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twerping

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This was just perfect!!! Loved every line! Creepy Param getting bashed up!! And Raman's possessiveness!!! Wow!! Brilliant story!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl
wow OSJ.. 2 almost back to back IshRa stories!! too good.😊
Liked this one a lot- full in-character IshRa and a very possible scenario from Bhalla's duniya.

btw mention of lower swollen lip and tht vague mention of last night incedence mis-guided me for few minutes before Dr mode of Ishita got me back on track rather quickly.. 😛

and u know the best part- last bold line.. kya punch tha 👏

Thanks Ad.😃 Yeah I feel like writing so me back. N I am happy to see so many responses.

@ bold

Haha!! Raman's lips swollen due to kissing is very very far right now!! He is not as lucky as Doc Anirudh🤣

My fav line is also the last one 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: twerping
This was just perfect!!! Loved every line! Creepy Param getting bashed up!! And Raman's possessiveness!!! Wow!! Brilliant story!!

Thank u for your awesome comments dear. It feels so good when alarm the creep gets beaten up. 😆 N when Raman is all possesive and macho then cherry on the cake. 😳

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: anjalisawle
Loved it... Think in the serial also during such confrontation only they might say to each other that they love each other and not some romantic setting...

Thank u for reading n loving it.

I am also now very positive. No way these two are confessing in a romantic atmosphere. Only a "life snatching" moment can lead them to confess that they are made for each other.

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kritu17krits

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

lovely
beautifully written 👍🏼

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ahh!!! what a pleasure it is to read such stuff...and imagine IshRa in the different situtaions u pen down...enjoyed it !!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: cool_aparna
Ahh!!! what a pleasure it is to read such stuff...and imagine IshRa in the different situtaions u pen down...enjoyed it !!!

Thank u Aparna. It us always a pleasure to write on IshRa n it is equally a pleasure to have great comments from u. Feels really great. Thanks a lot.