''Gali mein aaj chand nikla'' IshRa OS Part 2/ Pg 6

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yhmfever

@yhmfever

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awnnn raman fasting for ishuu
Hayeee niii super cute che
Loved it
The whole part was awesom

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

reallyy beautifulll updatee!! loved itt ompletelyy!!!

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

perfect beautiful
Raman kept vrat for ishu aww..so sweet
loved it

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Hello ruchi such a lovely updaye
Prefect karvachth os loved it ❤️ ur such a brillent writter dear

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

SUPERB,AWESOME.It was simply beautiful.so much that I cud visualize each scene as if it is playing in front of me.Raman keeping fast for ishu was so sweet n his family pulling his leg was mast.I was grinning through out reading that part but most beautiful scene n dailogue was "raman sleeping under shadow of her".aww it was sooo reflective

Edited by lourel24 - 11 years ago

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vani_prem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

wonderful. i hope you continue to write.

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Beautiful...
Loved the second bit so much.. l literally was grinning from ear to ear when I read Raman fasting for Ishu.. Damn, I so wana see such a thing in the show.. 😳
Poor RKB, everyone's having fun at his expense..

Loved Ishra parts.. specially the massage one.. The end was awesome.. ⭐️

Wonderfully written.. Keep up the awesome work...😃

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

reading your stories always leaves huge smile on my face🤗
how sweet is the second part i loved it!!
especially toshiji's knowing smile in the morning before raman's announcement and then her finding raman sleeping under care of ishita 🤗

thanks for the pm 😳