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Amazing writing. Plz pm me when update next part
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Originally posted by: ravinaj

Amazing writing. Plz pm me when update next part



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missing u ankita. where r u?? cum bak soon with lots of updates without delay.
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missing u ankita. where r u?? cum bak soon with lots of updates without delay.



awww...thats so sweet of you remebering me aarohi
yeahh...m back
will try to make back to back updates..
i wrote a new os...hope you like it
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heyy anu...m back yrrr
came with new os
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heyy anu...m back yrrr
came with new os
or ab jab aa gyi ho to u know
i can miss updating any but not this one
will update soon

thanks and update quickly
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thanks and update quickly

aww..one more
yaaa vikas
next s this one...promise
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Posted: 10 years ago
So...as promised, here I am with new update of this one. Ghosh...I have written so many but dont know what connection I have with this one...Whenever I write this one, the flow is just awesum. Other stories, I reach ending with difficulty and with this one, I can write on and on...infact remind myself ki ankita...its time to post..hehe

Well here is the update.




Part 29



"Dadu, Dadi..this is not done. You wont be there for your Roo's birthday." Said little Ruhi with her hands on her hips and pout on her face. "Beta..its urgent. We need to go to Ludhiana. Raman's taayuji need us. He is not well." Explained Mrs. Bhalla while her dadu picked her up in her arms. "And your papa has planned special goa trip for you" continued Mr. Bhalla. "Go and enjoy. We will wish you on skype." He kissed her cheeks. Ruhi accepted half heartedly while others smiled.

The day arrived. Ruhi, along with her parents, aryan, romi chachu, mihir and mihika, bala, vandu and shravu was excited to leave for goa. As they moved towards the door, their steps came to a halt. Shagun stood on the door along with Adi. Raman didnt know how to react. Everyone was shocked. Ishita chose to break the ice. "I knew you will come Adi. Am glad you finally decided to give it a try." She said smiling. Everyone looked at her surprised while Raman heaved a sigh. It was no rocket science for him to understand that she would have gone to the extent of calling Adi along to give him a chance to spend some time with his son. Ghosh..this woman. How she always does this. How she comes to know everytime whats in his heart. He so wanted his three children to be together but never told her. But she..he silently wished her he could hug and kiss her right now. But then stopped himself. Moreover..more important question was what was Shagun doing. He mentally wished she just left drop Adi and left without creating any scene. He was too happy to taunt her even.

The stars were in his favour. She just spoke Adi to take care of himself. "I never wanted that you go with these people. Dont know what magic this behnji has done to you. But remember..mom is always there for you. Bye." She said and left. The smile and unaffected behaviour of Ishita made him realize that he need not worry about her useless words. Instead he mouthed a thanks to Ishita while she nodded and smiled as if saying she understands him. He smiled back to her and moved towards his son. "Adi...papa is really happy. Its good you came." He said with his hand on his son's head while everyone smiled. Adi was not much interested though. "I came since its my sister's birthday." He said. "By the way when are we leaving? What is the timing of flight?" He asked. "We are not going by plane Adi Bhayiya." Ruhi chirped.

"What??" Adi asked. "Then. how?" He was curious. "By train." Said giggling ruhi. "Yuck..Train? Why train? It will take extra time and low class people go by train. Am sure your father can afford tickets of plane for all of us. Or should I ask my dad for it?" He said smirking and taunting her. She felt bad while Raman dreaded a tear at the corner of his eye. Ishita handled the situation at once.

"Of course your papa can afford that beta. You know very well." She said smiling. "But Ruhi wanted the journey to be special. In flight we cant enjoy that much. And Raman has booked a special compartment in Shatabdi.Trust me..you will enjoy it. And it will be memorable one for you." She ran her hand lovingly through his hair. Though he didnt like the idea much but there was not much he could argue about. "Chalo chalo.lets leave.." Romi said enthusiastically. Come Ruhi Chuhi and Tingu. He extended both his hands as kids grabbed it from either side. Everyone laughed and leaved the place.

As Ishita balanced Aryan in her arms to move forward, she felt a tug on her arm. "Raman??" She spoke. "I love you." He said smiling. "Umm...love me..beacuse I did all this. Naa krti to nhi kehte naa I luv you." She laughed and said teasing him. He just laughed back. "You know I always do it and even say you. But how you got to know I wanted? I mean..." he was really surprised. "Raman..." she kept her hand on his cheek. "You talk about love yourself and then ask how I came to know. You are my heartbeat. And how can I not know whats going on in your heart." He smiled at it and kept his hand on hers. Then bringing her face closer to hers, he gave a peck on her forehead. She closed her eyes feeling his love. "You are the best thing that can happen to me. Really..." he said as tears of happiness and smile mingled on his face. She too smiled back.

