Armaan Naye Se Jagne Lage Hai - IshRa OS - Page 10

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautifully written...you are the master...⭐️

Originally posted by: lailapnj

Awesome. Loved this and so all ur OS.they are simply amazing

Originally posted by: Sapphire

Omg..oh how I wish that this can happen on the show itself! Haaye...why did you make it an OS? Please if possible, can you please continue this OS by making it into a SS? or even better FF? LOL..i know I am asking too much but what can I say...you are really good! Plz continue by writing the next part and make it into FF or SS. Thank you for sharing this OS with us, I LOVED IT!!!!

Sapphire aka Priya

Originally posted by: rutu83

was missing your stories this past week
this is great- raman's restlessness was so well written. i really hope they show even a little bit of this inthe show.
and then the kiss ☺️ wah ji wah - everyone is waiting for a hug and you went straight for the kiss 😉

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Res

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Sorry Aani... I had read it, and forgot that I had ressed a spot here!!! Anyway, I read it again, so I am happy I forgot 😆

Hey Lucky no probs happens with all of us 😊

This is only a scene of less than an hour maybe. But you have written it so descriptively, it makes me close my eyes and imagine each word translating into Raman's pinched brows, his hesitant smile, he look of desire, and I can see his hands trying to get to her hair.

☺️ somehow Karan is such a wonderful actor and so nuanced when I think of things his face appears in my mind' eye as Raman and somehow I can simply see him act in a certain way - I hope that made sense - so I try to put it on paper, thank you for saying you could imagine the same with closed eyes 😳

The paragraph about his realisation... why he was so restless for her... and how he hadnt had a chance to really celebrate with her... was so symbolic and beautifully written, i can only do this 👏

coming to the initmate part of the story. I have always felt good after reading your stories with such scenes in them. Let me clarify what I mean by good first 😆

🤣 thank you for clarifying cos my mind totally went places 🤣 on a serious note thank you Lucky that is really kind of you to say and the para...you know how it is when you have that special someone, even if you may not have realized things yet - you feel some lure towards them and your happiness and victories NEED to be celebrated with that person to give you the high you always aimed for and wanted to feel which is what I wanted to write here 😳

The scene was evocative. Yes it was passionate, and 'hot' but there was so much emotion in the act, that my mind immediately stops watching the 'kiss' and starts thinking about what they are thinking... That act for Raman and Ishita symbolises them handing over a precious part of their souls to each other. Its the recognition of each other, an awareness that they aren't just a couple of bickering partners any more... I made sense ???😕

you made perfect sense as always Lucky - yes it was Raman finally reaching out on a leap of faith where he wanted to handover a part of himself to her, which had turned hers to begin with and in turn.. wanted to proclaim a part of hers as HIS...when she reciprocated with trepidation she gave up the reigns over her heart, lost that practical mind in the moment as she finally paid heed to what she wanted over what was expected..hope I made sense now 😳

"There's always room for a story that can transport people to another place." - J.K. Rowling

☺️ OMG Rowling' words for a praise I am speechless really ☺️

On a personal note, your stories always inspire me to write more 🤗
Aww that is the best compliment you could have given me and did 🤗

Originally posted by: VasuKaShlicious

Loved it dearie...😳
Beautifully written...👏
i love ur writing very much... keep writing... pm me if u write any new if possible...

Originally posted by: loveyhmnew

.What is about this woman he wonders that makes him stronger than he has ever been and weaker than he possibly never knew he could be at the same time.

Best lines dear...Sum up everything

Originally posted by: Rozy77

(sigh)

this was so perfect❤️
so beautiful, so touching👏
loved how you described raman's restlessness and yearning⭐️
and ofcourse enjoyed their cute banter so early in the morning😆
but it was so unexpected when he pulled her in for a kiss... and am soo glad you made him react like that ☺️. it was magical ☺️ and this was my favorite line He had not tasted success until his lips had met hers at last this morning. 👏👏

Originally posted by: -MariaMars-

Aani.. Hats off.. Very beautifully written dear..🤗