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This continues from the July 7th (2014) episode of Ye Hai Mohabbatein where Ishita confronts Raman about Shagun being her Amma's accident case culprit and where he doesn't accept the truth. He certainly doesn't deny it. Please comment and give feedback! Negative or positive, keep them constructive please so I can improve as a writer!

The story of IshRa will always be a beautiful one with potholes along the way but we never get the pyaar we expect from such a beautiful story. Here I hope to present to you a way to save the bharosa they share and find in each other.
LOCATIONS OF PARTS:
Part 1- No Matter The Pain(HERE)
Part 2- We always have been, and forever shall be.(BOTTOM PAGE 1)
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OS:Forever IshRa - No Matter The Pain (Part 1)

Ishita sinked into the chair, still paralysed by the pain, a pain. A pain that would never be healed. At least not by a physical attempt. Ashok strolled out the door with the devil's smirk across his tall face. He had ruined the rishta between everyone. It was a cold war, to be fought through emotion. Raman heard the pitter patter of the rain, followed by a car starting and driving off,disruptingthe puddles harmony. Ishita gathered the last ounces of her impenetrable strength and rose from the comfort of the cushy chair. No object, no force, no-one could provide her the comfort she needed. She took four slow steps in Raman's direction before pulling his arm to turn him to face her. She raised her hand to slap the monster, the man who broken her trust, her faith, her friendship but besides those he had broken her strongest tool. Her heart. She had no reason to stop herself but still her broken heart was pure. She lowered her arm and Raman looked at her, surprised that she lowered her hand.

Raman leaned over and hugged her tight. He was silent and his eyes were his apology. His eyes, pleaded with every tear drop for Ishita to forgive his misdeeds and to secure the trust between them. Ishita was not in her kind mind anymore. Life was so unfair to her, she remains barren, old-fashioned, unloved. Ishita begins to think to herself "Ishita, some people have no reason to be cunning and manipulative, lekin, iss baht. You have excelled. Now Raman, you will dance to not sirf Shagun's tunes but the Madrasian music of Ishita Iyer." she smiles while Raman is squeezing forgiveness out of her. She pushes him away and tells him. "Raman, what is the need for this. We all know, you have no pyaar for me, no tora se tora space in your small heart for me. Haan pyaar ka dard, especially when it isn't there. No need to act, go and pack Ruhis things and meet me downstairs. Ruhi beta!" Ishita holds Ruhis hand looking at Raman and walks out looking back at all times, not breaking their eyelock until the door did so for them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap: Raman is packing Ruhi's things and sees a picture of him and Ishita on their wedding day. He cries.
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Great Start
Please continue soon
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OS: Forever IshRa - "We always have been, and forever shall be"
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Raman started to angrily pack the luggage, angrily yes, but slowly and carefully. He was confused. Who was the villain of the story? Who was the hero, the culprit or moreover. The loved or the lovers. He didn't know whether he was meant to be angry or sad or emotional. Enough was enough. This was their story now. He was the hero, the culprit and the villain. He was the loved and the lover. He would pull out all the stops to save their rishta.

Amongst his things he found a picture of IshRa on their wedding day and remembered. They were one. There is no IshRa without Raman and Ishita. It was high time for Raman. It wasn't him that brought this captured love, it was his heart, his gut impulse. They were always one through the tough times and when the tough got tougher the love must remain sturdy. He cried to himself. He didn't need Ishita's sparkling eyes to ask him a thousand questions. Because he was asking himself a thousand and one.

Ishita and Ruhi awaited Raman patiently. Ruhi was still startled from the havoc that wrecked their fun time and Ishita was lost in her own words. What was she doing? She wasn't evil and never sought for the devil to launch an attack on people's lives but what can she do. Raman was not treating her the way he seemed to be, he was fake! His love was a lie. He seemed loving on the outside and she was accepting that but on the inside he is a shrewd man. With only his point of view in mind.The rain struck down on them, with no mercy. The car was Raman being pelted with hail and the rain was no longer Shagun, but Ishita.
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OS: Forever IshRa: Without Shagun?
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Shagun entered furiously, her eyes seeming with rage and hatred for Ashok. She would be punished for sure. Ashok entered the house with Adi and threw the bags aside. He grabbed her defenceless face and her eyes glisten, but his remains filled with pools of hatred. Adi never let his mom be mistreated by anyone, not his biological dad and certainly not his mom's boyfriend. Adi shouted " leave my, mom!". Ashok pushed her on the bed and walked over to Adi, intimidatingly. He slapped him and the sound vibrated throughout all of Delhi. Adi cried and ran out of the house crying rivers. Shagun is about to chase after Adi when Ashok's long arm becomes her barricade. Her pushed her again and slapped her even harder. He was not taking any rubbish from anyone. "There is your 5 karat diamond, cow. You think you can play a game with me," he slapped her harder. She pushed him off and ran upstairs with him chasing her rapidly. There was no time for wrong turns. Ashok's yell shook the entire house. She ran taking impulsive turns, but it did not matter, it was her life. She knew there was an open patio door an took a risk she would either support or regret for the rest of her life, that would be changed forever now. She turned the corner to a short corridor with an open door. And her plan, succeeded. Ashok came running breathless and out the open door he went. He would never wake. Shagun would live with the guilt of manslaughter. But will it be found out. That did not matter to her, she would win back her Raman.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing updates
Shagun got to see her place
It was violent to see woman getting beaten up by a guy
Hope now raman doesn't accept her
and adi ohh what will he do now? Will he go to raman and plead to let his mom with him?? Hope not
Continue soon

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