OS- Challenges, Confessions, Realizations! UPDATED PART 3 pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all shakti Congo for becoming a Goldie 😊 amazing os, all the emotions u jotted so well together.. Kitne thappad maza aa gaya 🤣 in one of ur os ishu slapped adi here shagun 😆. .good laato ke bhoot baato se nahi mante 🤣 plz continue 😃 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: komsy7856

First of all shakti Congo for becoming a Goldie 😊 amazing os, all the emotions u jotted so well together.. Kitne thappad maza aa gaya 🤣 in one of ur os ishu slapped adi here shagun 😆. .good laato ke bhoot baato se nahi mante 🤣 plz continue 😃 👏


bwhahahha saari bhadaas nikaal rahi hu...

glad darling you liked it and thanks ... Raman babus talli convo bhi ... ek dum khud tali hoke likhungi ROFL...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Omg..its really awesome

Ek request...pls send this to the cvs too...i m tired of the crap we r subjected too since a week ...the accident track is pathetic now


woh log toh genius hain na humare likhat kya dekhenge yaari... shukr hai humare forum wasion ko toh pasand aayi meri ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Romanticfreak


woh log toh genius hain na humare likhat kya dekhenge yaari... shukr hai humare forum wasion ko toh pasand aayi meri ...

Pasand? I m toh ur fan? Woh bhi utnuuusa nahi bada sa
U write fab yaa..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hayeee i so wish aisa hotaaa
Even tho ruhi dialogues were daddi amma wale lol !!
But still
Continue pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
. Part -2
Raman steps forward asking All of you her???
Bala: Raman we couldn't believe all that we heard just now... All thanks to Ashok who challenged Ishita that you were saving shagun in all this but you know what she proudly sternly warned him not to challenge her trust in you but unfortunately she failed. You broke her trust ... Is this what you've understood Ishita??? Is she that sort of a woman who spoils a child's future??

Mihika: when accidentally i saw pathak taking to police guy of erasing footage, i informed the same to akka but she asked me to shut my mouth and asked me to leave saying even if god comes and says what ever Raman is doing ... Is to save shagun I will never believe but the way truth made its way to expose itself is too harsh and tough on akka now
Mihir: Shagun, what type of mother you are... You know your son did this accident and you were very much present in the same car fully drunk and encouraged him to drive a minor who doesn't hold any license gosh

Is this the discipline you give to your kid??? By getting drunk what principles you are giving to your son!!!
Shagun: oh pls mihir just stay out of this and its none of your business and getting dozed off is nothing a sin. I am a social lady so all this is quite common in social life at kitty parties and clubs and your behanji bhabhi will never be able to get to my status!!
Mihir: Oh yeah my Ishita bhabhi will land can never stoop to your dirty shameless status of being mistress to a man of money!! What great socialistic life are you leading shagun??? Do you even know how do those zo called ladies comment about you behind you??? Shit
While all this is happening... Raman Ishita just stand still looking in to each other... There are so many questions unanswered, so many explanations unsaid, so much hurt not yet healed... But its only tears that are left...
Ishita stays silent takes ruhi and leaves... All follows her while shagun Adi leave ...Raman left alone as a punished and lost child looking at his soul mate to take him with her...
Ishita comes crying inside the house uncontrollably while Mihir narrates all that happened. Toshiji tries to console but the hurt in Ishita doubled trippled incessantly never took the name of stopping...
Toshiji and Bhallaji asks mihir, Bala also to stay back and they oblige.
Every one are tensed as anytime Raman is expected and Ishita is hurt and no one knows what storm is awaiting iyyers and bhallas in full tension...
Outside the weather looks scary hinting something really serious wild winds with blows and heavy rain...
A car slams the mayur vihar gate dashing two youngsters riding bike... The door opens and with in no time all in the society comes out to look down from their respective balconies and Ishita is shocked looking downstairs only to find Raman completely drenched and hell drunk... Definitely not in control...watchman is trying to control Raman but its of no use... Ishita, simmi all are shocked looking at the scene... Ishita runs down to bring Raman upstairs...
Downstairs Raman- watchman
W: saab mere baat maaniye saab aap upar chod ata Hu aayie saab society Mein sab puchenge saab

