IshRa- Fragments in time #6Updated PG 13(a collection)

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Ami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

None one but you can write so much in so little. Love it!❤️

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

It was so apt regarding raman's situation.

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Isma

@Isma_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

This was brilliant, Uzma!!! Loved it!!

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Nikita99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

You know how they say ' good things come in small packages'. It's so true with your fragment. You've said so much with few words. Love it! Thanks for the pm.

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

That was so beautiful!

This heart of mine no longer wants to be caged
It beats again

Amazing lines! I might just use it somewhere:P
Absolutely amazing!
You're such a prolific writer man.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Beautiful as always Uz I just hope if at some point I steal some of your lines you wont sue me for plagarism 😆

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luvsagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Uz, these lines have captured Raman's feelings and has captured the essence of Raman's convo with Mihir in Sat episode!

Simple beautiful

Nina

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Ishraholic_Sim

@Ishraholic_Sim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Uz. Read all 6 fragments in one go... loved all of them... describing these fragments as wonderful, beautiful, brilliantly are just not enough... you have left me speechless. Can't find words to describe them. Uz you are too good with poetic language.

All fragments are too good but loved.. loved .. loved Fragment iii Satisfy the most. Each and every word of it describes Raman's fear, delima perfectly. By the time i got the last line of it Please let it not be.. i had tears in my eyes... it was heart touching yaar...