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One fine evening Raman was standing in his balcony observing everything very clearly..err not observing the outside state rather his inner state when he gets a pat on his shoulder.
Ishita- (giving him his tea) Chai! Aur ap ye chai pyar se bhi mang sakte the.. (and leaves)
Raman (in his thoughts)- Pyar!! Samajh hi nahi paa rha hu ye ho kya rha hai mere sath... Bina iske lectures ke din adhoora sa lagta hai.. Bevajah gussa kar rha hoon ispe.. Par ye problem iski nahi hai, problem toh meri hai jo mai khud kubool nahi karr pa rha hoon.
Next day-
On the dining table:-
Raman trying to ignore Ishita and her bbatein
Ishita- Raman!! Ap please Ruhi ko school chod denge.. Meri car servicing ke liye gayi hui hai..
Raman- Nahi Ishita.. Mere pass time nahi hai (intereupted by Mr. Bhalla)
Mr. Bhalla- Ishita puttar.. Ise rehne de.. Sahab busy hain, Ruhi ko mai chod dunga (towards Ruhi) Chal Ruhi puttar!
Toshi- Raman kam se kam Ishita ko toh drop kar de
Ishita- Nahi mummy ji I'll manage..
Toshi- Nahi ye mera order hai.. Raman Ishita ko chod ke aa puttar
Raman nodded reluctantly
(in the car)
Ishita- Raman apko pata hai Dr. Batra ko bhi Sooraj Khanna ki asleeyat pata chal gyi.. Aur (interrupted by Raman)
Raman(frustrated)- Chup nahi reh sakti kya thodi der.. Pure din bak bak.. Samajh nahi aata agar koi chup hai toh vo tumhari baaton me disinterested hai..
Ishita gets embarrased and a tear rolls down her eye, which Raman notices and stops the car abruptly
Raman(angrily)- Get down
Ishita looks at him as if asking what he wanted to say
Raman- Han sahi suna tumne..
Hurt Ishita gets out of the car and Raman speedily leaves
Ishita- Aakhir Raman ko ho kya raha hai.. Seedhe muh baat hi nahi karte.. Har baat par gussa karte hain.. Mai nahi samajh sakti inhe..
At night
Everyone went to sleep. Raman was not yet home.. So Ishita was waiting at the dining table for him..
Raman stealthily enters..
Ishita- Aagye ap.. Chaliye fresh ho jaiye
Raman answers in a nod
Meanwhile Iishita was bringing up food when Raman interrupted
Raman- Ye kiske liye laga rahi ho.. Mai toh khana kha ke aya hoon
Ishita feels dejected.. Takes the food back to kitchen n goes to bed..!
In the morning
Ishita gets up early and finishes all household chores..
Ishita- Mummy Ji! Maine sara kaam kar dia hai.. Aj clinic me kafi appointments hain toh mujhe jaldi nikalna padega.. Toh ap Ruhi ko school bhej dengi!
Toshi- Koi ni puttar.. Tu chheti ja.. Ruhi ki fikar na karr.. Mai hoon na..
Ishita leaves.. And after sometime everyone get up and get ready..
Raman and Toshi sitting on the dining table.. And Neelu working in the kitchen!
Neelu- Mummy Ji! Ye khane ka kya karu.. (pointing towards bowls which contained last night's food)
Toshi- Arre Raman puttar! Raat ko tune khana nahi khaya kya.
Raman- Nahi mumma.. Mai kha kar aya tha..!
Toshi- Aur Ishita ne?
Raman- Kya.. Ishita ne khana nahi khaya tha
Toshi- Matlab usne tere sath bhi khana nahi khaya..
Raman- Mumma ap kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa rha
Toshi- Matlab jabb hum log khana kha rahe the, usne kaha ki vo tere sath khayegi aur tere sath bhi usne nahi khaya.. Bechari subah- subah sara kaam karke clinic bhi nikal gyi.. Haye meri bachi bhooki hai!