"Bhayi..Bhabhi.agr romance ho gya ho to chlein. Goa is also a romantic place anyway. " It was Mihir on door mocking them. "Aa rhe hain. Tu bhaag." Raman shooed him away while Ishita laughed at her dewar's scared face as he ran away. Ravan kumar...she giggled. He just stared at her and then joined in her laughter. "Lets go" he said as he took Aryan from her arms to get hold of his son himself. "My chotu..." he said affectionately pulling his nose and then kissing his son.

The train journey was beautiful as Ruhi had planned. There were rounds of Antakshri...girls vs. boys, then duvet singings, dum shras and many more rounds. Adi though seemed to be more interested in his i-pod earlier but later found the games interesting and joined them. Ishita and raman tried their level best to make it feel at home as much as possible.

As the sun set, everyone was tired. They had food and then decided to sleep on their berths. The train was to reach Goa early morning the next day. (I dont know how much time shatabdi takes from delhi to goa. So just feel free to imagine.) Ishita took particular care in making Adi comfortable. She was trying to make Aryan sleep while she listened to snores coming. As Aryan slept, she felt relaxed. Feeling too tired, she at once went into slumber.

It was hardly 5 minutes, she had closed her eyes that she felt someone shaking her. She opened her eyes in horror...only to find Raman looking at her intently with a smile on his face. What?? She gestured asking with her eyes. He with his fingers pointed her to get up and come with him. "Where?" She whispered not disturbing anyone. It was dark as lights were switched off. He gave an irritated expression on her question and spoke in a low but angry tone "Come..". "Aryan??" She asked immediately. "He is sleeping." Ishita couldn't get up as Aryan was sleeping with her. He could fall off from the seat in a running train if she was not there covering him. He nodded and then picked up his son in his arms. Giving him a kiss, he gently made him lie beside vandu. She took hold of his nephew immediately while Raman grabbed Ishita's hand and took her with him.

As she followed him, he stopped little behind the door and then opened it to let the cool breeze in. She inhaled the chill air as he her flew. He looked at her mersimized. She found him staring her and nodded...Kya?? Nothing..he nodded in negative. "You look beautiful." He said. She blushed and smiled. "So you brought me here to say this?" She asked. He stepped closer to her and kept his hands on her shoulders.

"No Mrs. Bhalla. I was not feeling sleepy. Wanted to enjoy this weather so brought you here." He completed as his hands joined together behind her neck encircling it. She smiled at it. They positioned themselves securely at the door feeling the natural air against their bodies. (You can imagine ddlj last scene..hero heroine at the door)

"Enjoy with me. I see. Someone is getting more and more romantic day by day." She said teasinv him. "I was always romantic Madam." He retorted back. "It was just that I never imagined of romancing you." He laughed at her. "Oho..Look who is talking. Sadu Kumar." She replied back. "Ok..I dont want to go for other fight." He stopped at that point only. "Really? Then what do you want? " she asked tilting her head.

"Ummm..." he said and then brought his face closer to her. Tilting her face towards him, he kept his lips on hers. He could feel her smile through their kiss. After lingering for some time, they seperated as she hugged him tightly. Her face burried in his neck. He smiled and hugged her back. "This is what I want." He spoke. "I so wish we were in our room right now. Both of us." She understood his intentions and slapped his cheeks lovingly. "But it is not. We are in train. Off to Goa. So..better control yourself...Hubby dear." She tried to knock some sense into him. "I know that..." he replied in an irritaing tone. "But off to Goa. You know Ishu its very romantic place. Am waiting to reach there. Then you see what I do." He told her.

"Raman...you are father of three kids. We are not going on some honeymoon. Dont behave like a love suck puppy." She told him. "O yes honeymoon..." he spoke at once "What an idea yrr. We actually didnt have a proper honeymoon. So this is honeymoon for us." He said pulling her cheeks. "Ravan kumar...dont be so enthusiastic. We are not some newly wedded couple. Teen teen bache or ek badi si family jaa rhi hai hmare saath. Yaad hai naa." She said pulling his nose. "Chalein...agr apka train romance ho gya ho to." She said and made her way inside.

Raman just smiled at it and ran his hands through his hair. "Family hai to kya hua Ishita. I will still make it our honeymoon only. Am pretty sure you know your ravan kumar this much." He spoke to himself and smiled.



So...kaisa laga
I know thoda ajeeb tha but I really wanted something like train romance lol...dont kill me for it. Feel free to share whatever you think.

P.S. I know its getting unnecessary longer now. You can tell me to stop if you feel so. I will be more than happy. Obvsly after one ending part also, score gonna be 30 which is a record in itself. So if you feel its getting over the board, I will better end it.
Pms tomorrow
Edited by ankitasidana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for update much needed.
My brain is in temporary rest.
I have to get back my insanity to continue.

Will comment in deatail after reading

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