Hazaaron Khwaishein Aisi - An IshRa OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg aani...y u spoil us lik this?😆😆...IF ONLY things were shown lik this in show...bt its gonna never happen...😭😭😭


bt still i enjoyed readin it..!! thank u Aani for this awesome OS...i miss my happywala IshRa..!!

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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Hey Aani,

I am glad you wrote, its always a pleasure to read your take on the current tracks on the show!!!

And the title is MashaAllah!!!

Hey Lucky thank you for saying this from my fav writer on the forum that's a compliment 😳 and for the title - ah I love these lines

Here's the lines I liked the best :)

- " told her he is cutting down on his non-veg intake" aah the things people do 😉

😆 love makes us do all sorts of things look at Mihir he wore a pair of jeans 2 size short to please his beloved after all 😆

- "Watching the dream he once had materialized should make any man happy but it now occurs to him it is not important that whether or not your dreams are fulfilled but when they are and when they are not." this is so aptly put aani... Careful what you wish for, eh?😕

@bold - exactly... sometimes its for the best if sometimes your wishes remain just that - wishes... you don't know what you are asking for, you might just get it after all and then... then realize this isn't what you had in mind when you asked for it... like one of those stories about genies... be precise in your wishes... else you could be in for a hell of a surprise... I loved those as a child, esp the toon Aladdin, and rem this epi where Jaffar wanted powers beyond imagination, and became a genie himself - so he did get what he want, only he would be forced to do someone else' bidding to use that power... so that inspired the line 😳


I wasn't sure where you were going with the title, but the moment you wrote about him imagining the picture Ishita painted... By God, voila moment for me. The way she was innocently talking about hiring a bus and playing Antakshari on the way... You really cannot have it all, can you Raman? 😭

😳 yep you cannot have it all and in this case - the tile seemed apt since the wishes were clashing, and from both the ends - Raman and Ishita'... she wished for things when he spoke up and now he wishes for those things too, unfortunately his wishes in the present remain unfulfilled and the wishes he had in the past came to fruition, only now, now he has no way whatsoever to enjoy them.



- "He complains always she speaks too much but now in the white noise he finds himself in he longs to talk to her." beautifully written Aani👏

😳 I so want this to be shown on screen Raman musing he misses talking to her, esp now if she is about to give him some silent treatment with the way things will wreck havoc from him... I can see Raman feeling this - as much as he complains about her incessant chatter, he loves that. His home and room aren't a silent tomb nor a weep fest anymore courtesy her.

- "Let it be I changed my mind." this woman... she wanted to go to the pool only to show off her bikini to him and entice him!!! She is the object of every joke men make about women, and every sarcasm thats spewed at the female mind!😡

LOL one line and so much anger for Shagun! Wow, 😆😆 I am good 😎 😆😆 okay on a serious note, exactly what you said Lucky, she wanted to play seductress and women like her unfortunately exist. 🤢

- "She breaks the rule, if at all-only in case of emergencies when children or actors are involved." 😆you didn't have to explain in the next few lines... the word actors had me 🤣already

😆 what can I say I wanted to incorporate some humor which wasn't possible until I elaborated 😆

- " The guy is a looker totally his wife' type with a chiseled body and tall. " I have noticed your pattern of reminding Raman about his 'height' issues... its there in many of your stories... why are you making our Raman suffer like this. Jokes apart, that would be a very realistic thing to think about...😃

🤣 you feel sorry for him Lucky? Well right now he so deserves it 😈 besides like you said its only real - his wives - both ex and present have/had a thing for taller men 😆

- "Why couldn't his father' genes have worked on him too when it came to height he wonders they did on Romi and Simi after all. "😲 You WON'T believe when I say I was thinking about it yesterday... He seems to have inherited his height (and volatility) from Toshiji!!!


😲😛 Connect is all I can say! Hi5


- "I just did." Again Aani... I didnt have to read the next few lines to understand the impact of these 3 words. they touched me as much as they touched him!😛

aww thats so sweet of you to say Lucky

aaah Aani... I didn't expect that ending... It did bring me calmness. I would like things to go back to the way there were... with Raavan Kumars, Kucch Bhis and Dialogue writers in their conversations... My heart aches for the old Raman!!! "Koi Lauta de mere beete hue din"


@bold - tell me about it,, i want those days back too and glad you liked the ending, I wanted it to be low on drama 😳
WONDERFULLY DONE...⭐️

thanks once again 😃

and this time, I give you lines from the same poem... my favourite lines (along with the opening line of course). I hope you find the relevance to your story as I did...

"Magar likhwaaye koi usko khat, to hum se likhwaaye
Hui subah, aur ghar se kaan par rakh kar qalam nikle"


I actually didnt know these lines, just the verse I wrote, will search for this poem now thank you 😊😳
P.S: What a beginning to my Saturday...😛

glad to have been the reason 😳

Originally posted by: shalu79

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Originally posted by: Alu-

Aww😳

Nice work

Originally posted by: _Divya_

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