An IshRa 2shot- State of Flux (complete) - Page 2

Lovely writing UZ ...😳

Nicely writen ...
Loved it

Res.

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Uzma, this was SO beautiful!!! Very subtle with it being sensual but still very effective! The last few lines where they say 'bardaash nai hota'. Awww. Subtle yet beautiful! Nice to see the changes in length. 😉

I loved this piece, Uzma!!

brilliantly written! i loved it!!
haaye-so subtle yet so deep
loved it! pls write more

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

RES>... i CANNOT believe the length of this post !!! Is it really you Uz???


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and my favourite mirror-writer is back 😊 This one surely did have dialogues which is a bit unusual for you, but there was enough abstract all right.

Very deep, meaningful Uz. and I must say, long... I am amazed at how you incorporate feedback... i wont complain any more 😉

The passion and desire was so subtly written, but it had the same effect on me anyway!😉😆

Loved this one hun... and please keep them coming...👏

P.S: a LOVELY distraction from the current track!!!

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Awesome

Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-

Res.

Uz. 😳

Do you want thappads from KKG's.? 😳Rest kon lega? 😳

Anyways. Thappads cancel.😛🤣 Cz This OS was Awesome!!! Like Lucky said, a much needed distraction from the current track. :D

Originally posted by: whitelily

nice

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

Awesome!!!!! Loved it

Originally posted by: sai14

Uz 🤗I am so glad to see an OS from you especially after you made me wait for a week 😆

I love it. it is a very nice distraction from the current track and the way you described Ishu and Raman's feelings- brilliant. I love the massage idea both of them do need one after all this stress 😆

and yes like lucky said i am surprised at the length and i very proud that you listen to our feedback 😛