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Hello guys I am going to write my first ever OS in this forum.i am an obsessed fan of yhm and divan/ishra. Hope you like my os and response good also. Any type of comment appreciation and criticisation both type of comment receive in open arm. Yesterday I was reading several os and ss .you guys are did fabulous job.every os are awesome. And I am going to write not romance scene it is a heart to heart talk between Ruhi and Raman.i love very much these father daughter duo and every time I was mesmerised by those scene.these dou gave us always fresh breath.
NOTE:- I thought that ruhi is much mature and intelligent than her age child.its is the effect of separation of her parents.so she can easily think and analise her father every emotions. Hope you guys are like my os
Part--1
Scene starts in Bhalla house every one busy in preparation of karwachauth as well as In Iyer house they are doing preparation for Barala Laxmi puja. Ruhi is playing with Shravan.than Bala comes and take Shravan to hospital for cold fever.than Ruhi getting boar alone.she goes to bhalla house.
Ruhi- Dadi ,Ishima,simmi bhua ,Nilu aunty aap log yeh sab kya kar rahe ho .aaj kuch festival hai kya? Paati k ghar v sab log tayari kar rahe hai.aur vandita chitii ,pati and mihika chitii sab log new saree pehne hue hai.
Mrs.bhall- Haan beta aaj festival hai,aaj na main bahut busy hun abhi kuch nahin bol sakti,tu bahar jake khel meri jaan.
Ruhi-kis k saath khelungi daadi sab log busy hai aur Shravan v abhi hospital gaya hai.
Mrs.B- Tu apne room main jaake drawing kar le beta aaj na menu bahut kaam hai
Ruhi-Ishima aaj kaun Si festival hai.
Ishita-Aaj na barala Laxmi puja hai aur karwa chauth hai.
Ruhi-ishima yeh kya hoti hai.
Ishita-Beta main na aaj bahut busy hun.fir kabhi bata dungi aaj nahin beta okk.
Ruhi - POUT ok ishima phir kabhi.main room jaati hun drawing karoongi wahan Ruhi goes to Raman room.in Raman room Raman doing something in his laptop.
Ru-Good morning papa.
Raman-Good morning beta.tun breakfast kar liye ho.
ruhi-Haan papa.
Than mihika and vandita comes to the bhalla house they meet Ishita.
Vandita- Arre ishu tu abhi tak tayar bhi nahin hui hai. Kya kar rahi puja start hone wali hai .hum ko amma ne tere ko saree pehnane k liye bheja hai .aur tu na kam mein bas busy hai.
Mihika-Ishu akka its not done jaao jaldi se tayar ho jaao.
Ishita- wow akka aaj tum na bahut khubsoorat dikh rahi ho.kya baat hai nayi kanjeevaram saree. Jiju ne gift diya hai.
Va-"blushing" haan tere vala jiju ne gift diya hai.
Mi-wow ishu akka aaj aap jiju k liye karwa chauth ka vrat rakh rahe ho.hmm hmmm, akka Lagta hai jiju ki magic chal gayi aap pe.
Ishu-what mihika tu bhi na aisa kuch nahin hai,waise amma ne kaha tha ki varalaxmi vrat rakhne k liye toh usi din mammi ji bhi karwa chauth ka hai toh rakh leta hun ek din bhuke rehne ka hi toh hai,nahin toh pagal hun kya uss Ravan kumar k liye vrat rakhungi. Tujhe pata hai na yeh shaadi hum ruhi k liye kiye hai. Aur mein mammi ji ko mana nahin kar sakti thi.unhone hamesha mere ko support kiy.
(but Ishita deep inside of her heart curse herself,sorry mihika I have to say like this.I cant say anything now .i am doing all of this only for Ramann my husband Raman not for anyone else)
Vandu-what ishu (angry look) Mi-yeah whatever
Mi-ishu akka aap ka kanjivaran saree kahan hai peri amma ne jo kal rat di thi.
Ishu-Miku woh na main abhi bahar nikali hi thi aur pehne ne wali tum log aa gaye.chalo dikhati hun mere room pe.
They are about to enter room.they see that Ruhi asking something to Raman.so they stop in entrance of the room.and watching father daughter duo.but Ruhi and Raman did not notice the Iyer sister because they are busy in their conversation.
