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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 16

Scene starts with Ruhi telling Adi about Hercules.

Ruhi "Bhayya Hercules hummesha hummarey party mey rahega.But Yeh papa key alaawa kissey ka baath nahen sunega."

Ruhi "Papa ney issey training diyan hain."

Adi "Ruhi main HERCULES ko jaantha hun.Delhi mey pap ney merey saath rakha thaa."

Ruhi "Uffo aaap hummarey summer house gayen they?"

Adi "Han.Bahuth bada hain ."

Ruhi "Bahuth maza aaya hoga naa?"

Adi becomes silent Ishita understands the situation and covers up for Adi.

Ishita "Ruhi bhayya aakeley they naa tho games kaisey khelengey,"

Ruhi "Han Akeley boring hoga.Bhyaa kaun kaun they aapkey saath?"

Adi "Daadi daadu Romi chaachu aur Megha chichi."

Ruhi "Miss M bhee thee."

Adi "Han."

Then Ishita gets a call from Raman and kids get excited.

Raman "Tumney Ruhi ko de dee unkaa chats?"

Ishita "Apney beti sey hee poochloo?"

She keep phone in speaker .
Raman "Ruhi milgayen tumhey tuhaarey chaats?"

Ruhi "Han.Papa Ishima ko chats khilaan a hee nahen aatha.Aap hothey tho bahuth acch hotha,"

Ishita looks at Ruhi shocked.Adi laughing.

Raman "Kitnaa pataogee yaar.Tumhey aur chaahiyen tho Ishima ko bathaadoonga fir sey jagada math banana.Fir uss Jhansi kee Rani ko manaaney me arsoun lagjaathey hain."

Ishita holding Ruhi ears.

Ruhi "Papa aap kabh aaogey?"

Raman "Aaj raath ko aajaonga.Kaam poora nahen huan."

Raman "Adi kyaa kar rahan hain?"

Adi "Papa main yahen hun?"

Raman "Sorry yaar main udhar nahen thaa.Kaam aagayan thaa.Main aaj aajaonga"

Adi "Koi problem nahen Ishita aunty thee naa yahan."

Raman "Theek hain.Koi problem hon tho Ishita ko bathadena who khudh dekhegee."

Adi "Papausskey baarey mey kuch pathachala?"

Raman "speaker cut karo."

Adi keeps it in normal mode and Raman tells him something and then Adi passes call to Ishita.

While both Ruhi and Adi go after Hercules.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan thaa?"

Raman "Bhaag gaya bandha.Police yaha dhoondh rahen hain.But narrow escape thaa."

Ishita "Raman tho aap ussko pakadney gayen they?Kyaa jaroori thaa aapko jaaney key liyen?Aap kissey aur ko bhee bech saktey hain naa?"

Raman "Ishita itnaa kyon chilla rahen hon?"

Ishita "Aap aisey karengey tho main kyaa karoongi.Aapko jaaney kee kyaa jaroori thaa.Aapko kuch hogaya tho?"

Raman "Mujhey kuch nahen hoga.Yaar main tumhey itney asaani sey chodney waaley nahen hun.Jindagee bar sathaana hain tumhey."

Ishita smiles "Theek hain aap waapas aarahen hain naa?"

Raman "Han abhee nikal rahan hun.Waapa aajaonga"

Raman "Adi ?"

Ishita "Abh normal hain.Ruhi sabh samhaal rahen hain.Adi ko occupied rakha.Pehley ro rahan thaa.Abh theek hain.Raman aapko yaha honey chahiye thaa.Aapko miss kar rahan hain."

Raman "Ishita thankyou yaar.Tumhaarey wajaha sey ho rahan hain.I don't know know how to handle situation without you."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman aap mujhey thankyou bol rahen hain.Rama Adi sirf aapka beta nahen hain.Mera beta bhee hain.Main bhee ussey kuch nahe honey doongi"

Adi listens this from door .

Adi gets tears in his eyes listening this.

Then Raman cuts the call .

Adi comes and hugs Ishita.

Adi "Aunty I am sorry."

Ishita "Adi kissliyen?"

Adi "Mainey aapsey bahuth baar rudely behave kiyaa thaa."

Ishita "Oh oh ussliyen,Mainey tho uss samay hee maaf kiya thaa."

Adi "I am sorry."

Ishita "Tum ussey rude kehrahen hon?Tum tho papa ka hee beta hon naa?"

Ishita makes Adi sit beside him. "Yeh tho tumhaara genetic problem hain tum kyaa kar saktey hoin usskey liyen."

Adi "Genetic problem"

Ishita "Tum iss baath pey naa bilkul apney papa pey gayen hon."

