A Father's Plight - OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: vihan1

Very noce OS. Like it..

Thank you so much :)

wonderfully written !

true RKB turmoil in unsaid ...nd the wrst part he cannot voice out his pain .he havnt choosen adi over ishita but afi over himself...to save him he is hurting every single soul who wish for his well being . he knw ishita is his nd with dat "haq" he hav taken her for granted coz he knws may watever come she will stand by him ..stand for him unlike him who may take tym to think . but for now his plight is worse coz his plight dsnt hav a tongue ..neither does hav a shoulder to cry on

O my God! that was just perfect... no other word.. i so agree with u about rkb's plight...

Tanya this was truly so beautiful and moving. The angst and the pain that both feel and deflect upon each other has been depicted so well by you. The way you have conveyed Raman is the one that I emphasise with and connect to.

Originally posted by: sweetshab

wonderfully written !

true RKB turmoil in unsaid ...nd the wrst part he cannot voice out his pain .he havnt choosen adi over ishita but afi over himself...to save him he is hurting every single soul who wish for his well being . he knw ishita is his nd with dat "haq" he hav taken her for granted coz he knws may watever come she will stand by him ..stand for him unlike him who may take tym to think . but for now his plight is worse coz his plight dsnt hav a tongue ..neither does hav a shoulder to cry on

Thankyou so much :)

Originally posted by: shalz_123

O my God! that was just perfect... no other word.. i so agree with u about rkb's plight...

that line in your os " i have chosen adi over myself" so apt.. seriusly bravo job...

Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: happenstance

Tanya this was truly so beautiful and moving. The angst and the pain that both feel and deflect upon each other has been depicted so well by you. The way you have conveyed Raman is the one that I emphasise with and connect to.

Thank you so much, coming from you means a lot :)