Raman leaves n calls Sarika-
Sarika- Hello Raman sir! M sorry but Ishita mam toh surgery karr rhe hai
Raman- nahi nahi mujhe Ishita nahi tumse hi baat karni hai.. Kuch kaam tha
Sarika- ji sir boliye
Raman- mujhe janna tha ki kya Ishita ne kuch khaya
Sarika- Sir mam toh subah se bohit busy hain.. Mujhe nahi lagta unhone kuch bhi khaya hoga
Raman - Acha fir please meri ek help karna, use kuch khila dena aur haan use ye mat batana ki maine tumhe aisa kuch karne ko kaha hai
Sarika- Ok sir! Jaisa ap kahein
In the evening when everyone sit on the dining table Ishita stands there lost
Toshi- Arrey Ishita puttar aaja tu bhi khale
Ishita- Nahi mummy ji.. Maine clinic me hi kha lia tha toh abb bhook nahi hai
Toshi- Koi gal nahi hai puttar.. Ja ab tu aaram kar le
Raman hears the same and calls Sarika only to know that Ishita did not have anything since morning but actually since the previous night.. He becomes restless as to why she isn't eating food..
Taking this amger Raman barges into the room with a plate
Raman- Ye lo khana kha lo
Ishita( perplexed as to why is he doing so)- Maine kaha na ki maine kha lia
Raman- Jhoot kisi or se bolna.. Mai janta hu ki tumne kuch nahi khaya
Ishita(cries bitterly)- Raman ap chahte kya hain.. Please aj mujhe bata deejiye.. Kabhi apko meri choti se choti baat bhi chubhti hai, ap sunna nahi chahte meri awaaz.. Aur kabhi ap ye khana.. Ufff! Mai jaan hi nahi payi apko.. Apko pata hai poore 2 din ho gye hain apne mujhse baat nahi ki, maine aisa kya kiya hai Raman!!( Holds his shoulder) I wanna know Raman kya, kya chahte hain ap, jabki mai toh apse...(n stops as if what she is saying and starting to leave)
Raman holds her hand when she was about to leave and takes her against the wall with both his hands on either side of the wall
Raman- Main toh apse kya..
Ishita- Kuch nahi! Mujhe jaane do
Raman- mai toh apse kya..
Ishita- Maine kaha na kuch nahi
Raman(angrily)- tumhe Ruhi ki kasam mai toh apse kya
Ishita- (shouts abruptly) Pyar karti hu.. Mai toh apse pyar karti hoon.. Bass mil gaya jawab.. Mujhe pata hai maine bohot badi galti karr di.. Apka aur mera rishta sirf Ruhi ke liye hai lekin(Raman interrupts her by keeping his hand on her mouth and hugs her with utmost intensity and tears rolling down his eyes too..)
Raman(weeping uncontrollably)- I Love You Ishita! I just love you
Ishita(breaking the hug)- Agar ap bhi mujse pyar karte hai, toh mujse baat kyu bhi kar rhe the.. Maine kiya kya tha??
Raman(cupping Ishita's face)- Tumne kuch nahi kiya.. Ishita I felt attracted towards you.. Najaane kyu par tumhare lectures bbhi ache lag rahe the, tumhe dekta toh bass dekta hi reh rha tha.. Raat ko neend nahi aa rhi thi
Ishita- Toh fir apne mujse kyu nahi kaha??
Raman- Mujhe darr tha.. Darr tha ki ye rishta jo Ruhi ke liye hai vo toot na jaye
Samajh nahi paa rha tha ki kya ho rha hai mujhe.. Kya naam du mai iss feeling ko..
Ishita(smiles)- Pyaar! Mere BUDDHU turned RAvan Kumar!!
And they embrace each other as if they would spend their whole life in the arms of each other!!
PS- I won't call it THE END rather The BEGINNING.. Beginning of a new love!