Ishita "Raman bhee naaa kabhee ussko gussa ayega thoo kuch nahen sochengey.Bahut saarey experiences hain merey.But abh aadat hain."

Then Ishita starts telling about few funny incidents related to Raman's rudeness and Adi completely foregets everything in stories.

Then after dinner Adi and Ruhi sleep together in Ruhis room but not before their argument over room.

Ruhi "Ishima merey room Adi bhayya ko de dengey kyaa ?"

Ishita "Kyon tum bhayya key saath share nahen karogee?"

Adi "Main nahee karoonga."

Ruhi "Main nahen karoongi.Mujhey naya room chahiyen?"

Ishita "Kitnaa jhagada karogey tum log.Papa aayengey aur decide karengey .But abh tum logon ko share karnaa hoga."

Then Ishita makes Ruhi sleep after bedtime story and Adi was also sleeping there.

Ishita gets happy seeing both brother and sister sleeping together.She know brother and sister tiffs can never be avoided.Then Ruhi having new fear of loosing her position in house.But she is princess of house everyone is after her only.She is first love of her parents .

Ishita looks at them sleeping by door and smiles thinking Raman's dreams are getting filled now.He have been dreaming of this day from years.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
wow...suprb update...nd bro sis fights...ishra convo...perfctly handling of adi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
aww the ending scene was so cute...
i think adi should call ishu...ishima...
will raman comes at nyt... :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

aww the ending scene was so cute...

i think adi should call ishu...ishima...
will raman comes at nyt... :P

no I gave patent to Ruhi.he was supposed to come in this part only but decided to next part.I mean scene continuation.he was already there
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
PART 16

Scene starts with Ishita looking at Ruhi and Adi sleeping together and smiling .She was very happy to see this as it has been dream of Ramand but she was the first person to see this happening.

Then suddenly she feels some arms around her and shw knows whose by the touch itself.

Ishita "Raman aap aagayen ?"

Raman"Kyon tumney mujhey expect nahen kiyaa?"

Ishita "Aap na kabhee nahen sudhrengey." Kissing him on cheek.

Raman also looks at both Ruhi and Adi sleeping together and has tears of happiness in his eyes.Ishita sees this.

Ishita "Aapka swapna thaa naa yeh.Aaj poora hogayan."

Raman "Adi kasiey thaa.Koi problem tho nahen huin."

Ishita "Bahuth ro rahan thaa.But abh normal hain.Aapko lekar bahuth rorahan tha."

Raman "Mujhey lekar."

Ishita "Itney din aapsey door thaa na aur aapsey theek sey baath b hee nahen kartha tha.Ussey bahuth sad huan hain.Khudpey gussa ho rahan hain.Bilkul aapkey taraha."

Raman "Merey taraha.Aur kyaa kyaa notice kiyaa tumney."

Ishita "Bahuth kuch.Ussko bhee Ruhi key taraha chats khaana nahen aatha mujhey khilaana pada.Aur aapkey taraha sharing karnaa pasand nahen hain.Ruhi sey opposite hain but aapsey attitude mey similar hain."

Adi wakes up listening sounds and see Raman and Ishita watching them.

Adi "Dad aap aagayen." Rushing and hugging him.

Raman "tum theek hon naa?"

Adi "Mainthek hun.Mujhey aapsey milnaa thaa."

Raman "Main aagayan hun naa.kuch nahen hoga.Tum abh sojaon."

Raman "Puraaney baath yaad karney sey koi faidha nahen hain.Tum hummesha merey betey hee hon.Kall sey suru hoga tumhaara jang Ruhi key saath."

Adi "Mujhey ladkee sey competition."

Both Ishita and Raman smiles.

Ishita "Ruhi ko kamjor math samjho.Raman ka Xerox copy hain .Jho karna chahthe hain karkey rahegee.Poorey ghar mey kissey ko itnaa himmath nahen kee Ruhi sey jhagada kerey.Papa ko bhee."

Raman "Kyon dara rahen hon bachey ko."

Ishita "Main daraa rahanthaa.Aapjney suru kiyya competition."

Raman "Mainey.."

Adi "Papa hum ghar kabh jaayengey?"

Raman "Sabh log ko ek saath jaana risk hain.Aman ko pakadney doo fir chaljaayengey."

Raman "Tum abh sojaon.Subaha bahuth kaam hain."

Adi "Kyaa kaam hain?"

Raman "Ruhi ko promise thaa kaall ppra day out hain."

Adi "Hum kahan jaayengey?"

Raman "Sirf Ruhi jaanthe hain.Good night"

Adi goes back tosleep while Raman observes Hercules alert and roaming around the compound.

Then Raman and Ishita goes back to their room.Rmana hugs Ishita in his room and Ishita does same.

