Ishra OS- I will take your pain away - Page 3

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

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u have written amazingly well. I loved it very much. pls pm me if u r writing more stories😳

excellent story👏👏

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

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u have written amazingly well. I loved it very much. pls pm me if u r writing more stories😳

excellent story👏👏

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

too cute n adorable

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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Hey Sai, sorry for the delay in editing!

This was as relaxing and relieving as a massage session 😳 very beautifully written. I like how you have taken a 'present' scenario, but progressed their relationship to suit the narrative.

I loved the line below!!!

"Thank you. It feels good. To be honest I was in lot of pain but I didn't know what I could do about it" he gratefully told her.

when I read it, the title, the story, everything came together wonderfully :)

Originally posted by: Isma_A

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Awww, Sai, this was so darn cute. 😳 I'm glad you had them in love and past confession; nice to see someone's take on an in-love Raman and Ishita! Massage had the elements of love, care, concern, with a very subtle sensuous overtone. Beautiful and lovely!

I approve and forgive the request for an extension. 😛

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

Dil ke armaan aapke shabdon mein bayaan ho gayye...😳

Loved it...👍🏼

Awesome writing !!!

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

That was a simple, yet awesome story.

This was so cute, and Raman was actually showing his concern to her. 🥱

Fork se maar daalegi Ishu apne Raavan kumar ko! 🤣

Honestly, from the title, I went a few days back and thought this would be painfully emotional. But i'm very happy now. 😃

But the last scene was my favorite, the way he silently and happily fell asleep. Silently and quickly just like in tonight's episode.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awww this ws so so adorable sai..LOVED IT..!!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Sweet OS !! Loved how Raman and Ishita took turns taking care of each other.

Originally posted by: Alu-

Okay this is so my type of OS

You got lucky and hence your teacher does not subtract marks🤣

Okay coming back to the story, I like how you made sure Ishra were in love and comfortable because if not we won't get anything like this.

I really liked how you mixed it everything together and penned it down so beautifully. Very well written and thought out😳