Guys hope u like my attempt.. Criticisms accepted.
Ishita- (giving him his tea) Chai! Aur ap ye chai pyar se bhi mang sakte the.. (and leaves)
Raman (in his thoughts)- Pyar!! Samajh hi nahi paa rha hu ye ho kya rha hai mere sath... Bina iske lectures ke din adhoora sa lagta hai.. Bevajah gussa kar rha hoon ispe.. Par ye problem iski nahi hai, problem toh meri hai jo mai khud kubool nahi karr pa rha hoon.
Next day-
On the dining table:-
Raman trying to ignore Ishita and her bbatein
Ishita- Raman!! Ap please Ruhi ko school chod denge.. Meri car servicing ke liye gayi hui hai..
Raman- Nahi Ishita.. Mere pass time nahi hai (intereupted by Mr. Bhalla)
Mr. Bhalla- Ishita puttar.. Ise rehne de.. Sahab busy hain, Ruhi ko mai chod dunga (towards Ruhi) Chal Ruhi puttar!
Toshi- Raman kam se kam Ishita ko toh drop kar de
Ishita- Nahi mummy ji I'll manage..
Toshi- Nahi ye mera order hai.. Raman Ishita ko chod ke aa puttar
Raman nodded reluctantly
(in the car)
Ishita- Raman apko pata hai Dr. Batra ko bhi Sooraj Khanna ki asleeyat pata chal gyi.. Aur (interrupted by Raman)
Raman(frustrated)- Chup nahi reh sakti kya thodi der.. Pure din bak bak.. Samajh nahi aata agar koi chup hai toh vo tumhari baaton me disinterested hai..
Ishita gets embarrased and a tear rolls down her eye, which Raman notices and stops the car abruptly
Raman(angrily)- Get down
Ishita looks at him as if asking what he wanted to say
Raman- Han sahi suna tumne..
Hurt Ishita gets out of the car and Raman speedily leaves
Ishita- Aakhir Raman ko ho kya raha hai.. Seedhe muh baat hi nahi karte.. Har baat par gussa karte hain.. Mai nahi samajh sakti inhe..
At night
Everyone went to sleep. Raman was not yet home.. So Ishita was waiting at the dining table for him..
Raman stealthily enters..
Ishita- Aagye ap.. Chaliye fresh ho jaiye
Raman answers in a nod
Meanwhile Iishita was bringing up food when Raman interrupted
Raman- Ye kiske liye laga rahi ho.. Mai toh khana kha ke aya hoon
Ishita feels dejected.. Takes the food back to kitchen n goes to bed..!
In the morning
Ishita gets up early and finishes all household chores..
Ishita- Mummy Ji! Maine sara kaam kar dia hai.. Aj clinic me kafi appointments hain toh mujhe jaldi nikalna padega.. Toh ap Ruhi ko school bhej dengi!
Toshi- Koi ni puttar.. Tu chheti ja.. Ruhi ki fikar na karr.. Mai hoon na..
Ishita leaves.. And after sometime everyone get up and get ready..
Raman and Toshi sitting on the dining table.. And Neelu working in the kitchen!
Neelu- Mummy Ji! Ye khane ka kya karu.. (pointing towards bowls which contained last night's food)
Toshi- Arre Raman puttar! Raat ko tune khana nahi khaya kya.
Raman- Nahi mumma.. Mai kha kar aya tha..!
Toshi- Aur Ishita ne?
Raman- Kya.. Ishita ne khana nahi khaya tha
Toshi- Matlab usne tere sath bhi khana nahi khaya..
Raman- Mumma ap kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa rha
Toshi- Matlab jabb hum log khana kha rahe the, usne kaha ki vo tere sath khayegi aur tere sath bhi usne nahi khaya.. Bechari subah- subah sara kaam karke clinic bhi nikal gyi.. Haye meri bachi bhooki hai!