Raman "I never expected aaj ka din aayega.Adi merey saath hain aur who mujhye dad bularahan hain.I never knew yeh sabh ho saktha hain.But ismey kahee na kahen tum jaroor hon."

Ishita "Raman kyaa aap bhee.Sabh kuch aapkey pyaar key wajaha sey huan.Main jaanthe hun aap Adi aur Ruhi sey kitnaa pyaar karthey hain."

Raman "Tumsey bhee,"

Ishita "Han baba mujhsey bhee."

Raman "I love you Ishita"keeping his arms around her more securely.

Ishita knew what Raman wants and hugs him back "I love you too Raman."

Ishita "Raman Aman ka kyaa huan?"

Raman "Chennai mey nahen hain abh.Bhag gayan hain.Ussko patha chal gaya kee main ussey dhoondh rahan hun."

Raman "Who miljaayega tho Ashok ko arrest karwaasaktey hain aur jho usskey saath hain."

Ishita "Jaldhe pakadjaayega."

Ishita "Aapney khaana khaaya?"

Raman "Tum bhe nahen khaaya naa?"

Ishita nods him "Theek hain main abhee arrange karthee hun."

Then they go to kitchen and Raman was sitting on stand there while Ishita was making Roti's for him.

Raman was making Ishita eat by his own hands while Ishita was serving him .

Ishita "Raman aur chahiyen ?"

Raman "Nehen .Tumhey "

Ishita "Raman mujhey bhee jyaada hogayen hain."

They were being watched by Subbu who came there disturbed by sound.

Raman sees him and waves him hi.

Subbu "Raman tum kabh aayen hon?"

Raman "Abhee.Tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon?"

Subbu "Sound aaya tho ."

Raman "Theek hain hum chaltey hain."

Ishita and Raman leaves while Ishita was happy taunting Raman oer his habbits of eating.Subbu gets jealous seeing them.

Then scene starts in morning.Ruhi comes to know that Raman came back and she rushes to him.

Ruhi "Papa aapney mujhey uthaaya nahen.Main aapko bahuth miss kar rahen thee." Kissing him.

Raman hugs her .

Raman "I miss you too.Ruhi tho papa ka princess hain.Issliyen aaj hum bahaar jaayengey."

Ruhi "Sachee .Kahan jkaayengey.Kaun kaun" as Ishita wakes up and Adi comes there.

Raman "Ruhi ka day out hain.Tho yeh sabh bhee Ruhi decide karegee."

Ruhi "Han tho Ishima ,Hercules,Miss M ,chittiaur aur"

Raman "Adi bhayya."

Ruhi looking at Adi "Adi bhayya bhee" as if no choice left.

Ruhi "Hum kahan jaayengey.Yeh Ishima bathaayegi."

Raman "Adi tum jaakar ready hojaon.Ishita tum Megha aur Mihika ko bathado."

Ishita takes Adi to his room and makes his arrangements for it and then leaves for informing Mihika and Megha.

Then Raman taking Ruhi in his lap "Kyaa hogaya tumhey .Adi bhayya sey aisey behave kar rahen hon?"

Ruhi "Papa main hummesha aapkey princess hun naa?."

Raman "Han.Tumhey yeh doubt kyon aaya?"

Ruhi "Fir Ishima ney kahan kee aap Adi bhayya ko bahuth gifts laongey.Merey liyen nahen "

Raman smiles at his daughters jealousy "Adi ko gift chahiyen merey princess ko apney papa chahiyen.issliyen papa hummesha aapkey saath rahengey naa.Aur papa who karthey hain jho princess bolthee hain."

Raman "Day out bhee tumhaarey liyen hain naa?"

Ruhi "Ishima bhee Adi bhayya sey jyaada baath kar rahen hain.Mujhsey "

Raman "No beta we love you so much.Adi bhayya naya hain naa issliyen.Adi bhayya aaj sey hummarey saath hee rahega naa.Tho sharing karnaa hoga"

Ruhi "Mujhey nahen karnee adi bhayya key saath"

Raman "Koi problem nahen.Tum Ishima aur Papa key sath sojaana."

Ruhi "Han .Main hummesha apkey saath rahoongi."Raman kissing her .

Then Raman plays with Ruhi for few time then they go for Hercules Ruhi playing with it and running along with it.Then Ishita comes and takes Ruhi toget her ready.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon... Amazing... waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jealous ruhi...loved her lik tht...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome. Good to see brother-sister relationship and ruhi's jealousy over her adi bhai and raman understanding her feelings. I hope in next parts,ruhi-adi bonding grows along with their chota fights.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry by mistake, double post got posted frm my mobile
Edited by tintu - 10 years ago
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NIce continue soon...
If Adi and Ishita bond increases then ruhi feels jealous about it, will be good to see

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