A Night To Remember ❤️
This short OS has nothing really to do with the current track. The scenario is , IshRa have confessed their love and it's the D-day 😈 i mean , night ☺️
To give this OS the desired feel , I have jotted some dialogues in Hindi but for convenience I have written same in English in the bracket.
This is not 100% my creativity but loosely based on one of my most favorite consummation scene and I have written this OS on a different couple before too.
P.S Thank you for the beautiful response you bestowed upon my previous ,
, However I can't PM as my buddy list varies from Punar Vivah to Mahadev to Geet to bollywood forum to YHM to Pak forum And I don't know whom to include sorry
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Raman was adorning his bed with orchids when his gaze fell on the mirror . He moved closer to observe his sweaty body .
"Why am I a being so anxious? She is my wife after all. I have full right on her! Then why am I so ----"
A sharp tap on his door broke his chain of thoughts & brought him back to his senses & he moved ahead to open the door. As he opened the door he saw Ishita covering her face with a veil , her long dupatta & holding a glass of milk. She clumsily pops into the room & turns back.
"Easy easy. Its my suhaag raat & more then me you all are being excited"
Shocked Raman gaped at her then moved out of room to see who pushed Ishita inside. There was nobody.
"Ishita ji? With whom were you talking?
"Raman ji! Can't you see? Im talking to my sakhiyaan (friends) " She then pointed to the door , "Haan Haan I'll lock the door , now will you all please move out of the room?"
Ishita locked her door & then budged to Raman & instantly fell on his feet.
"Ishita!! What are you doing?"
"Swami! Aapke charno mein hee mera swarg hai! Lijiye! Doodh pijiye!"
(My lord! My heaven lies in your feet. Please have this milk)
Raman didn't understand whats going on in her mind. He gulped down his milk in nano seconds & asked her.
"What is this?"
"Swami! I have learnt this in old movies. I'll sit on the bed with my veil , you'll come close to me , take off my veil & will sing , 'Suhaag rat hai , ghunghat utha raha hoon main'" , Ishita sang in a high pitch nasal voice forcing Raman to shut his ears.
Ishita stopped immediately , Raman looked at her , adoring his innocent bride.
He smile & said "Priyatama ! Aao! Apna sthaan grahan karo"
(My Lady! Come! Take your seat)
Raman made her sit on the bed & sang , "Suhaag Raat Hai , Ghunghat Utha Raha Hoon Main" & he lifted her veil.
Astounded by her beauty , Raman couldn't resist & placed a warm kiss on her cheeks.
"Swami! What are you doing!" , Ishita said as she plucked two deep red roses from the decoration. She gave one to Raman & kept another in her hand.
"Brush these two with each other!" , Ishita commanded with a straight face.
Raman followed her commands & they brushed the flowers for a minute.
"Done Raman ji! Our Suhaag rat is done! Now good night!" , Ishita chirped.
Raman stared her in wonder trying to figure out what their act meant. To clear her doubts , Ishita said , "Swami! The movies from where I have learnt what to do in a Suhaagraat , they have shown this only! The groom holds her brides hand , if he is too shameless he can kiss her too," Ishita giggled while speaking about the kiss part then continued with a straight face , "In the end they show two flowers & its done"
Raman's smile widened. He leaned towards her & his brawny voice he whispered , "Let me show you what happens in those movies!"
Ishita ogled him for a second then dug her eyes down , bashfully , nervously.
"Ishita! You squandered some precious minutes showing me an old hindi movie while we could have enacted a more meaningful one" He bit her ears as she moaned , "Raman---"Thank you 🤗
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Shubhika ❤️
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