IshRa SS : bye bye the couch! (part 9 FINAL- 2nd august)

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rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

did ishita say "nothing important"? juthi juthi a la kajol from k3g 😆

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Shimla Akkineni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome. You write too good. just continue pls. next parts :)

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
Excellent last part it was worth the wait

thank you so much !! 😃

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: lourel24
Loved it.I have been waiting for ur update for so long,have searched so many times whether u have update or not but didn't expect it to be the last part.I kind of felt it to be incomplete.

sorry, it took me a bit of time for this one

yeah it's a bit incomplete, first i had written a longer version but there was more tension between raman and ishita. So i re wrote it but it was still getting longer and longer and most importantly, it was incoherent.

So i deleted everything and tried to make it CUTE and SHORT. and i decided to post whatever i ended up with because it was already saturday and it was time to upload !

hope you're not to disappointed...

Anyways, thanks for reading the 9 parts so far, maybe i'll try to add a little cute scene as an extra to make up for the incompleteness feeling you got .

thank you for commenting 😊

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: remya1990
😊😊Oh my goodness...its indeed an awesome update dear.
waiting wasn't bearable but after reading this i understood that this beautiful update was worth for waiting...
i totally loved this.
thank you.
now waiting for your next OS.

sorry i took my time for the last update 😕

i'm so happy you liked it !!

thank you for reading and for your comment, it means a lot !

probably won't be any OS from me soon because i have exams at the end of the month, but if i ever write anything, i'll PM you 😉

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: avni_19
Yup reallyyy cutee update.. I loved it also. But I feel the ending cud hv been lile more clear. So I suggest if u write anothr part whr ishra just clears their misunderstanding n lile nokjhok n end it with a beautiful romance!

If no plans to write, thn koi nahi. All coolll... but I loved ur story! Keep writing more!

Ending was a bit foggy because that's just how ishRa are 😆😉 you think they're in love but they act so witty that you can't be sure.

I'll probably write an extra scene for those who wants and add it to the story as you mentioned.

Thank you for reading the whole story and for commenting, i appreciate the time you took to give me your feedback. Much love ! ❤️

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Beautiful update Rajji Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

Thank you so much lovely !

If i write something else, i'll make sure to PM you 😉 but it won't be too soon because i have exams coming up soon.

Thank you for reading and commenting, it warms my heart ! ❤️

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: ABBY92
AWWHHH, I'm so happy that Ishita found out that it was Raman who was sleeping with her pillow and the way she whispered she missed her Ravan Kumar as well was too cute !!

Feeling great that you loved it ! First scene i wrote was a fight in the bedroom but i decided to change it and to make something light, otherwise the story would have stretched to no end. 😆

Ishita is much more open about her feelings than Raman, he can't say a nice word to her without throwing 2 mean one liners on the side ! 😕😆😆

Thank you for reading the whole story and for commenting ! 🤗

Edited by rajji-cutest - 11 years ago

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: rnarayan
nice , sweet story, love reading, thanks for sharing with us

thank you for the compliment and thank you for reading 😉 (a writer is nothing without readers so i'm the one that should thank you all really ! )

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Really good yar. Especially the last scene with Raman scratching his head. 👏

Hahahah, so glad you liked it lovely !

Sneaky ishita decided to tease him a bit for this time but i'm sure one day they'll truly confess their feelings to each others, not in this OS though...😛😛

thank you for reading ! ⭐️