts... LOOOL so funny! He finally realised what a good opportunity he wasted, and that too after seeing Param holding hands with Shagun 😆 These two always end up playing cupid to IshRa.

Loved this, it gave me a good laugh!

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

hahaha...f**kng hillarious..lol
simmi saying m nt dumb actually cracked me up
n yeahh Raman should actually learn 4m param
thnks 4 pm

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Hey folks... sorry couldnt do individual replies to eveyrone on the last couple of pages. busy time at work.

Thank you very much for the feedback. and I am glad it made you laugh 🤗

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Thanks for PM.

It was so Interesting Spoof.😊

You makes me Happy,Thank you so much.😊

Your imagination was too good,I LOVES IT.😳

Please write like this on ISHRA.

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Jaya Saraswati

@jaya.s

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

I am fervently hoping that the CVs visit the forum and steal this PERFECT scene (because they cannot think up something this smart on their own 😉)!!!! Oh, how I wish they do it, and soon too!

Wonderful writing! Please apply for the post of the writing team of YHM!😛

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Lata_ishra

@Lata_ishra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Awesome...kaash aisa kuch ho show me bhi...

Last para was awesome...🤣

Thanks for PM...

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

"Paramji... main
dumb dikhti hoon. but hoon nahin..." 🤣 This line is epic! 😉 Kash ye sach me sach hota 😉
And btw Lucky di reading your works is NEVER a time-waste for us.So don't say this AGAIN!
Sorry for being late 😔
I was tremendously upset..as my scooty has been stolen last evening..but after I read this spoof it makes me laugh at poor Shagun n Param's haalat!😆
And Raman's parting thought was umm dreamy

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yhmfever

@yhmfever

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

I so wish something similar ho
I loved it
Haha param so despo

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