Raman leaves n calls Sarika-
Sarika- Hello Raman sir! M sorry but Ishita mam toh surgery karr rhe hai
Raman- nahi nahi mujhe Ishita nahi tumse hi baat karni hai.. Kuch kaam tha
Sarika- ji sir boliye
Raman- mujhe janna tha ki kya Ishita ne kuch khaya
Sarika- Sir mam toh subah se bohit busy hain.. Mujhe nahi lagta unhone kuch bhi khaya hoga
Raman - Acha fir please meri ek help karna, use kuch khila dena aur haan use ye mat batana ki maine tumhe aisa kuch karne ko kaha hai
Sarika- Ok sir! Jaisa ap kahein
In the evening when everyone sit on the dining table Ishita stands there lost
Toshi- Arrey Ishita puttar aaja tu bhi khale
Ishita- Nahi mummy ji.. Maine clinic me hi kha lia tha toh abb bhook nahi hai
Toshi- Koi gal nahi hai puttar.. Ja ab tu aaram kar le
Raman hears the same and calls Sarika only to know that Ishita did not have anything since morning but actually since the previous night.. He becomes restless as to why she isn't eating food..
Taking this amger Raman barges into the room with a plate
Raman- Ye lo khana kha lo
Ishita( perplexed as to why is he doing so)- Maine kaha na ki maine kha lia
Raman- Jhoot kisi or se bolna.. Mai janta hu ki tumne kuch nahi khaya
Ishita(cries bitterly)- Raman ap chahte kya hain.. Please aj mujhe bata deejiye.. Kabhi apko meri choti se choti baat bhi chubhti hai, ap sunna nahi chahte meri awaaz.. Aur kabhi ap ye khana.. Ufff! Mai jaan hi nahi payi apko.. Apko pata hai poore 2 din ho gye hain apne mujhse baat nahi ki, maine aisa kya kiya hai Raman!!( Holds his shoulder) I wanna know Raman kya, kya chahte hain ap, jabki mai toh apse...(n stops as if what she is saying and starting to leave)
Raman holds her hand when she was about to leave and takes her against the wall with both his hands on either side of the wall
Raman- Main toh apse kya..
Ishita- Kuch nahi! Mujhe jaane do
Raman- mai toh apse kya..
Ishita- Maine kaha na kuch nahi
Raman(angrily)- tumhe Ruhi ki kasam mai toh apse kya
Ishita- (shouts abruptly) Pyar karti hu.. Mai toh apse pyar karti hoon.. Bass mil gaya jawab.. Mujhe pata hai maine bohot badi galti karr di.. Apka aur mera rishta sirf Ruhi ke liye hai lekin(Raman interrupts her by keeping his hand on her mouth and hugs her with utmost intensity and tears rolling down his eyes too..)
Raman(weeping uncontrollably)- I Love You Ishita! I just love you
Ishita(breaking the hug)- Agar ap bhi mujse pyar karte hai, toh mujse baat kyu bhi kar rhe the.. Maine kiya kya tha??
Raman(cupping Ishita's face)- Tumne kuch nahi kiya.. Ishita I felt attracted towards you.. Najaane kyu par tumhare lectures bbhi ache lag rahe the, tumhe dekta toh bass dekta hi reh rha tha.. Raat ko neend nahi aa rhi thi
Ishita- Toh fir apne mujse kyu nahi kaha??
Raman- Mujhe darr tha.. Darr tha ki ye rishta jo Ruhi ke liye hai vo toot na jaye
Samajh nahi paa rha tha ki kya ho rha hai mujhe.. Kya naam du mai iss feeling ko..
Ishita(smiles)- Pyaar! Mere BUDDHU turned RAvan Kumar!!
And they embrace each other as if they would spend their whole life in the arms of each other!!
PS- I won't call it THE END rather The BEGINNING.. Beginning of a new love!
Guys hope u like my attempt.. Criticisms accepted.
Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
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