Raman: eeeh Tu Tu kyu leke jayega mujhe upar Mein Mein Mein khud gir chuka Hu aapne nazron Mein aur sa sab ke nazrin mei yeh nahi Mein control me Hu... Control control Raman bhalla... Tu control hahahahahahah control naame ke cheez tujh Mein hai tsss woh woh shagun ke use Ki putli ho putli... Sala zindagi bhar wafadaar pati raha par phir bhi bewafai ka shikar bana hahaha lekin jab zindagi ne peeche mud ke muka di aur wafadaar patni di Tu nw kya kiya bewafai... Tujh Mein ayr ahagun Mein kya fark hai... Woh tumhare bharose ko tod ke chalu ashik ke saath aur Tu sala devi jaisi patni ke bharose ko tod tod ke use je dil ko chur chur karke... Bhaga picnic manaand ex biwi aur bete ke saath hahaha duniya walon ko dikha picnic lekin mujhe dikha ek badnaseeb baap ka dil Jo apne bete ke liye tadap ta hai...
Adi mere Adi ... Adiii huh huh ...crying uncontrollably
Ishita stands still looking at Raman who is breaking down ...
Raman: nahi nahi nahi Ishita aaj Tu Tu mujhe may roko...mein tumhare laayak nahi raha... Me me Mein galat Hu achc accha insaan nahi Hu ddooo dokhebaaz Hu Tu chali jao...
Ishita: Raman apne aap ko control jaro... Eh kya haal bana rakha hai aapne chaliye ghar jate hai Raman mere baat suno...
steps ahead to tale him
Raman : Nahi nahi Tu may choona mujhe... Meine kaha na nahi jana hai to nahi jaana hai bass mujhe akela chod do apne haal pe chalijao...
Ishita: beech radte Mein chodne leliye thodi hi shaadi Ki Maine ab bphit hogaya chaloye mere saath ...
Raman: Kyu tum mera saath dogi zindagi bhar ha?? Ish ishu ih sorry Ishita kya maaf karogi mujhe??? Bo bo boolona
Ishita: ab woh sa. Chodiye air chaliye pls Raman sab delh rage hai
Raman: dekhne do khud mazaak ban Gaya Hu Mein hahahahahahaah ooo huhuhuhhhuh mazaak ...
and says dekha tha ek khwaab kise ke saath
par kisi ne utaar Diya achepan Ka nakaab
Jo dekha tha woh apna hokar paraya hogati
aur Jo kabhi socha bhi na tha woh takdeer banke zindagi hui
eh silsila dilonka - par gumrah hoke phir wahi pe aalar khada kardi Par issbaar dil Mein woh nahi rahi lekin kisi titli aakar bass gayi... Kahu toh lafz kam padta hai lekin titli Ki achayi kabhi kam na honge...
aaj khuda se afar much mangu toh sirf titili ke haath aur wahi hogi jannat is bekaraae dil ka aur badbaseeb baap ka hahahahaa
listening to this Ishita understands his pain... Consoling him she
taking Raman she leaves upstairs
-To be continued
so, howz it friends pls hit like and care to share your views...
shakti
Edited by Romanticfreak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: yhmfever

Hayeee i so wish aisa hotaaa
Even tho ruhi dialogues were daddi amma wale lol !!
But still
Continue pls

hahahah thanks yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear sorry for typo errors...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res😉{I'll unres it soon}
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
realyy amazinggg!!! cant see raman in pain!!
continue kijiyee janab!! onscreen pe yeh sab nahi hoga! 100% guarantee.. jaise apne kaha story mein sahi! lol ;)

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