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Elita

@Elita

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

An incredible story...👏

Loved Raman's sensitiveness...his gesture was so genuine and sweet. That's the best gift he could've have given Ishita. When Raman begins to express...he melts ppl's heart... as his talks are honest and have depth just like his personality.

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Hey Aani.🤗

This entire story is beautifully written.

I felt a little disappointed with the first part.
It was VERY short. Mind you - VEERRRY!😆
I read that long back but didn't get the time to comment on it.
Hence here it goes now :

Part 1. - He realized that she is no ordinary woman.😃
You left a note regarding his feelings for Shagun and Ashok. I really couldn't fathom the mind of a woman who forgets her child's distress seeing a 5carat ring!😡
The entire depiction of his thoughts while planning a grand, special gift for her was soothing,
i'm not a proper writer hence, i won't be able to express it properly.
Its not beautiful, just pleasant in an overwhelming way.
- I don't know if i made sense!😕

Special applauds for not continuing with the spoiler story.😆
And... Those amazing quotes! Where do you get them? Always on target with new beautiful ones!

Sorry for being awfully late Aani, have read the other two. Will comment on them soon.
Thanks a ton for the PMs madam.🤗

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

and with this gift I am head over heels in love with ur writing yet again for the n-th time 🤗

Awesome work👏

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

That was till date the best gift any fictional husband gave his wife. Raman Kumar Bhalla you have my salute.

Aani once again hats off.

Love

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

unreserved on pg 14 & 27

Edited by ZenerDiode - 11 years ago

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Alu-

@Alu-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

All the three updates have been absolutely great

I love what Raman did for Ishita, shows how highly thinks of her.

Like usual you penned down everything in the perfect manner

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: shalu79
Res😳

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Anni, Beautifully written as always 👏👏👏

thanks Shalu 😊
At last u revealed Raman's gift.😆
Intially the way u build the scene, it reminded me of a packet which Ishu handed over to him at their wedding night in hotel room😉😆.

LOL I wanted to make it a little fun before she cries tears of joy 😆

Then u mentioned paper roll, I was wondering whether it is Ruhi's adoption papers or renewal of wedding vows😳
Loved how Raman explained n gave reasoning to her for why he felt to do this. Aww I too want Showwala Raman to know that day Ishu's sent Ruhi to take care of him

Oh I wish they touch upon this someday too 😳
Loved it.
Thank u Anni 🤗
will wait for next update😃

thanks Shalu 🤗