Ruhi-Papa aaj kuch karwa chauth ka festval hai?
Raman-Haan beta aaj karwa chauth ka vrat hai.
Ruhi-Papa yeh kya hota hai aur kis liye karte hai
(Ruhi is very much curious to about this vrat)so Raman switch of the laptop and start describing about vrat. Iyer sisters also want to know about karwa chauth .bcoz they don't know about karwa chauth.
Raman -Ruhi beta yeh na bahut muskil vrat hoti hai.bina kuch khaye piye ladki log na poora din rehte hai.aur raat ko chaand ko dekh kar kate hai.
Ruhi- haaah But kyun papa .bhuke kyun rehte hai? Aur kis liye rehte hai ?aur paani bhi nahin kyun papa kis liye?
Raman-beta yeh na patni log apni pati k liye vrat rakhte hai.iss vrat se god khush hote hai. Aur patni apne pati ke sukh ke liye uske lambi aayu k liye ,dhan sampatti k liye rakhte hai. Taaki un logon main pyar bana rahe. Aur rahi baat bhooke rahne ki .jo patni apni pati se pyar karti hai na woh ek din bhuka kya 7din bhuke reh sakte hai.woh apni pati k liye sabhi se lad jate hai yahan tak yamraaj tak bhi.
( Raman and iyer sisters were got emotional when Raman describing all of this things , a big drop of tear abt to fall in his eyes.All the Iyer sister have also pearl size of tear in their eyes,Ishita thinks abt Raman and her relation,shagun and pyar,she affected too much when raman describing all of this in his full emotional mood)
Raman-Raat ko jab chand nikal ta hai na tab pati log apni haathon se patni ko paani pila kar vrat tod te hai .pati apni haathon se apni patni ko khilaati hai. Fir pati apni patni ko gift deta hai.
Ruhi-wow so romantic papa.main kabhi nahin dekha tha na isiliye,gift milegi toh koi bhi ladki karega karwachauth.
Raman-smile with teary eyes.Ruhi beta bas yeh ek vrat nahin hai. Ki bas bhule rehne se ho jayega. Aur gift k liye nahin beta,ek patni poori shraddha aur uski gabhir pyar se rakhte hai,bina pyar k yeh vrat poora nahin hoti.
(Iyer sister are full of emotional,Ishita think that what he told just now to mihika,ishu crying like hell inside of her heart)
Ruhi-sorry papa mujhe pata nahin tha na. Kya shagun mamma v karti thi aap k liye ?aur pyaar se
(Raman get a pain in heart he shocked when he heard shagun name .he hides his face from Ruhi and suddenly tears falling from his eyes,Ishita cant see this type of crying face of Raman she also cant control her tears)
Raman -beta aise kyun puch rahi ho aise shagun mamma k bare mein.
Ruhi-Nahin papa mujhe jan na hai , aur sach bol na Ruhi promise.
Raman -Haan shagun mamma karwachauth karti thi.
Ruhi-pyar se rakh thi thi
Raman- Ruhi shagun mama mere ko kabhi pyar hi nahin kiya.
(Raman tears are falling)aur sabse majedaar baat yehi hai ki shagun mama kabhi sachhi shraddha se vrat rakha hi nahin woh toh daadi ke dar se rakhti thi.aur bich bich mein main uske liye khana lati thi sabse chupaake.
Ruhi-tab toh papa yeh vrat toh tut gaya na, aapke liye woh khusiyan nahin chahti hai na. Aur papa apko us waqt bura nahin lagta tha yeh sab jaan k
Raman- Bura toh lagti thi uss waqt lekin mere ko uski chinta hoti thi shagun ki khusi hi meri duniya thi,woh agar vrat todna chahe toh sahi.
Ruhi-Kyun ?
Raman-kyun ki shagun ne mere ko meri Ruhi dedi. Beta
Ruhi-papa ishima v vrat rakh rahi hai,aap ko pata hai?
Raman-hmmm(wipes his tear)
Ruhi-kya ishima aap ke liye yeh vrat rakhi hai?pyaar se
Raman-Ruhi yeh kya question puchh rahi hai
Ruhi-papa bolo na aap ne Ruhi promise ki hai
Raman-haan ishima bhi pyar se rakhi hai(Iyer sisters are in shocked) kyun ki aapse woh bahut pyar karti hai. Woh aap k liye vrat rakhi hai .
