IshRa: Ice on Fire!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Excellent one OSJ
I, for one, am glad this came out after the epi... the dialogue about the pallu and their immediate reaction once their spell was broken filled in the blanks for me...

wonderfully written 😊

Dear lucky thank u very much for being here. I really look forward to ur feedback for obvious reasons. U r one of the best writers here.

I missed ur review on my SS 😳

I didn't like the bathroom scene much to b honest. I found the scene too robotic. Something was missing. I loved the aftermath much more, in the bedroom both blushing n awkward.

Quote

twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

😆😆
Happy u liked it though I want sure to post it after epi.

Your post coming after the episode actually made the scene come even more alive! You have so beautifully described the thoughts, the emotions, the humour, the embarrassment and finally the realisations in that moment. Unfortunately I had a dreamless sleep but am going to daydream about IshRa shower romance for some time now! ☺️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
jaanu,..PERFECT...THIS IS wht u call shower romance...show one ws disappointin for me...but ur version-I LOVED IT...PERFECT..!! thnx for writin this on my req yaar...much needed this ws..!!

Thanks Nikki

Oh boy!! U too didn't find it thrilling Han!! I dunno something was definitely missing there. May b the cold water was freezing their senses n they turned numb under the water or was KP white n baby like torso too distracting...😳😆

N upar se Iyer ki nautanki!! 😡 But I loved the bedroom scene. Raman was looking like a freshly plucked lily☺️ n JKR was blushing!! 😛

Quote

vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome...beautifully written!

felt as if hearing to Ishita's POV...exactly what she would have thought!

Quote

Jyoe

@Jyoe

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

WoW! Beautifully written OSJ!!

This now complete this Shower Scene for me!😊

Otherwise on the epi. I felt they ended it abruptly and there was something definitely missing! I dunno waht (maybe mrs.iyers intervention.she irked me !!!)

But your OS, makes the scene complete for me and I am at peace now..satisfied..😆 warna bechaiyni ho rahi thi!😆

P:S Loved that it was from Ishita's POV... Can we get similar from Raman's POV too! 😳

Edited by Jyoe - 11 years ago

Quote

Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

OSJ ... like Lucky aptly said, this OS filled the blanks for me also ... The shower scene was good but too much of anticipation actually killed it for me ... Now, I feel, I would have rather liked it as a surprise than watching the precap ... saw the precap so many times so pretty much nothing was left for me in the actual scene 😆

coming down to your OS ,,, Beautifully penned down. For the first time, they were aware of each other, and coudn't hide behind the mask of Ruhi ke liye ... Ishita's monologue took the cake for me ... wish these dhakkans take some inspiration from your OS and do some much needed introspection about their changing equations.

Lovely work 🤗.

Quote

ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Superb OS and loved how you used Ice on Fire to describe the emotions that were running through Ishita during that moment in the shower with Raman.

Quote

surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow you so very well explained the shower scene here! I really liked reading the thought process of raman ishita, treat to read. The title is so apt!

Quote

omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Jyoe
WoW! Beautifully written OSJ!!
This now complete this Shower Scene for me!😊

Otherwise on the epi. I felt they ended it abruptly and there was something definitely missing! I dunno waht (maybe mrs.iyers intervention.she irked me !!!)

But your OS, makes the scene complete for me and I am at peace now..satisfied..😆 warna bechaiyni ho rahi thi!😆

P:S Loved that it was from Ishita's POV... Can we get similar from Raman's POV too! 😳

Thanks Jyoe.

I too couldn't figure out what didn't tick for me. I think it is time that the CVs work on the emotional n feelings quotient without of course neglecting the nokjhok which is integral part in IshRa's life.

Raman's POV?? Why not. 😛

Quote

redwine1

@redwine1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Fantastic superlative brilliant ...

The icing on the cake is that is comes from ISHITA .. the one person we as an audience are quite in the dark about .. vis a vis her passion for Raman ...

Superb 👏