tere liye-an ishra ff updated part 31 special note page 150

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Nice one yaar.

Just happy Shagun is not comming.

But Raman is getting romantic expecting something in goa.

There is lot of mess Adi can create but I dont know what you are planning.

cont soon

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM
Nice one yaar.
Just happy Shagun is not comming.
But Raman is getting romantic expecting something in goa.
There is lot of mess Adi can create but I dont know what you are planning.
cont soon

frankly speaking...you gave me some idea vikas

i really had not planned anything further..except for romance...hehe

actually after posting it my next thought was which one should i update next...but you actually gave a point...

if i extend it more than one part then will surely do something with adi

actually it all depends on response

but thnks 4 your review..loved itt

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: whitelily
Fantabulous update

thnks 4 liking dear

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

hey ankita finally u updated
awww I love this update
train journey is awesome
thank god apshagun was not there
aww goa n romance nice combination
with adi just make him realize wht is he missing ??
update soon

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#765

OMGGG!!! FINALLYYY U UPDATEDDD!!!! THANK YOU SOO MUCH JAAN!

I agreee!!!! this story of yours is one masterpiece! aur waise train romance yeh kaffi hai.. ;) considering chai wala walking up and down in train! :P ;)

aur delhi to goa by train i gues its one and half day! not sure though! hehhe

GODDD, i sooo HATE this boy Adi... itna baatameez ladka! hope ISHRA turns him into a good boy in this GOA trip !

Conttt soonn!!! <3 <3

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kuls

@theshushreader

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#766

ohhh thank god finally after a longgg break u updated... u kno it was a very need one... i totally completely loved dis one... d initial few paras awww... was sooo cute n lovely... bt u kno i really got d shock of my life wen i read adi n shagun's name... bt thank god apshagun didnt come along... n raman taking aryan from ishu's hand n saying my chotu n kissing him was the best cute n lovely scene yaar... i loved dat to d core...❤️mihir was hilarious hahaha... train scene was sooo superbbb fantastic... it was sooo really... now i am super excitd fr dr honeymoon in goa... i kno d way u handle with romance... hot passionate n bold way of writing... sooo reallly reallly expecting something dat way... n adi has come na... expecting some kind of drama too... ooo am sooo excited about d nxt part... my thinking r goin wild...u kno me hehe😉 i kno u wnt update dat soon... bt stilll update soon n a veryy veryyy veryyy lengthy one... samji darling

Edited by yazhi - 10 years ago

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greenie

@greenie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#767

oohh... Waited 4 ur update... Finally u did it ... Loved this train part.,...

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

That was so good I can totally imagine the train romance continue soon and its nots boring

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Lovely update dear ... Pls pls pls don't include Adi in the family later 🥱 🥱

Coming to it, I loved the small romance at the door step, it was mature and sensuous... Hahaha, Mihir always enters at the long time ;p... The train romance was suttle esp the way You have mentioned hug and yes pls pls pls bring in more...

Oh yes don't even think of stopping, I do not know about other but I am in love with this ff. I would read the whole story even in one go if I am really bored anyday or feel like reading it just like that. So the more updates the more happier I am. Your just the best at writing these stories. Luv you !!!!

I am yet to reply to your comments, will do soon. I did not want to put this on hold :)