Ruhi-main bhi ishima se bahut pyar karti hun ,lekin main jisko v pyar karti hun sab log mujhse door chale jate hai, aap dur chale gaye the,adi bhaiya,shagun mama sab log.papa kya main itni buri hun.kahin ishima v chhod k nahin jayenge na(Ishita shocked again)
Raman -Nahin beta koi aapko chhod k nahin gaye hai mujhe chhod k gaye hai ,aap toh bahut pyari ho.aur aadi bhaiya ek din jarur ayenge ek din dekhna.
Raman- Ruhi ishima bahut achhi hai woh tum ko chhod ke kabhi nahin jayegi.woh tumhare liye mere se shaadi kiya hai.woh aap se bahut pyaar karte hai
Ruhi-lekin papa Ishima aap se toh pyar nahin karti hai na .
Raman -kaun bola ishima pyar nahin karte, meri jaan tum ho Ruhi ,aur ishima aap se pyar karte hai
Ruhi-Par papa woh sirf aap se pyar nahin krte hai
Raman-Haan sirf mere ko pyar nahin karte hai.
Ruhi -Papa aapse koi nahin pyar karta!shagun mamma bhi nahin aur ushima bhi nahin, aap ne past mein kuch galat kaam kiya hai kya?
Raman -Ruhi apko lagta hai papa kuch galat kaam kar sakte hai
Ruhi-no
Raman-Beta main zindagi main kabhi kuch galat kaam nahin kiya .fir bhi meri kismat mein sab kuch likha hua hai,kya karoon koi pyar nahin karta hai.
Ruhi-Nahin papa aap jhoot bol rahe ho! Main aap se bahut pyar karti hun ,jab ishima nahin aayi thi tab se(Ruhi is crying) aap aise kaise bol sakte ho
.(Ruhi hugs Raman and says I love you papa, Raman speechless mee too.and Ruhi wipes Raman's tear Bg music "teri aur meri rishta poorana hai")
Ruhi-aise nahin rote budhhu papa
Raman-smiles in teary eyes
Ruhi-Papa aap ishima k liye kya gift dene wale ho aaj raat
Raman-meri sabse badi chiz toh maine pehle hi gift de chuk hun meri Ruhi ko
Ruhi- oho papa waise wala gift (Raman shows a beautiful necklace to Ruhi)
Raman-yeh gift kaisa hai?
Ruhi-WOW papa achhi hai,yeh ishima pehne gi na
Raman-ishima ruhi liye yeh necklace pehen legi
Ruhi -aur aap k liye
Raman- silent few seconds and says in slow voice "Pata nahin beta " woh mere liye pehne hi ya nahin lekin meri Ruhi k liye 200%
Raman-achha Ruhi aap bahar jao ,bahar khelo mujhe kuch kaam hai office se aata hun .(Raman hugs Ruhi and says I love you) (than Ruhi goes to outside Iyer sisters are hides from Ruhi somehow, Raman stands from bed and place necklace in cupboard and touch keep ishita's saree for 30seconds and inside the pin drop silence,Raman get a call)
Raman-haan Mihir board wale se meeting fix kar Ishita ki license k baare mein . jaldi kar dete hai yaar, bechari ka sad wala face mere ko acchhi nahin lagta.
(Raman takes his court and shirts to baathroom for change.iyer sisters all are in hell shocked thier minds are freeze.they come to the room and sit silently on the bed,after some time Raman comes from bathroom)
Raman-Are Ishita ,vandita,mihika aap log kab aaye
Ishita -Bas abhi aye hain
Raman-Ishita main office se aata hun, bye see you all on the terrace at night.byee
Iyer sisters-nods ok bye Iyer sisters all are in shocked ,they are eye witnessed of all this Ruhi Raman heart to heart talk)
Vandita-Ishu ,mihika yeh kaun tha ,Raman hi thaa na , mujhe shock ho raha hai yeh Raman nahin woh sakta,bolo na mihka yeh kaun tha yeh jo aadmi Ruhi k saath baith baat kar raha tha kaun tha
(vandita and mihika full of tears in their eyes,Ishita still not over all of this)
to be continue...
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